① 關於人物介紹的 英語作文
(一)人物簡介的寫作步驟
1. Birthday and birth place
2. Family background
3. Ecation
4. Big events in his or her life ( in order of time )
5. Evaluation
(二)人物簡介寫作中常用的片語及句子
1. Birthday and birth place ——was / were born on…in… ,
2. Family background ——
1) a poor / rich family
2) his (her) family was so poor that……,
3) with the help of his parents ,
4) his father was very strict with him……,
5) the son of a poor family ,
6) when he was a small boy ,
7) as a child ,
8) ring his (her) childhood ,
9) spend his childhood in……,
10) live a happy (hard ) life ,
11) a boy of 15
3. Ecation——
1) graate from……department of ……university ,
2) When at college , he majored in……,
3) receive a doctor』s degree .
4) get higher ecation
5) go abroad for further studies
4. Big events in his life——
1) be interested in … , 2) work hard at … , 3) devote his lifetime to … , 4) do research about / into … 5) make a big decision . make up one』s mind to do sth. 6) do sth with great determination and perseverance . 7) be fond of… , 8) be strict in sth. 9) have a … way of doing sth. 10) try one』s best to do sth. 11) encourage sb to do sth. 12) fight for , give up one』s life for sb / sth. 13) win a prize in … competi
ition . 14) be good at . 15) make rapid progress in … , 16) set a new world record of … 17) become a member of … 18) study hard . train hard . 19) win a gold medal . 20) work so hard as to improve… 21) have a gift for…
5. Evaluation——
1) one of the best (most important) … 2) set sb a good example . 3) a model teacher . 4) be respected by everyone . 5) sing high praise for… speak (think) highly of… 6) his hard work brought him great success . 7) his heroic story spread all over the city . 8) remember sb forever . 9) be honored as … 10) be famous as … , 11) be regarded as … , 12) become a world champion at … Championships . 13) He became famous for his new theory . 14) The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader . 15) Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit . 16) People spoke highly of him and all respected him .
6. 高考中描寫人常用表達方式
(1)介詞人物的姓名、出身
She was born in Poland on Nov. 7 , 1867 .
(她於1867年11月7日出生於波蘭。)
a great scientist with the name Einstein
(一個叫愛因斯坦的偉大科學家)
Abraham Lincoln , the son of a poor family , was born in Kentucky on February 12 , 1809 .
(亞伯拉汗•林肯,一個貧苦家庭的兒子,於1809年2月12日出生於肯他基州。)
Born of a poor clerk』s family . Charles Dickens had little schooling .
(出生在一個貧困的小職員家庭中,查兒斯•狄更生接受了很少學校教育)
(2)描述人物外貌和性格特徵的常用詞語
good - looking (長得好看的) funny - looking (長相滑稽的)
ugly - loking (長得難看的) ordinary looking (長相一般的)
white - haired (白頭發的) warm - hearted (熱心腸的)
kind - hearted(好心的) absent - minded (心不在焉的)
