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初三英語寫作出現的問題

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㈠ 初三英語作文。 環境保護 內容 1、我們面臨那些環境問題 2、環境問題對我們有什麼影響 3、在生活

望採納,謝謝。
There are still many problems of environmental protection in recent years.One of the most serious problems is the serious pollution of air, water and soil.the polluted air does great harm to people』s health.The polluted water causes diseases and death.What is more, vegetation had been greatly reced with the rapid growth of modern cities.
目前環保還存在著許多問題。最嚴重的問題就是空氣、水和土壤的嚴重污染。污染的空氣對人類的健康十分有害。污染的水引起疼病,造成死亡。更有甚者,隨著現代社會的迅速擴建,植被大大的減少。
To protect the environment, governments of many countries have done a lot.Legislative steps have been introced to control air pollution, to protect the forest and sea resources and to stop any environmental pollution.Therefore, governments are playing the most important role in the environmental protection today.
為了保護環境,各國政府做了大量的工作。採用了立法措施控制大氣污染,保護森林資源和海洋資源,制止任何環境污染。因此,在當今的環保中政府起著最重要的作用。
In my opinion, to protect environment, the government must take even more concrete measures.First, it should let people fully realize the importance of environmental protection through ecation.Second, much more efforts should be made to put the population planning policy into practice, because more people means more people means more pollution.Finally, those who destroy the environment intentionally should be severely punished.We should let them know that destroying environment means destroying mankind themselves.
我的看法是,為了保護環境,政府應當採取更具體的措施。首先,應當通過教育的方法使人們充分謒到環境保護的重要性。第二,應更加努力把計劃生育政策付諸實施,因為人口多就意味著污染嚴重。最後,要嚴懲那些故意破壞環境者。使他們破壞環境就是毀滅人類自己。

㈡ [初三英語]自己寫的作文,求英語好的幫我看看這篇作文有什麼問題,有什麼需要改進的

以下個人觀點:

  1. Nowadays ,many people live without sport so that harmful of their health.可以在harmful前加it's.

  2. do some sports can make you more and more healthy ,stronger and stronger .Do要大寫,而且最好改成Doing(動名詞作主語,動詞原形作主語的句子為祈使句在此不適合.),more and more 前面可以加become.兩個越來越(more and more, stronger and stronger)建議將其中一個改為原級.(Doing some sports can make you become more and more healthy and strong.)

  3. if you can keep it up,so you needn't worry about your health problems because you will have a good body.(句子大寫自己注意不多說)建議刪去so,因為上下句好像沒有因果關系.

  4. I often run in the park because I enjoy it very much.建議加一句for the other hand, it can build me up as well.(從另一方面來說,它也能增強我的體質)。

  5. I ran more than six kilometres. more than可以改成over,然後在over前加for(I ran for over six kilometers.)

  6. I felt very tried but I was happy too because I realized my leg was stronger and stronger.建議改成I felt pretty tired but I was glad to finish such a great work, and I also felt my legs which were more and more powerful.

  7. I was tired but I felt comfortable.可改為I was extremely tired but I felt comfortable.

  8. 上句後可加這么一句:I kept running for a long time, after that I found my body was healthier than before surprisingly. At that time, I realized the importance of exercising. It makes me keep doing exercise until now.

  9. stick sport 什麼表達法。。。

  10. so I love sport so much and I'm planning to be a winter Olympics volunteer.這句建議刪掉

  11. 結尾最後加一句:In short, how healthy you are depends on how much exercise you do, so let's do more exercise!

    以上是句子方面,下面是排版方面:

    1.In my opinion直到第一段結束的內容可作為新一段

    2.其他你去想吧我想不出來了。。。

    最後一點,能不能發個作文題目。。。

㈢ 初三英語作文 介紹你學英語的歷程,包括遇到的困難,所採取的方法及效果如何《80詞》

Two years ago when I began to learn English, I found it was hard for me to remember all the new words and so I didn't understand the listening exercises. My teacher gave me advice to try to learn at least ten new words every day and listen to the tape and radio programmes. So I kept on doing these and now I have made lots of progress in listening. Besides the listening problem I also had problems with speaking.I tried to get involved in English activities, such as,attend English debbates and speech contests,ask and answer at least two questions every English class,watch English movies and so on. Now I become more confident and I can speak English well.

