高一英語寫作質量分析

Ⅰ 淺談如何提高高中英語寫作能力

高中的的作文部分佔考試裡面很大的比例,因此撰寫一篇能夠獲得高分的作文高中裡面是特別重要的.那麼你如何提高中國作文水平呢?讓我們一起來看看吧!

(家教一對一輔導中)

3.開頭和結尾應簡明扼要,最好是兩行半

除了避免大肚部成分外,還不允許使用"大頭作文".建議考生在完成作文的時候最多,開頭的文章不能超過三行半.想一想,一開始就佔用太多的空間,老師的視覺會立即疲勞,這也會影響審卷老師的情緒.

總結:上面的作文高中考試的技巧,其實在寫作的時候列出來大概特別關鍵.一層是一段.這樣作文的整體就會明了很多.

Ⅱ 英語作文 高一水平

Being an ancient township, Tong Li borders on Tongli Lake on the east, Nanxin Lake on the south, adjoins Pangshan Lake on the west, Jiuli Lake on the north and Wusong Jiang River on the northwest. The town proper is divided by the streams into 7 islets interlaced with the surrounding water area, forming typical water county of the south.

With a network of lakes and waterways, Tongli has not suffered from war since it was inaccessible in the old times. Therefore more ancient buildings are preserved, among which we can still enjoy the following scenic spots 「 the Moon Viewing at the East Stream」, 「the Misty South Market at Dawn」, 「the Night Crossing at the West ferry」, 「the Spring Sight in the North Hill」, 「the Fishermen's Flute in the Water Village」 and 「the Misty Bamboo of the Chan Hill」. The traditional houses densely settle on the sides of the fine banks piled by Jinshan Stone, and winding alleys and streets paved with pebble stones still keep the ancient appearance. There are 24 bridges at the intersection of waterways. The Siben Bridge built in the Southern Song dynasty is simple and archaic. The Fu'guan Bridge built in the Yuan dynasty is grandiose.

Tongli is rich in culture. In the long run of its history, it was once famed for its achievements in the imperial examinations and has proced famous cofucianists and notables. About 40 stone tablets of different periods have been well preserved and a quite number of its steets and alleys are named after the official titles such as Zhuang-yuan Street , Tong Street , etc.

In the township of Tongli , the Ming an Qing buildings occupy four tenths of the total, among which there are grand as-many-as-nine-row houses, small exquisite courtyards and gardens. The gateway with the brick carving of Zhu Family and the wood carving of the Chong Ben Hall &Jia Yin Hall are extremely exquisite. The Yan-yi Building in the court of the Geng-le Hall is wrought so elegantly that it is like swallow flapping its wings. Huan Xiu Ge has two stories. If you remove the first floor board, fishes can be seen swimming in the clear pond beneath, full of vitality.

Lying in the township of Tongli , the Garden of Quiet Meditation was built by Ren Lansheng in 1886AD, the 11th year of the reign of Emperor Guangxu of the Qing dynasty, after he was discharged from office. 「 When in office, one should be loyal to the emperor, when away from office, one should meditate upon his previous faults.」---- It was the motto of the officials in imperial times. Hence the name 「the Garden of Quiet Meditation 」.

The garden covers an area of 10 mu. The western part is for dwelling, including 3 rows : sedan hall, tea hall and th main hall. There is also a spacious bedroom for the womenfolk. The eastern part is composed of the exterior and interior gardens. The whole construction shows no over-elaboration and reflects the peculiar architectural form of the late Qing dynasty. The 3 sides but the north of the exterior garden are halls for meeting or entertaining guests. Outside the exterior garden are pines, bamboos, wintersweet and artificial stalagmite. Inside in the courtyard is a eastward land boat, a rendezvous of the guests. The stern is combined with lattice windows and veranda. The northern side of the courtyard is the 「 Viewing Moon Loft」, from where the host together with his guests hummed verses and responded each other with poems in the quiet moonlight. In the interior garden, the pavilions, terraces, boudoirs, the winding causeways and corridors and the rockeries all surround the pond or lie close to the water, giving an illusion of floating on the water.