bad - tempered (脾氣不好的) near - sighted (近視眼的)
far - sighted (遠視的) tall (個高的)
short (個矮的) pretty (漂亮的)
naughty (淘氣的) lovely (可愛的)
easy - going (溫和寬容的) smart (精明的)
wise (明智的) bright (聰明的)
diligent (勤奮的) lazy (懶惰的)
clever (聰明的) healthy (健康的)
humorous (幽默的) funny (滑稽的)
silent (沉默的) attractive (有吸引力的)
talkative (多話的)
(3)表達人物興趣和愛好的常用片語或短語
like … very much (非常喜歡…) love (喜愛)
be interested in (對…感興趣)
be fond of (喜歡…)
hate (憎恨)
be tired of (對…厭倦)
be crazy about (對…極度喜歡)
enjoy (喜歡…)
lose interest in (對…失去興趣)
(4)描述人物心情的常用詞語:
sad (難過的) happy (高興的)
excited (興奮的) pleased (高興的)
satisfied (滿意的) angry (生氣的)
worried (擔心的) disappointed (失望的)
terrified (恐懼的) friendly (友好的)
anxious (焦慮的) curious (好奇的)
eager (急切的)
(三)實例分析
1. 說明:
上海出版的《學生英文報》,對象是我國的學生,請用英語為該報寫一段人物介紹,介紹少年體育明星孫淑偉。內容要點如下:
1)簡況:孫淑偉(Sun Shuwei):男,14歲,廣東人(Guangdong)
2)訓練項目:跳水(diving)
3)取得成績:第十一屆亞運會冠軍,第六屆世界游泳錦標賽冠軍(亞運會:the Asia Games 冠軍:Champion 游泳錦標賽:Swimming Championships)
4)其他情況:從小就喜歡游泳,8歲進廣東省跳水隊;在學校里認真學習,在跳水隊時認真訓練,13歲進入國家隊,一年後(1990)奪得十一屆亞運會金牌;今年年初獲第六屆游泳錦標賽冠軍。
注意:
1)要有標題。
2)介紹須包括所有內容要點,但不要逐條譯成英語。
3)介紹的長度為80~120個詞。
2. 題解:
這是一篇人物報道,根據所提供的材料組織文章。首先應確定標題。如:Sun Shuwei - A World Champion in Diving . 其次應介紹人物的姓名、性別、年齡、籍貫,隨後介紹他的成長過程,最後介紹他取得的成就。
3. 91高考書面表達範文:
Sun Shuwei - A World Champion in Diving
Sun Shuwei , a world champion in diving , is a boy of 14 from Guangdong . He loved swimming when he was a small boy and at eight he became a member of the diving team in Guangdong Province . He studied hard at school and trained hard for five years before he came to the national team . A year later in 1990 , he won a gold medal at the 11th Asia Games and became a world champion at the 6th world Swimming Championships early this years .
② 初中英語作文《人物描寫》
你可以參考下仁愛英語七年級上冊的第二單元,那單元的重點就是人版物描寫。下面是權我自己寫的,水平有限哈,僅供參考。Tony is my good friend.He is a nice boy.He has a round face,like a apple.And his eyes are big and bright.He has a small nose.But his mouth is very wide.We are in the same class,and he is the tallest boy in our class.He likes playing basketball very much,so do I.So we often play basketball together after class.I hope we can be good friends forever.
③ 初中英語介紹人物 作文
示範作文如下:
Hi, everbody! Let's welcome a new student to our class! Look, this is Jenny Brown, the new student. She is twelve years old. She comes from England. She can dance well because she likes dancing very much. She only knows a little Chinese, so she need your help. We may learn from each other and help each other. Her telephone number is 535-2375. Do you have any questions to ask her? ...
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④ 如何用過程性寫作的方法進行初中英語寫作教學