㈣ 求一篇初三英語作文面對生活中的困難怎樣克服

「trouble is a friend」was from lenka's song.but now trouble was not a friend.it's was an enemy for the most of people.but we are both overlook a important truth.trouble&problem is can make our heart stable when we meet trouble.and we will be firmer and firmer.a good person never be afraid .so they can fight with trouble,專and the end of success always comes they 。屬no trouble will cannot get over .get it over or falling his feet. be brave.when you meet trouble,the life will be Paradise

㈤ 初三英語寫作

promoting good health goes beyond habits, it involves life styles. If you change your life style to healthy living, you will not need to worry about quit smoking, over inlging when at the dinner table, that these things will already be a part of your healthy lifestyle.

The is the train of thought that a person has to give up so much to live a healthy lifestyle, but with a healthy life style, a person can eat good and it will be healthy and promote a healthy weight, a person can have fun and not have to get drunk to acoomplish that and can remember the fun they had.

In looking for a partner with a healthy life style will help us keep our healthy life style.

㈥ 英語寫作上的一些問題

provided the fact that ……
for the sake of
e to
in accordance with
...

常用源的片語都是在閱讀理解中,你自己多讀閱讀理解,把片語劃下來看啊。

㈦ 初三英語作文的一個小問題 不是寫作文 在線等 快


Computers are very usefu for us.they can provide a faster way for us to find things we need.It is convinient and quickly.We can also relax ourselves.On the other hand,we can also learn many things on the computers.To be honest,I think they are really our best friends.

We can use it as a chatting tool to talk with our friends.We can play computer games.

㈧ 中考英語作文問題

1. 開頭萬能公式一:名人名言

有人問了,「我沒有記住名言,怎麼辦?尤其是英語名言?」,很好辦:編!

原理:我們看到的東西很多都是創造出來的,包括我們欣賞的文章也是,所以盡管編,但是一定要聽起來很有道理呦!而且沒准將來我們就是名人呢!對吧?

經典句型:

A proberb says, 「 You are only young once.」 (適用於已記住的名言)

It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (適用於自編名言)

更多經典句型:

As everyone knows, No one can deny that…

2. 開頭萬能公式二:數字統計

原理:要想更有說服力,就應該用實際的數字來說明。

原則上在議論文當中十不應該出現虛假數字的,可是在考試的時候哪管那三七二十一,但編無妨,只要我有東西寫就萬事大吉了。所以不妨試用下面的句型:

According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graation.

看起來這個數字文鄒鄒的,其實都是編造出來的,下面隨便幾個題目我們都可以這樣編造:

Honesty

根據最近的一項統計調查顯示,大學生向老師請假的理由當中78%都是假的。

Travel by Bike

根據最近的一項統計調查顯示,85%的人在近距離旅行的時候首選的交通工具是自行車。

Youth

根據最近的一項統計調查顯示,在某個大學,學生的課余時間的70%都是在休閑娛樂。

Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?

根據最近的一項統計調查顯示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。

更多句型:

A recent statistics shows that …

寫作絕招

結尾萬能公式:

1. 結尾萬能公式一:如此結論

說完了,畢竟要歸納一番,相信各位都有這樣的經歷,領導長篇大論,到最後終於冒出個「總而言之」之類的話,我們馬上停止開小差,等待領導說結束語。也就是說,開頭很好,也必然要有一個精彩的結尾,讓讀者眼前一亮,這樣,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:

Obviously(此為過渡短語), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.

如果讀者很難「顯而見之」,但說無妨,就當讀者的眼光太淺罷了!

