❶ 六種基本的句子類型(英語的)都是什麼最好
三大句型。也可以看作六種基本句型。
1主系表
2(1)主謂 (即 主語 加不及物動詞)
(2)謂版主 (即主權謂結構的特殊形式,there 加不及物動詞加主語)
3 主謂賓 包括
(1)主謂單賓
(2)主謂雙賓(即主語加間接賓語加直接賓語)
(3)主謂復合賓(即 主語加賓語加賓補)
❷ 英語作文要求用三種句型,是那三種句型
我們都知道學任何東西,基礎都是最重要的。如果你們把這篇文章學會了,後面會越學越輕松,而且能幫助你一生的道路都輕松。如果你今天這篇文章沒學會,將來你會很受罪的。你們累那麼一段時間,跟我學好了,如果你是學生,你絕對是你們班的前幾名,甚至對英語的概念比你們的老師還要清晰。
這是你們要學習的第一篇文章,這篇文章非常非常重要。本人始終告訴大家,英語只有三個句子(句型),無論你將來學英語學到什麼程度,英語就只有這三個句子(句型),你們要把基礎打得扎扎實實的。到以後你會發現,無論多麼復雜的句子都是這三個句子(句型)變出來的。
看下面的句子。
●The man is a teacher. 名詞 這個人是一個老師。 ●He is busy. 形容詞 這個人很忙。
●She is in the classroom. 介詞+名詞
第一個句子(你們一定要注意,它雖然簡單,但是你們不要站在我們中國人的角度去看,要用英國人的思維。)
這個人是一個老師。——The man is a teacher.在我們學英語的第一天,老師就告訴你:「man」是「人」,「is」是「是」,「teacher」是「老師」。這就壞啦!!為什麼?問題就出在這個「是(is)」上。英文中只有三個句子。那麼「is」它並不是中文的「是」。它(is)就是我們說的,英文中的第一面「旗子」。它跟中文的「是」毫無關系。為什麼?
你再看第二個句子,中國人說「他很忙」,中國人不說「他是很忙」,而是說 「他很忙」。
英文是「He is busy」.「is」後面跟的是形容詞。
第三句「她在教室里」怎麼變成英文?——She is in the classroom. 可見,中文經常沒有「是」,而英文非要這個「is」不可。那麼它非常非常重要!!!它是英文中第一個句型的「標記」。就像我們的國家標記是五星紅旗一樣。認識這個標記非常重要。
❸ 英語寫作(用三種句型,五個以上句子描述一種水果)
The fruit is the good thing!Is very beneficial to our health.Looks like the apple,everybody said that one day of apple doctor is far away from you.Looks like the banana,not only long lovable,eats the flavor is also wonderful!Looks like the watermelon,the burning hot summer eats a watermelon ratio to eat 3 icicles also to solve the hot weather.I like eating grapes,fragrant pear,watermelon,litchi chinensis,because their delicacy is delicious
❹ 求詳解英語語法里改寫句子中的幾種句子的改寫方法
虛擬語氣(using subjunctive mood)、
He suggested us going out for a walk.
=He suggested that we should go out for a walk.
非限定形式(using a non-finite verbaform)
Tom is a teenage boy and he has run away from his home
=Tom,(who is)a teenage boy,has runaway from his home.
修飾性狀語(combining the tow sentenses by using a Adjunct)
Jack sat under a tree.He was reading a book.
=Jack sat under a tree,reading a book.
連接性狀語從句(combining the tow sentenses by using a Conjunct)
Tom and his companion are sailing down the river.Suddenly ,they see something ahead in the water.
=Tom and his companion are sailing down the river when they see something ahead in the water.
祝你開心如意!
❺ 英語中句子改寫總共有多少種類型是哪幾種呢
句子的種類 (一)按使用目的可分為陳述句、疑問句、祈使句和感嘆句。
1) 陳述句(Declarative Sentences):說明一個事實或陳述一種看法。
Light travels faster than sound.光比聲速度快。(說明事實)
The film is rather boring.這部電影很乏味。
(說明看法)
2) 疑問句(Interrogative Sentences):提出問題。有以下四種:
a.一般疑問句(General Questions):
Can you finish the work in time?
