A. 英語作文修改，主要在句子文章結構和語法上，更高級一點。（電腦自動評分，應付電腦就行）
改了改當中不太對的地方
When facing work, we may have such a question--why we work. Some people think that work is to earn a living. Nonetheless, the rich are still working. So, I think we work to realize our self-value and prove ourselves fundamentally.
For one thing, work makes us valuable to society. When we work, we can not only support our families, but also create social value. In addition, we also benefit others at the same time. And finally we gain the inner validation.
For another thing, work gives us a chance to prove our abilities. If we do a good job, we are telling others that we have strong ability and others will approve and respect us, which means that we gain the endorsement of others.
No matter waht inner validation or endorsement of others is, they are all for proving our existence is meaningful. So everyone ought to try his best to make contributions to the society positively.
B. 英文寫作中常用的基本句式有哪些
上面各位的回答都不錯，我給你找的是專門針對考研用的，因為看你的年紀應該不是為了考四六級這么簡單了吧。
寫作是語言的重要環節，看看英語考試中對作文的重視就明白了。在考研中，寫作意義極其重大，其性價比（即投入的時間和提高的幅度）非常高，在我看來，如果你的閱讀水平還可以的話，寫作將是你的突破口。
提高寫作只有一個字——「恆」，絕對的熟能生巧。我在網上看過高手寫的文章，簡直可以用恐怖來形容，完全是閱讀理解的水平，而作者的訣竅就是每天寫每天練！只要不斷的寫不斷的改，你的文章會讓你自己吃驚。套用一句：寫作恆久遠，練習永流傳。
然而備考的時間是很緊的，不可能每天保持大量的練習，好在其要求也不高，從現在開始，到考前完全可以達到要求，但千萬不要間斷！很多同學都有一個情況，越不寫，越怕寫；越怕寫，越不寫。萬事開頭難，所以開始的練習尤為重要，而練習應以詞句為主+閱讀好文章，我就有一本記錄本，專門收集好的詞句，效果很好。這里列其中一些較簡單實用的，希望能對大家有所幫助（不過，建議同學們最好自己寫，自己收集，印象會深很多，每天花10分鍾過過，絕對值得。另外，我列的句子很有限，多半是骨架，大家要學會擴展，並且在記憶的時候多聯想一下。舉例來說，一篇你的文章，用心改一下，好好套用幾個句式，改些檔次較高的詞和片語，可以提高不少哦）：
一． 總結句型
1) ***in general/above all/with the result that/as a
result/consequently, ***
2) As far as I am concerned/as for me, ***
3) This truth above seems to be self-evident.
4) Whether we examine the ***above, such things can happens anywhere anytime to anyone.
5) In my point of view, I like/prefer A much more than B.
6) I still prefer A, however, for they teach me not only to be ***but also to be*** ，both in ***and in***.
7) There is no doubt that***
8) In order to make our world a better place in which to live we should efforts to***
9) To a large extent, ***, therefore, reflects***
10) If all above mentioned measures are achieved, ***
11) Wherever you are and whatever you do, ***is always meaningful.
12) So clear/evident/obvious it is that there are quite different opinions on it.
13) Now, which one do you prefer-----the one***or the one***? Were it left to me to select, I should not hesitated a moment to choose the former/latter.
二． 開首句型
1) Have you ever gone***? Have you ever been to***? If you have no
experience like these, your life is an inadequate one.
2) Are you***? Are you***? We are, usually.
3) In large part as a consequence of***, somebody have focused a great deal of attention in recent years on something.
4) We expect the day will come when A with its characteristic of***
5) Being adj. is one of the virtues that people must possess (not only in***but also in***/ring***/when***)
6) What A to B, that C to D
7) Currently, there is a widespread/serious concern over that***
8) The reasons for the***are manifold, for instance, ***
9) Several factors contribute to this***, such as***, as for as I』m concerned, however, ***is the most significant ingredient/element.
10) ***is more violent than what we thought it should be before.
11) There are intimate relations between the two.
三． 並列句型
1) Some people like A e to***. However, there are many young people, including me, especially like B.
2) There might be two reasons, I think***, for the change.