Although small in size, the Garden of Quiet Meditation embraces all the rockeries, ponds, buildings, vines, trees, flowers and plants that exist in the classical gardens south of the Yantze River . Furthermore, one can enjoy the scenes of the four seasons and those of guqin, chess, calligraphy and drawing. The whole garden, with the moderate and exquisite layout, amiable scenery, exhibits rich artistic flavors.

Tongli (Chinese: 同里; Pinyin: Tónglǐ) is a town in Wujiang county, on the outskirts of Suzhou. It is known for a system of canals reminiscent of Venice, Italy.

Tongli is 40 minutes away from Suzhou city. The city retains many of the features of an ancient Chinese town.

Attractions

There are several museums in Tongli. This is more like a wax museum describing the culture of China in the olden days, about Marriage, the dynasties etc.

There is also a beautiful islet called "Luo Xing" islet to be traveled by ferry.

One can enjoy a lovely dinner sitting by the canal watching a boat pass by while the small restaurant cooks some nice Suzhou food. Tongli is peaceful, serene, calm and quiet.

In 2004, Tongli together with Lu and Zhouzhuang were listed in the tentative list for UNESCO World Heritage Sites.

Jiayain Hall is also of note, and is the former home of Liu Yazi, an early 20th century actor known for his collection of gauze caps.
Tong Li is one of several towns on the outskirts of Suzhou known as Little Venice. There are roads, but the main arteries through the town are the canals. The pictures from this water city turned out much better than the town itself. I found it to be actually quite dingy, and would recommend that you try a different water city, Little Venice on your trip.

Ⅲ 如何寫英語考試質量分析

從各種方面進行細致的分析就好了。

Ⅳ 高一英語總結英語作文

如果因為你的一次失敗而墮落不前，埋怨生活的不公，那麼你的人生也就失去了意義內。不甘心就不要放棄，看不容過去就起來改變。要麼就證明自己的能力，要麼就閉嘴接受現實。所有好走的路都是下坡，失敗是可以接受的，但是沒有試圖奮斗過的失敗，都說沒有借口的零分。
生活是一杯清茶，沒有電影里的凄美，沒有小說里的浪漫，沒有歌曲里的柔情，沒有詩歌里的豪邁，但它需要你腳踏實地的實踐；生活是一張答卷，沒有具體的題目，沒有嚴格的要求，但它需要你用心靈深處的真去回答；生活是一條小徑，一條無始無終的綿延之路，沒有路標，沒有方向，它的九十九道彎，泥濘、坎坷、崎嶇、平坦。但它需要你用自己的雙腳完整地丈量，踏出自己的路來。
既然選擇了