你能按時完成工作嗎?
b.特殊疑問句(W Questions; H Questions):
Where do you live?你住那兒?
How do you know that? 你怎麼知道那件事?
c.選擇疑問句(Alternative Questions):
Do you want tea or coffee?
你是要茶還是要咖啡?
d.反意疑問句(Tag-Questions):
He doesn't know her, does he?
他不認識她,對不對?
3) 祈使句(Imperative Sentences):提出請求,建議或發出命令,例如:
Sit down, please.請坐。
Don't be nervous!別緊張!
4) 感嘆句(Exclamatory Sentences):表示說話人驚奇、喜悅、憤怒等情緒,例如:
What good news it is!多好的消息啊!
❻ 什麼是高考英語寫作內容的擴展方向
滿意回答 上面各位的回答都不錯,我給你找的是專門針對考研用的,因為看你的年紀應該不是為了考四六級這么簡單了吧。
寫作是語言的重要環節,看看英語考試中對作文的重視就明白了。在考研中,寫作意義極其重大,其性價比(即投入的時間和提高的幅度)非常高,在我看來,如果你的閱讀水平還可以的話,寫作將是你的突破口。
提高寫作只有一個字——「恆」,絕對的熟能生巧。我在網上看過高手寫的文章,簡直可以用恐怖來形容,完全是閱讀理解的水平,而作者的訣竅就是每天寫每天練!只要不斷的寫不斷的改,你的文章會讓你自己吃驚。套用一句:寫作恆久遠,練習永流傳。
然而備考的時間是很緊的,不可能每天保持大量的練習,好在其要求也不高,從現在開始,到考前完全可以達到要求,但千萬不要間斷!很多同學都有一個情況,越不寫,越怕寫;越怕寫,越不寫。萬事開頭難,所以開始的練習尤為重要,而練習應以詞句為主+閱讀好文章,我就有一本記錄本,專門收集好的詞句,效果很好。這里列其中一些較簡單實用的,希望能對大家有所幫助(不過,建議同學們最好自己寫,自己收集,印象會深很多,每天花10分鍾過過,絕對值得。另外,我列的句子很有限,多半是骨架,大家要學會擴展,並且在記憶的時候多聯想一下。舉例來說,一篇你的文章,用心改一下,好好套用幾個句式,改些檔次較高的詞和片語,可以提高不少哦):
一. 總結句型
1) ***in general/above all/with the result that/as a
result/consequently, ***
2) As far as I am concerned/as for me, ***
3) This truth above seems to be self-evident.
4) Whether we examine the ***above, such things can happens anywhere anytime to anyone.
5) In my point of view, I like/prefer A much more than B.
6) I still prefer A, however, for they teach me not only to be ***but also to be*** ,both in ***and in***.
7) There is no doubt that***
8) In order to make our world a better place in which to live we should efforts to***
9) To a large extent, ***, therefore, reflects***
10) If all above mentioned measures are achieved, ***
11) Wherever you are and whatever you do, ***is always meaningful.
12) So clear/evident/obvious it is that there are quite different opinions on it.
13) Now, which one do you prefer-----the one***or the one***? Were it left to me to select, I should not hesitated a moment to choose the former/latter.
二. 開首句型
1) Have you ever gone***? Have you ever been to***? If you have no
experience like these, your life is an inadequate one.
2) Are you***? Are you***? We are, usually.
3) In large part as a consequence of***, somebody have focused a great deal of attention in recent years on something.
4) We expect the day will come when A with its characteristic of***
5) Being adj. is one of the virtues that people must possess (not only in***but also in***/ring***/when***)
6) What A to B, that C to D
7) Currently, there is a widespread/serious concern over that***
8) The reasons for the***are manifold, for instance, ***
9) Several factors contribute to this***, such as***, as for as I』m concerned, however, ***is the most significant ingredient/element.
10) ***is more violent than what we thought it should be before.
11) There are intimate relations between the two.