更多過渡短語:

to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus

更多句型:

Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…

2. 結尾萬能公式二:如此建議

如果說「如此結論」是結尾最沒用的廢話,那麼「如此建議」應該是最有價值的廢話了,因為這里雖然也是廢話,但是卻用了一個很經典的虛擬語氣的句型。拽!

Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.

這里的虛擬語氣用得很經典,因為考官本來經常考這個句型,而如果我們自己寫出來,你說考官會怎麼想呢?

更多句型:

Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.

Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.

寫作絕招

寫作的「七項基本原則」:

一、 長 短 句原則

工作還得一張一馳呢,老讓讀者讀長句,累死人!寫一個短小精闢的句子,相反,卻可以起到畫龍點睛的作用。而且如果我們把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主題:

Asa creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet theprimary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectualneed of mind, they are in a way quite similar.

如此可見,長短句結合,抑揚頓挫,豈不爽哉?牢記!

強烈建議:在文章第一段(開頭)用一長一短,且先長後短;在文章主體部分,要先用一個短句解釋主要意思,然後在闡述幾個要點的時候採用先短後長的句群形式,定會讓主體部分妙筆生輝!文章結尾一般用一長一短就可以了。

二、 主 題 句原則

國有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否則會給人造成「群龍無首」之感!相信各位讀過一些破爛文學,故意把主體隱藏在文章之內,結果造成我們稀里糊塗!不知所雲!所以奉勸各位一定要寫一個主題句,放在文章的開頭(保險型)或者結尾,讓讀者一目瞭然,必會平安無事!

特別提示:隱藏主體句可是要冒險的!

To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主題句). Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.

三、 一 二 三原則

領導講話總是第一部分、第一點、第二點、第三點、第二部分、第一點… 如此羅嗦。可畢竟還是條理清楚。考官們看文章也必然要通過這些關鍵性的「標簽」來判定你的文章是否結構清楚,條理自然。破解方法很簡單,只要把下面任何一組的詞彙加入到你的幾個要點前就清楚了。

1)first, second, third, last(不推薦,原因:俗)

2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推薦,原因:俗)

3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推薦,原因:俗)

4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推薦,原因:俗)

5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(強烈推薦)

6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(強烈推薦)

7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(強烈推薦)

8)most important of all, moreover, finally

9)on the one hand, on the other hand(適用於兩點的情況)

10)for one thing, for another thing(適用於兩點的情況)

建議:不僅僅在寫作中注意,平時說話的時候也應該條理清楚!

四、 短語優先原則

寫作時,尤其是在考試時,如果使用短語,有兩個好處:其一、用短語會使文章增加亮點,如果老師們看到你的文章太簡單,看不到一個自己不認識的短語,必然會看你低一等。相反,如果發現亮點—精彩的短語,那麼你的文章定會得高分了。其二、關鍵時刻思維短路,只有湊字數,怎麼辦?用短語是一個辦法!比如:

I cannot bear it.

可以用短語表達:I cannot put up with it.

I want it.

可以用短語表達:I am looking forward to it.

這樣字數明顯增加,表達也更准確。

五、 多實少虛原則

原因很簡單,寫文章還是應該寫一些實際的東西,不要空話連篇。這就要求一定要多用實詞,少用虛詞。我這里所說的虛詞就是指那些比較大的詞。比如我們說一個很好的時候,不應該之說nice這樣空洞的詞,應該使用一些諸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之類的形象詞。再比如:

走出房間,general的詞是:walk out of the room

但是小偷走出房間應該說:slip out of the room

小姐走出房間應該說:sail out of the room

小孩走出房間應該說:dance out of the room

老人走出房間應該說:stagger out of the room

所以多用實詞,少用虛詞,文章將會大放異彩!

六、 多變句式原則

1)加法(串聯)

都希望寫下很長的句子,像個老外似的,可就是怕寫錯,怎麼辦,最保險的寫長句的方法就是這些,可以在任何句子之間加and, 但最好是前後的句子又先後關系或者並列關系。比如說:

I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.

如果是二者並列的,我們可以用一個超級句式:

Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.