3) A and B are both important, they are attribute which are equally necessary for a person to achieve success in his life.
4) Different people have different attitudes towards***, some believe that***others, however, argue that***still others maintain that***
5) First***besides, in addition***what』s more***
6) For one thing***nevertheless, for another***
四． 轉折句型
1)***Such defects as mentioned above can be prevented by the other way of ***
2) Except for ***』s sake only.
3) Perhaps A is the wrong word, however, B might be better.
4) First***last but not least***
5) Shall we do this? Not necessary the case.
6) ***, and vice versa indeed .
7) On the contrary, in spite of these increase***
8) Compared with A, B has many advantages such as***
9) Not so much*** as he had talked about.
10) ***, the truth of the matter, however, is that***
11) For some, the way maybe right, nevertheless, for many others***
12) As everything going to the extreme has its negative aspects, so has***
13) It is fairly well know that***however, it is less know that***
14) ***, but this was not always the case.
15) At first, ***different in their opinions, on second thoughts, however, all of them agree to***
16) None the less(盡管如此)***
17) When people succeed, it is because of hard work, however, luck has a lot to do with it too.
18) ***, sometimes it isn』t totally the case, however.
19) Do some A else but B.
五． 名理句型
1) It is usually the case that ***
2) It is plain common sense---the more/less***the more/less***
3) The serious reality had taught us a lesson
: not being environment friendly will be avenged mercilessly.
4) As a proverb says/as is known to all/as a popular saying goes, ***
5) I can think of no better illustration than an English poem/adage which goes like this:***
6) The old story of***can serve as a good illustration that***
六． 強調句型
1) With/e to/spurred by***we can certainly cope with any task we are faced with, that is, ***
2) The reason why***is no other than***as I know.
3) The same thing is true with***
4) What I want to point out is that, for a person who wants to be successful in life and to be useful in society, he will have to learn to be both A and B.
5) What a wonderful picture? Especially for we students always swimming in the sea of books!
6) It』s high time that immediate measures were taken to better the strength and face the challenges.
7) Before everything else, ***is the secret of success.
七． 圖表句型
1) From the figures/statistics given in the table it can be seen/noticed that***
2) From the graph/table/diagram/chart above, we can see that***obviously.
3) As show in the chart/by the graph***
4) Have you ever anticipated the prospects of***in the coming decades? Let us just take a look at the figures of***as shown in the graph above.
5) The gap between***and***will be further widened.
6) In face of increasingly serious shortage of energy, we should take effective measures/which of the measures we should take?
7) It is clear that the increase of percentage gets greater and greater.
8) By***, the number of***had less/more than doubled/tripled compared with that of***
9) 短語：made up about***/the figure amounted to/will rise to/will reach/will double that/will tripled that
另外，文章結尾也很重要，它的作用是概括全文內容，進一步強調或肯定文章的中心思想，使文章意義表達得更加深刻。
文章結尾的形式也是多種多樣的，常見的有以下幾種：
1．首尾呼應，畫龍點睛
在文章的結尾，把含義較深的話放在末尾，以點明主題，深化主題，起到畫龍點睛的效果。如"I Cannot Forget Her"
(我忘不了她)的結尾：
After her death, I felt as if something were missing in my life. I was sad over her passing away, but I knew
she would not have had any regrets at having given her life for the benefit of the people.
2．重復主題句
結尾回到文章開頭闡明的中心思想或主題句上，達到強調的效果。如「I Love My Home Town」(我愛家鄉)的結尾：
I love my home town, and I love its people. They too have changed. They are going all out to do more for
the good of our motherland.
3. 自然結尾
隨著文章的結束，文章自然而然地結尾。如「Fishing」(釣魚)的結尾：
I caught as many as twenty fish in two hours, but my brother caught many more. Tired from fishing, we lay
down on the river bank, bathing in the sun. We returned home very late.
4．含蓄性的結尾
用比喻或含蓄的手法不直接點明作者的看法，而是讓讀者自己去領會和思考。如「A Day of Harvesting」(收割的日子)的結尾：
Evening came before we realized it. We put down our sickles and looked at each other. Our clothes were
wet with sweat, but on every face there was a smile.