三. 並列句型
1) Some people like A e to***. However, there are many young people, including me, especially like B.
2) There might be two reasons, I think***, for the change.
3) A and B are both important, they are attribute which are equally necessary for a person to achieve success in his life.
4) Different people have different attitudes towards***, some believe that***others, however, argue that***still others maintain that***
5) First***besides, in addition***what』s more***
6) For one thing***nevertheless, for another***
四. 轉折句型
1)***Such defects as mentioned above can be prevented by the other way of ***
2) Except for ***』s sake only.
3) Perhaps A is the wrong word, however, B might be better.
4) First***last but not least***
5) Shall we do this? Not necessary the case.
6) ***, and vice versa indeed .
7) On the contrary, in spite of these increase***
8) Compared with A, B has many advantages such as***
9) Not so much*** as he had talked about.
10) ***, the truth of the matter, however, is that***
11) For some, the way maybe right, nevertheless, for many others***
12) As everything going to the extreme has its negative aspects, so has***
13) It is fairly well know that***however, it is less know that***
14) ***, but this was not always the case.
15) At first, ***different in their opinions, on second thoughts, however, all of them agree to***
16) None the less(盡管如此)***
17) When people succeed, it is because of hard work, however, luck has a lot to do with it too.
18) ***, sometimes it isn』t totally the case, however.
19) Do some A else but B.
五. 名理句型
1) It is usually the case that ***
2) It is plain common sense---the more/less***the more/less***
3) The serious reality had taught us a lesson
: not being environment friendly will be avenged mercilessly.
4) As a proverb says/as is known to all/as a popular saying goes, ***
5) I can think of no better illustration than an English poem/adage which goes like this:***
6) The old story of***can serve as a good illustration that***
六. 強調句型
1) With/e to/spurred by***we can certainly cope with any task we are faced with, that is, ***
2) The reason why***is no other than***as I know.
3) The same thing is true with***
4) What I want to point out is that, for a person who wants to be successful in life and to be useful in society, he will have to learn to be both A and B.
5) What a wonderful picture? Especially for we students always swimming in the sea of books!
6) It』s high time that immediate measures were taken to better the strength and face the challenges.
7) Before everything else, ***is the secret of success.
七. 圖表句型
1) From the figures/statistics given in the table it can be seen/noticed that***
2) From the graph/table/diagram/chart above, we can see that***obviously.
3) As show in the chart/by the graph***
4) Have you ever anticipated the prospects of***in the coming decades? Let us just take a look at the figures of***as shown in the graph above.
5) The gap between***and***will be further widened.
6) In face of increasingly serious shortage of energy, we should take effective measures/which of the measures we should take?
7) It is clear that the increase of percentage gets greater and greater.
8) By***, the number of***had less/more than doubled/tripled compared with that of***
9) 短語:made up about***/the figure amounted to/will rise to/will reach/will double that/will tripled that
另外,文章結尾也很重要,它的作用是概括全文內容,進一步強調或肯定文章的中心思想,使文章意義表達得更加深刻。
文章結尾的形式也是多種多樣的,常見的有以下幾種:
1.首尾呼應,畫龍點睛
在文章的結尾,把含義較深的話放在末尾,以點明主題,深化主題,起到畫龍點睛的效果。如"I Cannot Forget Her"
(我忘不了她)的結尾:
After her death, I felt as if something were missing in my life. I was sad over her passing away, but I knew
she would not have had any regrets at having given her life for the benefit of the people.
2.重復主題句
結尾回到文章開頭闡明的中心思想或主題句上,達到強調的效果。如「I Love My Home Town」(我愛家鄉)的結尾:
I love my home town, and I love its people. They too have changed. They are going all out to do more for
the good of our motherland.
3. 自然結尾
隨著文章的結束,文章自然而然地結尾。如「Fishing」(釣魚)的結尾:
I caught as many as twenty fish in two hours, but my brother caught many more. Tired from fishing, we lay
down on the river bank, bathing in the sun. We returned home very late.