創造一個快樂、高效的英語寫作課堂,一直是廣大英語教師所關注的問題。過程性寫作教學流程分四階段:寫前准備階段(prewriting),寫作階段(composing/drafting),修改階段(revising),編輯階段(editing)。
(一)寫前准備階段(pre-writing)
這個過程有時伴隨著閱讀資料和調查人物及分組討論的活動,作者要對題目進行探索,調動自己原有知識並認識自己的缺口和不足, 從而吸納新的知識,從而在活動中深化主題,聚集素材,打好腹稿,為下一步寫作做好准備。此階段通常分兩步進行,即「熱身活動」與閱讀欣賞範文活動。
1.「熱身活動」。
「熱身」時,師可採取一些激活學生思維的策略與技巧,在知識和情意上為學生寫作做好鋪墊。常見的方法有頭腦風暴法(brain storming)、集束法(clustering)、快速自由寫作法(rapid freewriting)、「5W1H」提問法(questioning)等。
(1)頭腦風暴法
頭腦風暴法: 即全體組員將所有與主題(topic)相關的觀點和盤托出, 不必考慮流露出的思想正誤與否。先從具體、熟悉的信息源入手,然後轉向抽象、陌生的信息源。如: 要讓學生寫Should students beallowed to use mobile phone? 可以讓學生以頭腦風暴的形式討論what can mobile phone do for you? 鼓勵他們表達自己的觀點,下一步的寫作訓練理清思路,列出提綱。
(2)快速自由寫作
要求每位學生在一兩分鍾內自由而快速地寫下與主題有關的單詞和短語。對時間加以限制,目的在於促使學生的大腦快速運轉和思維。如:讓學生介紹一個熟悉的人。可以問:Who do you like to writeabout? What do you like to write about? 要求每位學生在一兩分鍾內自由而快速地寫下與這個人物介紹有關的單詞和短語。比如hobby,appearance,personality,habits 等,並能夠就每個方面寫一兩句,並給以及時的鼓勵。
(3)集束法
即以主題為主軸, 將與之相關的詞彙綴集在一起。這是一種簡單而有效的方法。因為「可視詞彙」可以刺激學生的「聯想流」,這對那些有話說不出的學生來說極為奏效。如:讓學生寫school rules,可以以school rules 為主軸來提供與之相關的詞彙。比如:school uniform,in class,homework,in the library,classmates,然後讓學生由單詞聯想相關的規則。
(4)「5W1H」提問法
即要求學生根據主題就who,what,where,when,why,how 等進行提問。問題的大小詳略視需要而定,不能千篇一律。如:讓學生an unforgettabletrip 就可以圍繞這么五個問題:Who did you gowith? What did you do there? Where did you go?When did leave? Why did you go there? How did you go there? 讓學生把這些問題串在一起就是一篇短文。
除了以上所述四種技巧外,還可藉助多媒體(如印刷物、電腦、錄像和影視)、人物專訪、談話、考察和問卷等手段搜集素材。如果在寫作前准備階段給學生提供較多獲取信息或材料的途徑,他們就會表現出更高的積極性、主動性和創造性。
2.閱讀欣賞範文。
先讀後寫,為發揮「範文」的「示範」作用,不能滿足於對文章內容和形式的一般掌握,而是要深入理解文章表達的思想內容以及謀篇布局,寫作手法和技巧。然後讓學生運用範文的框架,寫出自己所要表達的內容。
(二)寫作階段
寫作階段是學生獨立把自己的思想用語言完整地表達出來的過程。教師最好結合課堂活動和具體的寫作話題,當堂找出寫作的切人點,列出提綱。若有可能可即時進行口頭作文。另外,還要提醒學生需注意的問題,為其提供必要的語言素材。例如,教師可針對本次寫作的具體內容,給出一些相關詞彙(如:寫作常見的表示啟、承、轉、合的習慣用語和套話)並配合圖片和示例。這樣,在實施寫作的過程中,學生多多少少會有一些信手拈來的成就感。
(三)修改階段
1.自我糾錯:制定基本批改標准
在一開始讓學生寫短文,就制定評分標准,並讓學生熟知這個標准:①作文長度100-120單詞;②作文結構:是否有開頭與結尾;③作文內容;是否覆蓋所有要求的要點;④語言表達:是否運用豐富的詞彙與句型結構;⑤語法:是否有語法錯誤;⑥書寫規范:注意拼寫、大小寫符號、標點。
比如, 在模仿上述案例中的範文寫一篇My favorite school day 的小短文,就可以針對欣賞範文中總結的三點寫作特點確定修改的標准: ①是否有主題句;②是否按時間先後順序寫;③是否添加豐富內容的句子。
2.組內互改。
教師輪流與每個小組一起重點討論一篇文章。分組時宜將好、中、差生混合編排,以便學生互評互學。評價活動中通過對他人文章的評論,強化寫作知識,發現他人的長處與不足,便於在自己的作文中借鑒,從而提高寫作能力。
3.教師點評。
教師利用實物投影儀或黑板選擇不同層次代表性的文章或句子當堂點評。點評時,教師要先讓學生找出這篇短文「閃光點」, 打開寫作的情感關,再讓學生找出文章的欠缺之處。標出精彩的詞、句、思想的亮點等可以激發學生的進取精神,增強學生學習英語的動力。
(四)編輯階段(editing)
編輯階段是寫作的最後整理和潤色階段,指學生在多次反饋、自我反思的基礎上,對文稿進行反復修改最終成稿的過程。在此階段,教師可選擇優秀習作列印上作者的名字並利用投影或張貼方式呈現給全體同學,以表示對習作作者的鼓勵和為其他同學提供學習借鑒,也可以選擇每位學生最好的一句合成一篇範文供大家互相學習參考。
實踐證明:「過程寫作法」有助於充分發掘學生的積極性,有利於閱讀以及聽說能力的培養,養成良好的語言學習習慣;「過程寫作法」重視學生的寫作過程,鼓勵學生在不斷地修改練習中進步提高,有利於樹立學生的自信;「過程寫作法」將寫作過程視為一個循環往復的、復雜的心理認知、思維創造和社會交際過程,符合寫作教學的實質,能夠有效地提高學生的寫作水平。
⑤ 急求關於人物描寫的初中英語作文,最好是名著里的,詞彙適於初中閱讀,謝謝哈!