5．用反問結尾
雖然形式是問句，但意義卻是肯定的，並具有特別的強調作用，引起讀者深思。如 "Should We Learn to Do Housework?" (我們要不要學做家務?) 的結尾。
Everyone should learn to do housework. Don』t you agree, boys and girls?
6．指明方向，激勵讀者
結尾表示對將來的展望，或期待讀者投入行動。如「Let』s Go in for Sports」(讓我們參加體育運動)的結尾：
As we have said above, sports can be of great value. They not only make people live happily but also help
people to learn virtues and do their work bettter. A sound mind is in a sound body. Let』s go in for sports.
文章的結尾沒有一定的模式，可以根據表達主題的需要靈活創造。一般的習慣是，一些記敘文和描寫文經常採用自然結尾的方法；但說理性和邏輯性較強的說明文和議論文則往往都有結束語，以便使文章首尾呼應，結構完整。
C. 如何讓英語寫作句式多樣化
句式就是句子的結構方式,也就是句子的式樣或格式.不同的思想內容要用不同的句式來表達；而同一思想內容也可以用不同的句式來表達.句式不同,表達效果也就不同.只有句式多樣化,文章才會生動有趣,充滿活力.可是,在實際寫作中,初學寫作的學生往往一篇文章都是千篇一律的簡單句,文章單調乏味,毫無生氣.筆者認為,恰當地使用某些方法或手段有助於實際表達形式的多樣化,增強表達效果.茲將常用方法簡單介紹如下.
一、改變句子開頭許多學生在寫作中傾向於用與人有關系的詞性,用名詞和代詞作為句子的開頭,如 People,We,I,He,They,She等.但這種開頭見多了,難免讓人厭倦.試比較：
A．People throughout the country have greatly demanded all kinds of nutritious food．B．There is a great demand across the country for all kinds of nutritious food．第一句改用非人稱名詞作為主語開頭,第二句則用there ＋be句型開頭.這樣既改變了主語＋謂語＋賓語單調句型,又把想強調的意思突出出來.實際上,為了把文章寫得生動活潑,除了用主語開頭外,還可以用句子的其他成分開頭.
1．用副詞開頭Too often,students stray into the habit of cheating on tests．2．用同位語開頭Air,water and oxygen,everything that is necessary for life．3．用狀語開頭Dark and empty,the house looked very different from the way I remembered it．4．用表語開頭Equally essential to the highest success in learning a language are intense interest plus persistent effort．5．用賓語開頭My advice you would not listen to；my helps you laughed at．Now you will have what you asked for．6．以短語修飾語開頭1）以介詞短語開頭To me the news was very interesting,but to my wife very boring．2）以分詞短語開頭Disturbed by the discord of American life in recent decades,Manchester四十三 took flight for the pacific islands．3）以不定式短語開頭To pass the exam,you should work very hard．二、巧用連接詞有的學生在作文中使用過多簡單句,成了簡單句堆砌；有的寫復雜句時,動輒用so, and,then,but,or,however,yet等非但達不到豐富表達方式的目的,反而使句子結構鬆散、呆板.為了避免這種現象,可以通過使用連接詞,尤其是一些表示從屬關系的連接詞,如 who,which,that,because,since,although,after,as,before,when,whenever,if,unless,as if等,不僅能夠豐富句型,而且還能夠把思想表達得更清楚,意義更連貫.例如：
Natural resources are very limited．They will be exhausted in the near future．It is not true．But it becomes a major concern around the world．This is a widely accepted fact．這段文字用簡單句表達,它們之間內在的邏輯關系含糊不清,意思支離破碎.如果使用連接詞,將單句與其前後合並,形成主次關系,就把一個比較復雜的內容和關系表達得層次清楚、結構嚴謹.例如：
It is a widely accepted fact that there is a major concern around the world for the exhaustion of limited natural resources in the near future,though it is unlikely to be true．再如：