4.含蓄性的結尾
用比喻或含蓄的手法不直接點明作者的看法,而是讓讀者自己去領會和思考。如「A Day of Harvesting」(收割的日子)的結尾:
Evening came before we realized it. We put down our sickles and looked at each other. Our clothes were
wet with sweat, but on every face there was a smile.
5.用反問結尾
雖然形式是問句,但意義卻是肯定的,並具有特別的強調作用,引起讀者深思。如 "Should We Learn to Do Housework?" (我們要不要學做家務?) 的結尾。
Everyone should learn to do housework. Don』t you agree, boys and girls?
6.指明方向,激勵讀者
結尾表示對將來的展望,或期待讀者投入行動。如「Let』s Go in for Sports」(讓我們參加體育運動)的結尾:
As we have said above, sports can be of great value. They not only make people live happily but also help
people to learn virtues and do their work bettter. A sound mind is in a sound body. Let』s go in for sports.
文章的結尾沒有一定的模式,可以根據表達主題的需要靈活創造。一般的習慣是,一些記敘文和描寫文經常採用自然結尾的方法;但說理性和邏輯性較強的說明文和議論文則往往都有結束語,以便使文章首尾呼應,結構完整。贊同9| 評論
❼ 高中英語寫作句子的5種類型是
❽ 英語寫作中常見的幾種句型
英語寫作中常見的十二種句型
such+名詞性片語+that…
so+形容詞/副詞+that…——如此……以致……
例如:(1)she is such a good teacher that we all love her.她是一個好老師,我們都愛她。
(2)it was such a hot day that they didn』t go out for a walk as usual.這么熱的天氣,他們沒有像往常一樣去散步。
注意點:
1.such+a+形容詞+名詞+that…,可以改寫成:so+形容詞+a+名詞+that…,例句(1)可以改寫成:she is so good a teacher that we all love her.
2.在such+形容詞+名詞復數或不可數名詞+that…結構中,形容詞如果是many/few或much/little時,用so不用such,即:so+many/few+可數名詞復數+that…,so+much/little+不可數名詞+that…
(1)there are so many people in the room that i can』t get in.房間里人太多,我進不去。
(2)the man has so much money that he can buy a car.那人很有錢,他能買一輛小汽車。
句型(二)there be…,either…or…,neither…nor…,not only…but also…
例如:(1)there is a pen and two pencils in his pencil-box.他的鉛筆盒裡有一支鋼筆和兩支鉛筆。
(2)not only you but also i have been to the great wall.你和我都沒有去過長城。
(3)either you or i am leaving for shanghai.要麼你去上海,要麼我去上海。
(4)neither you nor he is right.你和他都不對。
(5)both jack and tim are english.
jack和tim是英國人。
注意點:當這幾個句型連接主語時,謂語動詞的人稱和數要考慮「就近原則」,對比both…and… 來記憶,both…and…連接主語時視為復數。
句型(三)enough+名詞+to do…——有足夠的……做某事
形容詞/副詞+enough+to do …——足夠……做某事
例如:(1)there is enough room to hold these people to have a meeting.有足夠的地方容下這些人開會。
(2)the boy is strong enough to carry the heavy box.這個男孩力氣夠大,能搬動這只箱子。
注意點:enough做副詞修飾形容詞或副詞時,放在所修飾詞的後面,句子可以用so…that…句型改寫。例句(2)可以改寫為:the boy is so strong that he can carry the heavy box.這個男孩力氣很大,能搬動這只箱子。
句型(四)too+形容詞/副詞+to do…——太……以致不能……
例如:(1)i was too excited to say a word.我激動得一個字也說不出來。
❾ 英語寫作方法
英語寫作方法六大原則:
1. advanced words (高級詞彙原則)
2. adverbial advanceed (狀語提前原則)
3. phrases preferred (短語優先原則)
4.compound sentence, composite sentence and sentence of special kind (並列句、復合句和特殊句式原則)
5. long and short sentences alternately (長短句交替原則)
6. passages in paragraphs(短文分段分層原則)
高分作文的五大特性
1. sense of order (條理性: 段落完整,層次分明)
2. accuracy (准確性: 語法准確,用詞精當)
3. fluency (流暢性: 層次清晰,行文連貫)
4. conciseness & variety (簡潔、多樣性: 語言簡潔,不重復)
5. ideological content (思想性: 文章立意高,表達個人觀點內容積極向上)
過渡詞的使用
過渡詞是一種關系指引詞,一般由副詞或起副詞作用的短語承擔。此外,代詞、連詞、上下文的近義詞等也可作過渡詞。過渡詞猶如「橋梁」,在文章中發揮著連接上下文的作用,學會恰當地運用過渡詞會使文章結構緊湊,啟、承、轉、合,過渡自然,融會貫通,連成一體。
1、根據意思和作用的不同,過渡詞可以分為以下十六類:
(1)表並列關系的過渡詞:
and, also, as well, as well as, or, too, not only…but also, both … and, either … or, neither…nor等。