Ⅳ 學生本人對於高一英語考試卷分析 1000字

一、整體情況分析
本次考試總分為150分，考試時間為120分鍾，考試內容主要以新課標高中英語必修三和必修四為主，重點考查學生應該掌握的英語基礎知識和基本能力，旨在夯實學生的基礎，注重階段內知識的考查和消化。試卷選材上注重題材、體裁的多樣性，所選文章內容貼近生活，貼近實際，具有時代感，體現了高中英語新課程的理念。縱觀整份試卷，有一定難度和區分度，特別是閱讀理解，對高中學生來說，確實有一定的困難。但也有一些靈活運用的試題，可信度較高，區分度較明顯。
二、具體題型分析
1.閱讀
本次閱讀理解有四篇，內容較多，題量較大。尤其是C，D失分較多。從試卷可以看出，第28,29,30,31題目失分較多，要加強訓練。另外，閱讀策略的運用不好。
2.完形
完型填空考查學生在閱讀理解的基礎上對語篇、詞彙和語法知識掌握情況，要求學生綜合運用所學知識，選出最佳選項，是綜合性較強的題型。從試卷可以看出，學生在某些句子的理解和具體語境的處理上還欠缺能力，由此可見學生讀題不夠細心，容易犯習慣性錯誤，應該指導學生做題的嚴謹性。
4.單句改錯
單句改錯不僅考查學生基礎詞彙的掌握，而且涉及基本詞法和句法知識。從試卷可以看出，其中第73,74,79失分較多。許多課文中的原句，學生不會做。
4.漢譯英
漢譯英有一句是平時做過的原句，許多同學做不對。學生對於片語的運用不夠牢固，時態，單復數，以及同義詞的運用會欠缺。
5.作文
就這次期中考試的書面表達題關於寫信，選材非常貼近學生的生活實際，學生有話可說，應是易得分題，但學生此題語言表達口語成分太多，內容缺乏有序性和連貫性，層次段落不清晰，對句子不能靈活處理，語法知識欠缺，出現句子成分殘缺和不會的單詞用漢語拼音替代等現象;部分學生審題不清，所表達內容與要求話題不符;還有部分學生書寫潦草，卷面塗抹，導致失分;同時還有少許學生東抄西拼，抄襲閱讀，以圖矇混過關。
書面表達考查學生運用所學詞彙、句型、時態、語態等語言知識。從評分標准可以看出，書面表達對內容要點的概括、語言能力的組織以及詞數要求、書寫程度等都有很高的要求。學生中單詞寫不出，時態運用錯誤是普遍現象。有些雖然得分較高，但是完全寫得清楚的同學很少。今後要加強訓練學生的書面表達能力。
書面表達方面的問題主要為：
1. 受漢語思維的干擾。如同學們大都寫我非常喜歡他：I very like he.我喜歡她是因為她很努力地實現夢想：I like her is because she work hard to come true his dream.這樣的中英文結合的句子還很多。
2. 書寫差。要求同學們從現在起對書寫引起足夠的重視，並在平時採用描字帖等形式多加練習。
3.缺少高級詞彙和句型。大部分同學的文章只是若干多簡單句的羅列，缺乏必要的過渡詞和高級句式，以至於使文章顯得失色。真正吸引閱讀者眼球的是類似於文中be concened about,take an active part in，ever since以及定語從句等的運用。要想達到這種高度，需要同學們平時學習過程中做到鑒賞---積累---有意識的運用。
三、對下一階段英語教學工作的思考和建議
1、夯實語言基礎知識
從學生在閱讀理解、完形填空部分的解答以及英漢互譯、作文怎樣書寫可以看出，很多學生的詞彙和語法知識仍不夠扎實，還存在較多問題，因此，強調基礎知識的學習毫不為過。但需要注意的是，此處的基礎知識指的是語言知識(語法和詞彙)的靈活運用，而非一條條的語法規則，必須結合具體語境，倡導在語境中教學，在語境中學習，語境中運用。另外，在平時詞彙教學中，抓重點單詞，特別是動詞的教學，適當擴充該詞的其他相關用法，增補一些與課文有關的新詞或有用的詞彙。
2、切實培養閱讀能力
新課標在談到教學中應該注意的幾個問題時，明確說明加強「聽、說、讀、寫」綜合運用，側重培養閱讀能力。因為閱讀是理解和吸收語言信息的最重要手段，它能給學生提供更為豐富的教育教學資源，有助於他們開闊視野、豐富語言知識、擴大詞彙量和了解英語國家的社會及文化等。在平時教學中，應爭取讓學生多掌握一些英語文化背景知識，經常向學生提供一些供其精讀或泛讀的英語文章，適當加大他們的語言材料輸入量，擴大閱讀量和拓寬知識面，培養學生的閱讀理解能力，加強閱讀策略的運用，同時引導學生逐步提高閱讀速度，培養學生分解和整合信息的技能，從而提高閱讀理解水平。
3、逐漸加強寫作教學
從具體情況來看，學生在考試過程中還存在著審題不細致，要點不齊全，表達不清楚，連接不自然，書寫不整潔。今後要逐漸加強寫作教學，從基本句型，常用單詞、片語的用法入手，加強單句翻譯，並結合具體語境判斷使用適當的單詞、片語和基本句型。背誦部分名篇時文。適當介紹常見體裁的寫作技巧，常見題材的相關句型句式，並且選用相關連接詞，使文章顯得語句恰當，結構清晰，連貫流暢。今後准備每天給學生布置翻譯任務，每天一句翻譯，加強輸出能力的培養。
4、注重學習方法指導
語言學習一定要花功夫，要養成良好的習慣，講究方法的運用，要戒除急功近利，好高騖遠。特別是高一起始階段，要採用取形式多樣、內容豐富、興趣盎然的閱讀材料和介紹比較適合學生的好方法、好措施、好做法，來積極引導學生逐漸對英語學科的興趣，增強他們學習英語的信心。當然，沒有放之四海而皆準的方法，適合該學生的方法就是最好的方法。
5、加強心理疏導引導
目前學生的內心世界比較復雜，情感也比較脆弱，心理素質不太健康，他們需要有一個可以向他傾訴和聆聽的人，所以我們老師可以利用適當機會，放下師道尊嚴的架子，多跟學生接觸，多走進學生的內心世界，傾聽他們的心聲，了解他們的需求，感知他們的心理。這樣為我們因材施教，個別對待創造條件，從而取得教育教學的最佳效果。
一個學期已經結束，我們唯有努力奮斗，踏實做好本職工作，加強教科研，調動全體備課組成員的力量和積極性，關心每一個學生，關注每一個細節，才能取得整體的不斷進步。