The Mississippi River is one of the longest rivers in the world,and in spring time it often overflows its banks,and the lives of many people are endangered．此句用and把三個分句一貫到底,既乏味又可笑.如果使用了關系代詞which,語義就會更連貫,語言也會更流暢：
The Mississippi River,which is one of the longest rivers in the world,often overflows its banks in the spring time,endangering the lives of many people．三、長短句交插長句和短句是就句子的字數多少、形體長短而言的.長句和短句各有其優點和缺點.長句,因為使用的定語、狀語較多,限制了概念的外延,增大了概念的內涵,所以比較精確、嚴密,但使用起來不夠活潑簡便.短句,由於字數少,直截了當,一般比較簡潔、明快、有力,但不利於表達復雜的語義內容.在具體語言活動中,最好長短句交替使用.這既體現了節奏上的要求,也是意義上的需要.例如：
（1）We can imagine the beautiful surroundings．（2）There are many trees along the streets．（3）There is a clean river in the city．（4） There are many fishes in the river．（5）There are willow trees on the one side．（6）There are some pieces of grassland on the other side．（7）There are many flowers on them．文中七個句子都是簡單句,句型結構單一,而且句子長短同一,都在七、八詞左右,十分單調.下面是修改後的段落：
（1）Just imagine the beautiful surroundings if we make our cities greener．（2）Green trees line the streets．（3）A clean river winds through the city,in which a lot of fishes abound．（4）On the one side stand rows of willow trees．（5）On the other side lies a stretch of grassland sprinkled with many yellow and red flowers．改寫後的這段文字,有長句（1）、（3）、（5）,也有短句（2）和（4）,一長一短,抑揚頓挫的節奏感就出來了.不僅句子長短交插,而且句型結構變化也很大,使文章流暢自然,生動活潑.
四、利用倒裝結構英語的基本句型是S＋V＋O,如果偶爾打破常規,改變某一成分的位置,不僅可以豐富句型,而且能強調、突出被倒裝的部分,收到意想不到的表達效果.例如：
1）In no other place in the world can one find such enthusiasm for applying for hosting the 2008 Olympic Games．2）Faith in the Chinese economic reforms the majority of people will never lose．總之,英語的句式是多種多樣的,只要從要表達的內容出發合理選用,文章的句式就會富於變化.同時,在學習寫作的過程中,學生應不斷練習構造各種各樣句式,以提高語言表達能力.
D. 我想要知道英語的常用句型有哪些，還有各種各樣的英語寫作格式，Thangs！
滿意回答 上面各位的回答都不錯，我給你找的是專門針對考研用的，因為看你的年紀應該不是為了考四六級這么簡單了吧。
寫作是語言的重要環節，看看英語考試中對作文的重視就明白了。在考研中，寫作意義極其重大，其性價比（即投入的時間和提高的幅度）非常高，在我看來，如果你的閱讀水平還可以的話，寫作將是你的突破口。
提高寫作只有一個字——「恆」，絕對的熟能生巧。我在網上看過高手寫的文章，簡直可以用恐怖來形容，完全是閱讀理解的水平，而作者的訣竅就是每天寫每天練！只要不斷的寫不斷的改，你的文章會讓你自己吃驚。套用一句：寫作恆久遠，練習永流傳。
然而備考的時間是很緊的，不可能每天保持大量的練習，好在其要求也不高，從現在開始，到考前完全可以達到要求，但千萬不要間斷！很多同學都有一個情況，越不寫，越怕寫；越怕寫，越不寫。萬事開頭難，所以開始的練習尤為重要，而練習應以詞句為主+閱讀好文章，我就有一本記錄本，專門收集好的詞句，效果很好。這里列其中一些較簡單實用的，希望能對大家有所幫助（不過，建議同學們最好自己寫，自己收集，印象會深很多，每天花10分鍾過過，絕對值得。另外，我列的句子很有限，多半是骨架，大家要學會擴展，並且在記憶的時候多聯想一下。舉例來說，一篇你的文章，用心改一下，好好套用幾個句式，改些檔次較高的詞和片語，可以提高不少哦）：
一． 總結句型
1) ***in general/above all/with the result that/as a
result/consequently, ***
2) As far as I am concerned/as for me, ***
3) This truth above seems to be self-evident.