(2)表遞進關系的過渡詞:
besides, in addition(加之,除……之外), moreover(此外,而且), what』s more, what』s worse等。
(3)表轉折對比的過渡詞:
but, however, yet, instead, on the other hand, on the contrary, although, different from, despite, in spite of, whereas, unlike, nevertheless, not only…but also, here…there, years ago…today, this…that, the former…the latter, then…now, the first… whereas the second, once…now, on the one hand … on the other hand, some…others等。
(4)表原因的過渡詞:
because, because of, since, as, for, now that, thanks to, e to(由於), for this reason, owing to, as far as, considering that, seeing that等。
(5)表結果的過渡詞:
so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that, then, thereby, hence, so…that, such…that?, accordingly等。??
(6)表條件的過渡詞:
if, unless, on condition that, as/so long as等。
(7)表時間的過渡詞:
when, while, after, before, until, as soon as, later, afterwards, soon, lately, recently, since, from then on,? eventually, in the meantime, then, suddenly, at the same time, next, early this morning / year / century, after a while, in a few days, now, presently, finally, at last, all of a sudden, form now on, at present, immediately, the moment等。
(8)表特定的順序關系的過渡詞:
first, firstly, second, secondly, third, thirdly, above all, first of all, then, next, finally, in the end, at last, afterward(s)(後來), meanwhile(幾乎同時), thereafter(在那以後), last, finally, eventually(終於)等。
(9)表換一種方式表達的過渡詞:
in other words, that is to say, to put it another way等。
(10)表進行舉例說明的過渡詞:
for instance, for example, take … as an example, namely, such as, like, in other words, that is to say, that is等。
(11)表陳述事實的過渡詞:
in fact, actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth等。
(12)表強調的過渡詞:
certainly, indeed, above all, surely, most important, in fact, no doubt, without any doubt, truly, obviously, of course, actually, as a matter of fact, chiefly, especially, primarily, in particular, undoubtedly, absolutely等。
(13)表比較、對比的過渡詞:
like, unlike, in the same way, similarly, be similar to, rather than, on the contrary, by contrast, one one hand…, on the other hand, otherwise 等。
(14)表目的的過渡詞:
for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to等。
(15)表總結的過渡詞:
in a word(總之,簡言之), in general, in short(總之), above all, after all, generally speaking, to sum up, finally, in conclusion, to conclude, at last, in summary, on the whole等。
(16)表增補的過渡詞:in addition, furthermore, again, also, besides, moreover, what』s more, similarly, next, finally 等。
2、文章段落之間的邏輯關系主要由過渡詞來完成,在修辭中稱為啟、承、轉、合。「啟」就是開頭, 「承」是承接,「轉」是轉折,「合」是綜合或總結。
(1) 「啟」。
用於表示「啟」的過渡詞或過渡性的語句通常用在段落或文章的開頭:
過渡詞: first, first of all, at first, in the first place, firstly, to being with, to start with, recently, now, at present, in recent years, in general, generally speaking, at present, lately, currently,
過渡句:It is often said that…,
As the proverb says…,
It goes without saying that…,
It is clear/obvious that…,
Many people often ask …
(2) 「承」。
表示「承」的過渡詞或過渡性的語句通常用在段落中的第一個擴展句中:
過渡詞: second, similarly, in addition, besides, then, furthermore, moreover, what is more, what