Ⅵ 高一英語作文評語

總體上來看，文章寫的是有一定水平的，不過作為一篇好的作文評價，我覺得有一版點你要注意，那就權是文章一定不要消極，例如：I hate, I hate a thing,which is called lifetime,is a short life.這一句你要表達的心情我能夠理解，畢竟生命是寶貴的，它很短暫，能不能發揮它的價值，就看你是怎樣看待它的，我個人認為諸如If I could live in the world for ever……，If I could live in the world for ever……這些句子應該在作文中（尤其是大型考試的作文）盡量不要出現，文章應盡量表現出積極的，向上的生活態度和價值觀，另外文中：北戴河 這個詞一定要用 Beidaihe，不要用中文，其他的注意語法和單詞拼寫就可以了，it was very bright WITH the black cloud.大寫部分個人認為改為IN 或 ON比較合適。

Ⅶ 高一學生的英語作文，請教師朋友點評、打分

A person who has a lot of knowledge must read many kinds of books開頭可以用更有文採的詞句，且應該用非限制性定語從句：A person， who equips with plenty of knowledge,never fail to read different kinds of books.有一個好的開頭，且有明晰的結構，沒有語法錯誤，拿24分以上就不困難了．本文思路還是清晰的，尤其很好的一點是用了：FIRST，SECOND等的聯系詞，這讓文章一目瞭然，也是外國人，乃至托福雅思作文中都常用的．不過本文的語法錯誤似乎多了些：
1. but the most important is we ought to read the books, 應改為the most important thing is that...（that在表語從句中不能省略）
2. which are good for us改為which is good for us.
3. you'd better not to改為you 'd better not
4.but the problem is 後要加THAT，理由同1．
5．someone特指人，不能代物
6．Finally, don』t be shy to ask questions, 中，逗號應改為句號．這當中有一個很重要的原則：謂語單一原則，即一個句子中只有一套主謂．而逗號間隔仍是一個句子．

在高考中語法錯誤扣分嚴重，所以記得仔細檢查，不確定的用法不要用.

另一點就是文采了，本文的語言過於平實，缺少讓人眼前一亮的好詞好句。即使詞彙量不大，用一些小詞，或否定句，也能讓文章更漂亮。如我修改後的開頭句，這些詞都學過，加起來讓文章在印象上已經拿到24分以上了。再舉一些例子：
we don't have enough time to read them completely.
__we can't devote all our time to them completely.

your teachers can be all the people who have knowledge. By the way, a dictionary is the best teacher for you.
___your teachers are right there waiting for your questions as well as your dictionary.

建議你可以作一個常用詞漂亮用法的歸納：如花時間作某事（這整天用到，可絕大多數只會用spend (time)doing sth,其實還有很多
devote your time to sth
consentrate on
set aside (time ) to do
it take you (time) to do
sacrifice (time ) for 等等

最後打一個分，21分，加油吧，還有很大進步空間呢！

Ⅷ 高一水平英語作文

my 2011
The coming year 2011 is so important and special for me , because I wil be an grade three highmiddle school student .
During June next year I have to take the impoatant exam ,which will influce my whole life completely.I am kinds of nervourse and scared to face it.I am afraid that I would fail the exam .then my life will go where ?
So I know that I must study hard and try me best to a good job,and also I have to adjust myself to the coming hard time .I have to say to myself usually :"Come on! ahead !"
I Believe that nothing is impossibale!