4) Whether we examine the ***above, such things can happens anywhere anytime to anyone.
5) In my point of view, I like/prefer A much more than B.
6) I still prefer A, however, for they teach me not only to be ***but also to be*** ，both in ***and in***.
7) There is no doubt that***
8) In order to make our world a better place in which to live we should efforts to***
9) To a large extent, ***, therefore, reflects***
10) If all above mentioned measures are achieved, ***
11) Wherever you are and whatever you do, ***is always meaningful.
12) So clear/evident/obvious it is that there are quite different opinions on it.
13) Now, which one do you prefer-----the one***or the one***? Were it left to me to select, I should not hesitated a moment to choose the former/latter.
二． 開首句型
1) Have you ever gone***? Have you ever been to***? If you have no
experience like these, your life is an inadequate one.
2) Are you***? Are you***? We are, usually.
3) In large part as a consequence of***, somebody have focused a great deal of attention in recent years on something.
4) We expect the day will come when A with its characteristic of***
5) Being adj. is one of the virtues that people must possess (not only in***but also in***/ring***/when***)
6) What A to B, that C to D
7) Currently, there is a widespread/serious concern over that***
8) The reasons for the***are manifold, for instance, ***
9) Several factors contribute to this***, such as***, as for as I』m concerned, however, ***is the most significant ingredient/element.
10) ***is more violent than what we thought it should be before.
11) There are intimate relations between the two.
三． 並列句型
1) Some people like A e to***. However, there are many young people, including me, especially like B.
2) There might be two reasons, I think***, for the change.
3) A and B are both important, they are attribute which are equally necessary for a person to achieve success in his life.
4) Different people have different attitudes towards***, some believe that***others, however, argue that***still others maintain that***
5) First***besides, in addition***what』s more***
6) For one thing***nevertheless, for another***
四． 轉折句型
1)***Such defects as mentioned above can be prevented by the other way of ***
2) Except for ***』s sake only.
3) Perhaps A is the wrong word, however, B might be better.
4) First***last but not least***
5) Shall we do this? Not necessary the case.
6) ***, and vice versa indeed .
7) On the contrary, in spite of these increase***
8) Compared with A, B has many advantages such as***
9) Not so much*** as he had talked about.
10) ***, the truth of the matter, however, is that***
11) For some, the way maybe right, nevertheless, for many others***
12) As everything going to the extreme has its negative aspects, so has***
13) It is fairly well know that***however, it is less know that***
14) ***, but this was not always the case.
15) At first, ***different in their opinions, on second thoughts, however, all of them agree to***
16) None the less(盡管如此)***
17) When people succeed, it is because of hard work, however, luck has a lot to do with it too.
18) ***, sometimes it isn』t totally the case, however.
19) Do some A else but B.
五． 名理句型
1) It is usually the case that ***
2) It is plain common sense---the more/less***the more/less***
3) The serious reality had taught us a lesson
: not being environment friendly will be avenged mercilessly.
4) As a proverb says/as is known to all/as a popular saying goes, ***
5) I can think of no better illustration than an English poem/adage which goes like this:***
6) The old story of***can serve as a good illustration that***
六． 強調句型
1) With/e to/spurred by***we can certainly cope with any task we are faced with, that is, ***
2) The reason why***is no other than***as I know.
3) The same thing is true with***
4) What I want to point out is that, for a person who wants to be successful in life and to be useful in society, he will have to learn to be both A and B.
5) What a wonderful picture? Especially for we students always swimming in the sea of books!
6) It』s high time that immediate measures were taken to better the strength and face the challenges.
7) Before everything else, ***is the secret of success.
七． 圖表句型
1) From the figures/statistics given in the table it can be seen/noticed that***
2) From the graph/table/diagram/chart above, we can see that***obviously.
3) As show in the chart/by the graph***
4) Have you ever anticipated the prospects of***in the coming decades? Let us just take a look at the figures of***as shown in the graph above.
5) The gap between***and***will be further widened.
6) In face of increasingly serious shortage of energy, we should take effective measures/which of the measures we should take?
7) It is clear that the increase of percentage gets greater and greater.