is worse, for example, for instance, certainly, surely, obviously, in other words, especially, particularly, in particular, indeed, still, third, truly, in fact, at the same time, no doubt,
過渡句:It is true that…,
Everybody knows that…,
It can be easily proved that…,
No one can deny that…
The reason why …is that …,
There is no doubt that…,
To take…for an example (instance) …,
We know that…,
What is more serious is that…
(3)「轉」。
用於「轉」的過渡詞或過渡性的語句通常用在段落中的第二個擴展句中:
過渡詞:but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, in contrast, in any case, at any rate(無論如何), nevertheless(雖然如此), otherwise, or, or else, while, whereas, but, despite, inspite of ..., yet, instead,
過渡句:I do not believe that…,
Perhaps you』ll ask why…
This may be true, but we still have a problem with regard to…,
Though we are in basic agreement with …, yet differences will be found,
That』s why i feel that…
(4) 「合」。
用於「合」的過渡詞或過渡性的語句通常用在段落的結論句或文章的結論段中:
過渡詞: in a word, in general, in short, above all, after all, generally speaking,to sum up, finally, in conclusion, at last, in summary, therefore, as a result, above all, thus,after all(畢竟), eventually, hence, in short, in conclusion, in a word, in sum(總之), on the whole(就整體而言), to sum up
過渡句:From this point of view …
On account of this we can find that …
The result is dependent on …
Thus, this is the reason why we must…
長短句結合
(1)句子既要生動,又要簡明扼要。
(2)在寫作中應避免使用相同長度的相同句型,而應注意句式的變化,如長短句結合,簡單句、復雜句和復合句並用,還可以使用簡化句等,一些較復雜的結構如獨立結構,分詞結構等也可以使用。
(3)可以使用一些特殊句式,如強調句、感嘆句、倒裝句等,增強語句的表現力,以增加文章「亮點」。強烈建議:在文章第一段(開頭)用一長一短,且先長後短;在文章主體部分,要先用一個短句解釋主要意思,然後在闡述幾個要點的時候採用先短後長的句群形式,定會讓主體部分妙筆生輝!文章結尾一般用一長一短就可以了。(這是我上初中時英語老師給我的,幫助了我,希望也能幫助你。。)
❿ 英語寫作要注意的幾種情況:常見的10個句子錯誤
Incomplete Sentence - Sentence Fragment
句子不完整——殘缺句
One common mistake many students make is the use of incomplete sentences. Each sentence in English must contain at least a subject and a verb, and should be an independent clause. Examples of incomplete sentences without a subject or a verb might include an instruction or a prepositional phrase.
許多學生都會犯一個常見的錯誤,就是寫出來的句子不完整。英語中,每個句子都必須至少有一個主語,一個動詞,並單獨成句。沒有主語或動詞的殘缺句子可能就只有表示指令的句子或者介詞短語了。
For example:
例如:
Through the door.
穿過大門。
In the other room.
在另一個房間。
Over there.
在那裡。
These are phrases we may use in spoken English, but that should not be used in written English as they are incomplete.
在英語口語中,你可能會用到這些短語,但是因為它們畢竟不是完整的英語句子,所以在書面語言中,我們一般不會使用。
Sentence fragments caused by dependent clauses used without an independent clause are more common. Remember that subordinating conjunctions introce dependent clauses. In other words, if you use a subordinating clause beginning with a word such as 'because, though, if, etc.' there must be an independent clause to complete the thought. This mistake is often made on tests asking a question with 'Why'.
由於缺乏獨立分句的從屬子句導致的句子殘缺很常見。記住,從屬連詞引出了從屬子句。也就是說,如果你用一些詞語來引出從句,例如because,though,if等等,就必須要有一個獨立分句來使句子完整。我們在考試中,使用why來提出問題時,經常會犯這樣的錯誤。
For example, the sentences:
例如,下面這個句子:
Because Tom is the boss.
因為湯姆就是老闆。
Since he left work early without permission.