其它的短語可以用:

besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover

2)轉折(拐彎抹角)

批評某人缺點的時候,我們總習慣先拐彎抹角說說他的優點,然後轉入正題,再說缺點,這種方式雖然陰險了點,可畢竟還比較容易讓人接受。所以呢,我們說話的時候,只要在要點之前先來點廢話,注意二者之間用個專這次就夠了。

The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.

The coat was thin, but it was warm.

更多的短語:

despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding

3)因果(so, so, so)

昨天在街上我看到了一個女孩,然後我主動搭訕,然後我們去咖啡廳,然後我們認識了,然後我們成為了朋友…可見,講故事的時候我們總要追求先後順序,先什麼,後什麼,所以然後這個詞就變得很常見了。其實這個詞表示的是先後或因果關系!

The snow began to fall, so we went home.

更多短語:

then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that

4)失衡句(頭重腳輕,或者頭輕腳重)

有些人腦袋大,身體小,或者有些人腦袋小,身體大,雖然我們不希望長成這個樣子,可如果真的是這樣了,也就必然會吸引別人的注意力。文章中如果出現這樣的句子,就更會讓考官看到你的句子與眾不同。其實就是主語從句,表語從句,賓語從句的變形。

舉例:This is what I can do.

Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.

同樣主語、賓語、表語可以改成如下的復雜成分:

When to go, Why he goes away…

5)附加(多此一舉)

如果有了老婆,總會遇到這樣的情況,當你再講某個人的時候,她會插一句說,我昨天見過他;或者說,就是某某某,如果把老婆的話插入到我們的話裡面,那就是定語從句和同位語從句或者是插入語。

The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.

I don』t enjoy that book you are reading.

Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.

其實很簡單,同位語--要解釋的東西刪除後不影響整個句子的構成;定語從句—借用之前的關鍵詞並且用其重新組成一個句子插入其中,但是whom or that 關鍵詞必須要緊跟在先行詞之前。

6)排比(排山倒海句)

文學作品中最吸引人的地方莫過於此,如果非要讓你的文章更加精彩的話,那麼我希望你引用一個個的排比句,一個個得對偶句,一個個的不定式,一個個地詞,一個個的短語,如此表達將會使文章有排山倒海之勢!

Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.

Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.

We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (氣勢恢宏)

要想寫出如此氣勢恢宏的句子非用排比不可!

七、 挑戰極限原則

既然十挑戰極限,必然是比較難的,但是並非不可攀!

原理:在學生的文章中,很少發現諸如獨立主格的句子,其實也很簡單,只要花上5分鍾的時間看看就可以領會,它就是分詞的一種特殊形式,分詞要求主語一致,而獨立主格則不然。比如:

The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.

Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.

如果您可一些出這樣的句子,不得高分才怪!

寫作絕招

文章主體段落三大殺手鐧:

一、舉實例

思維短路,舉實例!提出一個觀點,舉實例!提出一個方案,舉實例!而且者也是我們揭示一個觀點最好的方式,任何情況下,只要我們無法繼續文章,不管三七二十一,盡管舉例子!

Inorder to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted everypossible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light,colours, cartoon films and human performance. For instance, toadvertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress tosit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fimehim or her.rast

更多句型:

To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example

二、做比較

方法:寫完一個要點,比較與之相似的;又寫完一個要點,再比較與之相反的;

世界上沒有同樣的指紋,沒有相同的樹葉,文章亦同,只有通過比較,你才會發現二者的相同點(through comparison)和不同點(through contrast)。下面是一些短語:

相似的比較:

in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner

相反的比較:

on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, …

這個對 compare and contrast 題型很有用

三、換言之

沒話說了,可以換一句話再說,讓你的文章在多一些字,或者文鄒鄒地說,是讓讀者更充分的理解你的觀點。

實際就是重復重復再重復!下面的句子實際上就三個字 I love you!

I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.

I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you.

或者上面我們舉過的例子:

I cannot bear it.

可以用短語表達:I cannot put up with it.

因此可以這樣說:I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.

更多短語:

in more difficult language, in simpler

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