8) By***, the number of***had less/more than doubled/tripled compared with that of***
9) 短語：made up about***/the figure amounted to/will rise to/will reach/will double that/will tripled that
另外，文章結尾也很重要，它的作用是概括全文內容，進一步強調或肯定文章的中心思想，使文章意義表達得更加深刻。
文章結尾的形式也是多種多樣的，常見的有以下幾種：
1．首尾呼應，畫龍點睛
在文章的結尾，把含義較深的話放在末尾，以點明主題，深化主題，起到畫龍點睛的效果。如"I Cannot Forget Her"
(我忘不了她)的結尾：
After her death, I felt as if something were missing in my life. I was sad over her passing away, but I knew
she would not have had any regrets at having given her life for the benefit of the people.
2．重復主題句
結尾回到文章開頭闡明的中心思想或主題句上，達到強調的效果。如「I Love My Home Town」(我愛家鄉)的結尾：
I love my home town, and I love its people. They too have changed. They are going all out to do more for
the good of our motherland.
3. 自然結尾
隨著文章的結束，文章自然而然地結尾。如「Fishing」(釣魚)的結尾：
I caught as many as twenty fish in two hours, but my brother caught many more. Tired from fishing, we lay
down on the river bank, bathing in the sun. We returned home very late.
4．含蓄性的結尾
用比喻或含蓄的手法不直接點明作者的看法，而是讓讀者自己去領會和思考。如「A Day of Harvesting」(收割的日子)的結尾：
Evening came before we realized it. We put down our sickles and looked at each other. Our clothes were
wet with sweat, but on every face there was a smile.
5．用反問結尾
雖然形式是問句，但意義卻是肯定的，並具有特別的強調作用，引起讀者深思。如 "Should We Learn to Do Housework?" (我們要不要學做家務?) 的結尾。
Everyone should learn to do housework. Don』t you agree, boys and girls?
6．指明方向，激勵讀者
結尾表示對將來的展望，或期待讀者投入行動。如「Let』s Go in for Sports」(讓我們參加體育運動)的結尾：
As we have said above, sports can be of great value. They not only make people live happily but also help
people to learn virtues and do their work bettter. A sound mind is in a sound body. Let』s go in for sports.
文章的結尾沒有一定的模式，可以根據表達主題的需要靈活創造。一般的習慣是，一些記敘文和描寫文經常採用自然結尾的方法；但說理性和邏輯性較強的說明文和議論文則往往都有結束語，以便使文章首尾呼應，結構完整。
E. 英語改變句式
Miss Liang isn't is my English teacher
i am behind the door
I can't see a cat under the table
My pencil is in my backpack
are those his brother
no .it isn't
F. 英語作文改寫
作文的改寫其實就是句子的改寫，意思不變，那麼改的肯定是他的表達，一般從詞語的替換回入手，尤其是一答些關聯詞，同意片語，例如文章中如果有lead
to
那麼我們就可以改成give
rise
to
,result
in
等等表示導致意思的詞語。有些我們就要改寫句子的結構。例如有些時候我們可以改成形式賓語的形式，例如文章中有這么一句話English
is
so
hard
for
me.我們就可以改成I
find
it
hard
to
learn
English.當然我們不能為了改寫而改寫，改的時候要保證句子正確與漂亮，盡量避免相同的句式，也不要出現很多I
,I
,I什麼的。你可以先從改寫句子著手。希望對你有所幫助
G. 英語作文句式
句式就是句子的結構方式，也就是句子的式樣或格式。不同的思想內容要用不同的句式來表達；而同一思想內容也可以用不同的句式來表達。句式不同，表達效果也就不同。
一、改變句子開頭
許多學生在寫作中傾向於用與人有關系的詞性，用名詞和代詞作為句子的開頭，如 People，We，I，He，They，She等。但這種開頭見多了，難免讓人厭倦。試比較：
A．People throughout the country have greatly demanded all kinds of nutritious food．
B．There is a great demand across the country for all kinds of nutritious food．
第一句改用非人稱名詞作為主語開頭，第二句則用there ＋be句型開頭。這樣既改變了主語＋謂語＋賓語單調句型，又把想強調的意思突出出來。實際上，為了把文章寫得生動活潑，除了用主語開頭外，還可以用句子的其他成分開頭。
1．用副詞開頭
Too often，students stray into the habit of cheating on tests．
2．用同位語開頭
Air，water and oxygen，everything that is necessary for life．
3．用狀語開頭
Dark and empty，the house looked very different from the way I remembered it．
4．用表語開頭
Equally essential to the highest success in learning a language are intense interest plus persistent effort．