自從他不經允許就早退。
We might answer the question: "Why did he lose his job?" However, these are sentence fragments. The correct answer would be:
我們可能會問:「他為什麼丟掉工作?」但是,這些句子都是不完整的。正確用法應該是:
He lost his job because Tom is the boss.
因為湯姆就是老闆,所以他丟掉了工作。
He lost his job since he left work early without permission.
他因為不經允許就早退而丟掉了工作。
Other examples of incomplete sentences introced by subordinating clauses include:
其他關於從屬子句的殘缺句還包括下面內容:
Even though he needs help.
雖然他需要幫助
If they study enough.
如果他們好好學習
As they had invested in the company.
因為他們投資了這家公司
Run-on Sentences
句子不連貫
Run-on sentences are sentences that:
不連貫句子指的是:
1) are not connected by appropriate linking language such as conjunctions
缺乏合適的連接詞,例如連詞。
2) use too many clauses rather than using periods and linking language such as conjunctive adverbs
使用過多的從句,而非句號和連接語,例如連接副詞
The first type leaves out a word - usually a conjunction - that is required to connect a dependent and independent clause. For example:
第一種是漏掉了一個詞——通常是連接詞——用於連接非獨立子句和獨立子句。
The students did well on the test they didn't study very much.
學生們考得很好他們沒有下多少功夫。
Anna needs a new car she spent the weekend visiting car dealerships.
安娜想買輛新車她整個周末都在約見代理商。
The first sentence should use either a conjunction 'but', or 'yet' or a subordinating conjunction 'although, even though, or though' to connect the sentence. In the second sentence, the conjunction 'so' or the subordinating conjunction 'since, as, or because' would connect the two clauses.
第一句話要麼應該加上一個連詞but,要麼加上yet,或者一個從屬連詞although, even though或though來連接前後兩句。
The students did well, yet they didn't study very much.
學生們考得很好,但他們並沒有下多少功夫。
Anna spent the weekend visiting car dealerships since she needs a new car.
因為想買輛新車,安娜整個周末都在約見代理商。
Another common run on sentence occurs when using too many clauses. This often occurs using the word 'and'.
另一種句子不連貫發生在使用太多從句的時候。常常是由於and一詞導致。
We went to the store and bought some fruit, and we went to the mall to get some clothes, and we had lunch at McDonald's, and we visited some friends.
我們去商店買了一些水果,去購物商城買了一些衣服,在麥當勞吃的午飯,又見了一些朋友。
The continuous chain of clauses using 'and' should be avoided. In general, do not write sentences that contain more than three clauses to ensure that your sentences do not become run-on sentences.
我們應該避免使用and來連接一大串的從句。一般來說,從句不要超過三個,以確保句子的連貫性。
Duplicate Subjects
兩個主語
Sometimes students use a pronoun as a plicate subject.
有時候,學生們會將代詞作為第二個主語。
Remember that each clause takes only one sentence. If you have mentioned the subject of a sentence by name, there is no need to repeat with a pronoun.
記住,每個從句只需要一句話。如果之前你已經提到主語的名字,就不需要再用代詞重復了。
Example 1:
例一:
Tom lives in Los Angeles.
湯姆住在洛杉磯。
NOT
而不是
Tom, he lives in Lost Angeles.
湯姆,他住在舊金山。
Example 2:
例二:
The students come from Vietnam.
學生們來自越南。
NOT
而不是
The students they come from Vietnam.
學生們他們來自越南。
Incorrect Tense
時態錯誤
Tense usage is a common mistake in student writing. Make sure that the tense used corresponds to the situation. In other words, if you are speaking about something that happened in the past do not use include a tense that refers to the present. For example:
時態錯誤在學生寫作中很常見。你要確保時態與事情發生的情況一致。也就是說,如果你要表達的是發生在過去的事,就不要使用現在時態。例如:
They fly to visit their parents in Toronto last week.
上周他們坐飛機去看望父母。
Alex bought a new car and drives it to her home in Los Angeles.