你可以參考下復仁愛英語七年級上冊的制第二單元,那單元的重點就是人物描寫。下面是我自己寫的,水平有限哈,僅供參考。Tony is my good friend.He is a nice boy.He has a round face,like a apple.And his eyes are big and bright.He has a small nose.But his mouth is very wide.We are in the same class,and he is the tallest boy in our class.He likes playing basketball very much,so do I.So we often play basketball together after class.I hope we can be good friends forever.
⑥ 求一篇介紹人物的英語作文,要求文筆為初中水平
...現在初中作文這么難,詞彙我都不認回識。大概是答He is MoJun,borns on july 30th 1980 in hunan province.He works as a famous writer 、planner and publisher ....
⑦ 初中英語作文範文20篇。謝謝
【篇一】
Two days ago, a heavy snow came. And now, the snow stopped and it』s time for fun. This morning, I go to outside door and make snowman with my friends. We prepare some tools and then we start. We did it many times before, so it』s easy. We pull snow together and shape it. Last, we make a face for it, eyes, nose, ears and mouth. It』s very funny and we are happy.
前兩天,一場大雪來了。現在,雪停了,是玩的時候了它。今天早上,我走出門外,和我的朋友一起堆雪人。我們准備了一些工具,然後我們就開始了。我們以前做過很多次了,所以很容易。我們把雪弄在一起和做成形狀。最後,我們做出了一個臉,眼睛,鼻子,耳朵和嘴。這是非常有趣的,我們是快樂的。
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⑧ 寫一篇關於人物介紹的英語作文。(初中)
希望您能採納
LEO SMITH 是我最好的朋友和同學。現在讓我向大家介紹一下。他和我一樣大,今年已經歲了。他是外國人。他來自美國。所以他的英語特棒。真羨慕他!除了英語,他最喜歡美術和體育了。而且他學得很好。在上學的時候,他常常去游泳和working。而在星期六的時候他就開派對,在星期天的時候,他就習慣一個人在家看電視了。哈哈!他挺幽默的,常常都我們笑個不停,這就是了哦Leo Smith。
LEO SMITH is my best friend and classmate. Let me introce to you. He,has been 15 years old.me ,too。 He is a foreigner. He came from America . So he's English wonderfully. I really envy him! In addition to English, his favorite art and sport of. And he learned well. In school, he often went swimming and working. In Saturday when he was a party, in the Sunday, he got used to a person at home watching TV. Haha! He is kind of humorous, and often let we laugh, this is Leo Smith.
⑨ 求一初中人物描寫英語作文!字數要多!
My father is a gentle man
My father has small eyes,Wear a pair of glasses,looking more gently,the daddy's hair are not many, he said "the intelligent head does not grow hair", does the management, but daddy usually ever not talk bureaucratically to others, therefore his personal connection is specially good,is the same as me.daddy speaks always extremely temperately,never say hit the person,curse at people are also few,calculated scolded people not to be big, although sometimes also can be angry for a longtime,but just only about one day,could no surpass in one day-long.
He usually ecate me that the person must to be honestly,friendly to other,and working diligently.
This is my father, I love him forever