5．用賓語開頭
My advice you would not listen to；my helps you laughed at．Now you will have what you asked for．
6．以短語修飾語開頭
1）以介詞短語開頭
To me the news was very interesting，but to my wife very boring．
2）以分詞短語開頭
Disturbed by the discord of American life in recent decades，Menchester took flight for the pacific islands．
3）以不定式短語開頭
To pass the exam，you should work very hard．
二、巧用連接詞
有的學生在作文中
使用過多簡單句，成了簡單句堆砌；有的寫復雜句時，動輒用so，
and，then，but，or，however，yet等非但達不到豐富表達方式的目的，反而使句子結構鬆散、呆板。為了避免這種現象，可以通過使用連
接詞，尤其是一些表示從屬關系的連接詞，如 who，which，that，because，since，although，after，as，before，when，whenever，if，unless，as if等，不僅能夠豐富句型，而且還能夠把思想表達得更清楚，意義更連貫。例如：
Natural resources are very limited．They will be exhausted in the near
future．It is not true．But it becomes a major concern around the
world．This is a widely accepted fact．
這段文字用簡單句表達，它們之間內在的邏輯關系含糊不清，意思支離破碎。如果使用連接詞，將單句與其前後合並，形成主次關系，就把一個比較復雜的內容和關系表達得層次清楚、結構嚴謹。例如：
It is a widely accepted fact that there is a major concern around the
world for the exhaustion of limited natural resources in the near
future，though it is unlikely to be true．
再如：
The Mississippi River is one of the longest rivers in the world，and in
spring time it often overflows its banks，and the lives of many people
are endangered．
此句用and把三個分句一貫到底，既乏味又可笑。如果使用了關系代詞which，語義就會更連貫，語言也會更流暢：
The Mississippi River，which is one of the longest rivers in the
world，often overflows its banks in the spring time，endangering the lives
of many people．
三、長短句交插
長句和短句是就句子的字數多少、形體長短而言的。長句和短句各有其優點和缺點。長句，因為使用的定語、狀語較多，限制了概念的外延，增大了概念的內涵，所
以比較精確、嚴密，但使用起來不夠活潑簡便。短句，由於字數少，直截了當，一般比較簡潔、明快、有力，但不利於表達復雜的語義內容。在具體語言活動中，最
好長短句交替使用。這既體現了節奏上的要求，也是意義上的需要。例如：
（1）We can imagine the beautiful surroundings．（2）There are many trees
along the streets．（3）There is a clean river in the city．（4） There are
many fishes in the river．（5）There are willow trees on the one
side．（6）There are some pieces of grassland on the other side．（7）There
are many flowers on them．
文中七個句子都是簡單句，句型結構單一，而且句子長短同一，都在七、八詞左右，十分單調。下面是修改後的段落：
（1）Just imagine the beautiful surroundings if we make our cities
greener．（2）Green trees line the streets．（3）A clean river winds through
the city，in which a lot of fishes abound．（4）On the one side stand rows
of willow trees．（5）On the other side lies a stretch of grassland
sprinkled with many yellow and red flowers．
改寫後的這段文字，有長句（1）、（3）、（5），也有短句（2）和（4），一長一短，抑揚頓挫的節奏感就出來了。不僅句子長短交插，而且句型結構變化也很大，使文章流暢自然，生動活潑。
四、利用倒裝結構
英語的基本句型是S＋V＋O，如果偶爾打破常規，改變某一成分的位置，不僅可以豐富句型，而且能強調、突出被倒裝的部分，收到意想不到的表達效果。例如：
1）In no other place in the world can one find such enthusiasm for applying for hosting the 2008 Olympic Games．
2）Faith in the Chinese economic reforms the majority of people will never lose．
總之，英語的句式是多種多樣的，只要從要表達的內容出發合理選用，文章的句式就會富於變化。同時，在學習寫作的過程中，學生應不斷練習構造各種各樣句式，以提高語言表達能力。
H. 急求英語大神幫我修改作文句型，老師說我句式太簡單。在線等！今晚要交
Nowadays, it is more and more common to study abroad, which is not only simple on the surface but also has a lot of challenges. I believe that studying abroad has more disadvantages than advantages, which are listed below.