亞歷克斯買了一輛新車,並把它開進了洛杉磯的家。
Incorrect Verb Form
動詞形式錯誤
Another common mistake is the use of an incorrect verb form when combining with another verb. Certain verbs in English take the infinitive and others take the gerund (ing form).
另一個常見的錯誤就是在與其他動詞連用時,動詞形式的錯誤。英語中的動詞既有不定式形式,又有動名詞形式。
It's important to learn these verb combinations. Also, when using the verb as a noun, use the gerund form of the verb.
學習這些動詞的連用很重要。當動詞作為名詞使用時,就要使用動名詞形式。
He hopes finding a new job. / Correct -> He hopes to find a new job.
他想找一個新工作。
Peter avoided to invest in the project. / Correct -> Peter avoided investing in the project.
皮特沒有在這個項目上投資。
Parallel Verb Form
動詞復數形式
A related issue is the use of parallel verb forms when using a list of verbs. If you are writing in the present continuous tense, use the 'ing' form in your list. If you are using the present perfect, use the past participle, etc.
在使用多個動詞時,有一個問題就是動詞復數形式的使用。如果你是在用現在進行時進行寫作,就應該使用動詞ing形式。如果你使用的是現在完成時,就應該使用過去分詞形式。
She enjoys watching TV, play tennis, and cook. / Correct -> She enjoys watching TV, playing tennis, and cooking.
她喜歡看電視,打網球和烹飪。
I've lived in Italy, working in Germany and study in New York. / Correct -> I've lived in Italy, worked in Germany, and studied in New York.
我住在義大利,在德國工作,在紐約讀書。
Use of Time Clauses
時間從句的使用
Time clauses are introced by the time words 'when', 'before', 'after' and so on. When speaking about the present or future use the present simple tense in time clauses. If using a past tense, we usually use the past simple in a time clause.
時間從句由時間詞語引導,例如when,before,after等等。當我們表達現在或將來的事時,可以使用一般現在時的時間從句。如果使用過去時態,通常會使用過去時的時間從句。
We'll visit you when we will come next week. / Correct -> We'll visit you when we come next week.
下周我們會來看你。
She cooked dinner after he was arriving. / Correct -> She cooked dinner after he arrived.
他到了之後,她才開始煮飯。
Subject - Verb Agreement
主謂一致
Another common mistake is to use incorrect subject - verb agreement. The most common of these mistakes is the missing 's' in the present simple tense. However, there are other types of mistakes. Always look for these mistakes in the helping verb.
另一個常見的錯誤就是主謂不一致。最常見的就是一般現在時中漏掉了-s。但是,還有其他類型的錯誤。這些錯誤常發生在助動詞的使用上。
Tom play guitar in a band. / Correct -> Tom plays guitar in a band.
湯姆在樂隊里是彈吉他的。
They was sleeping when she telephoned. / Correct -> They were sleeping when she telephoned.
他打電話過來時,他們都睡著了。
Pronoun Agreement
代詞一致
Pronoun agreement mistakes take place when using a pronoun to replace a proper noun. Often this mistake is a mistake of use of a singular form rather than a plural or vice versa. However, pronoun agreement mistakes can occur in object or possessive pronouns, as well as in subject pronouns.
代詞不一致發生在用代詞來替代專有名詞的情況下。通常是使用了單復數形式的錯誤使用。但是,代詞不一致也會發生在賓語或物主代詞,和主格代名詞上。
Tom works at a company in Hamburg. He loves his job. / Correct -> Tom works at a company in Hamburg. He loves his job.
湯姆在漢堡一家公司工作。他熱愛這份工作。
Andrea and Peter studied Russian at school. He thought they were very difficult.Correct -> Andrea and Peter studied Russian at school. They thought it was very difficult.
(正確)安德里亞和皮特在學校里學習了俄語。他們覺得俄語很難。
Missing Commas After Linking Language
連接語言後漏掉了逗號
When using an introctory phrase as linking language such as a conjunctive adverb or sequencing word, use a comma after the phrase to continue the sentence.
當我們使用介紹性短語,例如連接副詞或表示順序的詞語,通常會在短語後面打上逗號來連接下文。