Firstly, the cost of studying abroad is higher than that at home. If the family's financial condition is not good enough, it's hard for them to afford the cost. Secondly, most people need to live alone after going abroad. As we know, there are dormitories in domestic universities, but none in foreign countries. Young people need to rent a house outside school alone. How lonely and insecure! Thirdly, they have to suffer spiritual loneliness. Different environments and cultures make people miss their hometown. A case in point is Chinatown. It's a sign of homesickness.
It goes without saying that studying abroad is expensive and it is very difficult to overcome the differences arisen from living alone and the cultural environment. In conclusion, studying abroad is full of challenges, but I still wish all international students can finish their studies smoothly.
有幾點需要指出，第一段你用了difficulty和advantage做對比，不恰當，你面臨的困難多於帶給你的好處。你認為出國留學的弊大於利，第二段三條都在寫弊，但是應該適當的描述出國留學的好處。第二段里你說外國大學沒有宿舍，也比較片面。我在法國一年，有專門的大學城，就像留學生公寓一樣。申請美國大學的時候，住宿也有選項，可以選擇學校公寓或者租房。第三點，Chinatown跟留學的劣勢沒有任何聯系。如果所在的城市有唐人街，那對於留學生而言是一件好事。最後一段，第一句是goes without saying，第二句是there is no doubt.兩者意思一樣，直接用and連接多好。最後一句你希望所有留學生順利畢業，跟你反對出國留學相矛盾。所以，前面加點東西。
I. 英語寫作改寫句子
I am Xiao Hui. I come from Hegang, Hei Long Jiang Province, a small town in northeast China. I'm 28 years old, but still want to go to school because I did not go to college. It is never too late to learn, so it's neither too late to go to college. I'm trying to learn English recently. Up to now I can only speak a few words in English, but I am sure through continuous study I shall be able to speak it well. Soon I will leave for Korea to go to school. It's a good learning experience for me. I will appreciate this opportunity to study harder for good chance is few and far between.
J. 英語作文句式雜糅怎麼辦
句式雜糅就是兩種句式糅合在一起，判斷的關鍵是找句子的主幹，可找到兩套交叉的主幹。當然從語意上分析，這種語病也可粗略地看作語意重復。
生態環境改善取得了顯著的成績的關鍵是與政府採取多種措施調動了農民退耕還林的積極性分不開的。
該句包含兩個句子：一是「生態環境改善取得了顯著的成績的關鍵是政府採取多種措施調動了農民退耕還林的積極性」；二是「生態環境改善取得了顯著的成績與政府採取多種措施調動了農民退耕還林的積極性分不開的」。「關鍵是……」與「……是與……分不開的」兩種句式雜糅在一起。
為什麼火上舞蹈者的腳掌不會燒傷呢？原因之一是因為舞蹈者不停在跳躍。
後一句子包含兩個句子：（這）是因為舞蹈者不停在跳躍；原因之一是舞蹈者不停在跳躍。「原因之一是……」和「（這）是因為……」兩種句式雜糅在一起。
高速磁懸浮列車的懸浮、導向、驅動和制動都靠的是利用電磁力來實現的。
包括兩個句子：高速磁懸浮列車的懸浮、導向、驅動和制動都靠的是電磁力；高速磁懸浮列車的懸浮、導向、驅動和制動都是利用電磁力來實現的。「……靠的是……」和「……是利用……來實現的」兩種句式雜糅在一起。
常見的雜糅格式（括弧內為正確形式）：
本著……為原則（本著……原則，以……為原則）
是為了……為目的的（是為了……，……為目的