Ⅰ 閱卷老師總結:英語作文常見10大問題,你中槍否
有很多同學和家長都向我咨詢過提高英語成績的好方法。前段時間也給大家分享過一些英語單詞的記憶,英語語法,那麼今天我就著重講一下英語作文。
英語作文的寫作技巧固然重要,但是我們在寫作之前必須弄清楚要規避哪些常犯的錯誤,只有了解了這些常規性的錯誤,寫作時才會避免自己犯錯,英語作文得分自然不會低。
在我的教學經驗中,大部分同學幾乎都會犯這10完全可以避免的錯誤。
1. 審題不清
無論是語文作文還是英語作文,偏離了主題都是致命傷!只要偏題,不管你語言如何規范、准確,都會被判零分。所以,同學們在寫作之前一定要把題看清楚,最好是拿筆把關鍵詞勾畫出來,以免遺漏或錯誤理解導致偏題。
比如作文要求寫一項最喜歡的課外活動,有些同學審題不清就容易寫成「我最喜歡的活動」偏離了「課外活動」這一主題,這樣寫出來的作文基本得分不高。
2.拼寫錯誤
單詞拼寫一直是很多同學的硬傷,單詞拼寫是由單詞記憶得好壞直接決定的。一篇文章里有大量的錯誤拼寫不僅會讓閱卷老師覺得英語基本功差,同時也直接影響作文內容的表達,閱卷老師都看不懂這篇作文,得分自然就很低。
因此我建議,同學們在平時的學習中要重視單詞背誦,如果在作文中有不確定的單詞,那最好是用一個比較簡單的同義詞來代替。
3.名詞單復數的錯誤
名詞的單復數是一個很重要的知識點,但是它其實是很簡單的,幾乎所有的同學都能掌握,但就是由於粗心大意經常寫錯。
例如「我父親和母親都是教師」這一句話,我經常看到很多同學這樣寫「my father and my mother is all teacher.」這里的「teacher」是「father」和「mother」的指代,是復數,用單數的「is」就是錯誤的。正確的應該這樣「my father and my mother are both teachers.」
而這種低級錯誤是完全可以避免的,另外,在改錯題和選擇題中也會出現這樣的情況,大家要注意這種送分題。
4.缺少動詞
因為語言習慣的不同,一些同學在作文中常缺少動詞,因為漢語的一句話中,可以不表達動詞,而在英語中則不行。
例如「我很高興我能來到中國」,這個句子沒有動詞作謂語,而用形容詞,但英語形容詞不能作謂語。很多同學這樣錯誤的翻譯「I happy I can come to china.」裡面就缺少主語「I」後面應該接的動詞做謂語,正確的應該是「I am happy I can come to china.」
5.缺少介詞、冠詞等
還有一些同學因為沒有熟練掌握介詞或者冠詞的用法,不了解中英文語言習慣的不同,也會出現明顯的錯誤,造成丟分現象。
例如:「因為大雨我們不能舉行運動會」錯誤的寫法為「because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting.」正確的應該這樣寫「because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting.」
6.代詞的錯用
在英語有很多代詞的形式,包括主格、賓格、物主代詞、反身代詞等。而漢語中沒有主格和賓格、形容詞性物主代詞和名次性物主代詞之分。
此外漢語中很多時候不用物主代詞,而英語中物主代詞是不可省略的,代詞的誤用是考生最容易發生的錯誤。
例如:錯誤的寫法「I mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father.」這里的「I」就用錯了,漢語中時常說「我母親……「,但是在英語中應該是」我的母親「,所以正確的應該這樣寫:「my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father.」
7.句子不完整
有的同學沒有弄清楚英語中的句子結構,因此長出現只寫半句的現象。
例如:錯誤的「many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. for example, my friend in high school.」這段文章的第二句話沒有動詞,他不能獨立構成一個句子。這是一個非常常見的錯誤,修改的方法是將兩個句子連接起來,把中間的句號改為逗號即可,正確的「many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school.」
8.前後不一致
這也是很多同學常犯的錯誤:數量的不一致、時態不一致及代詞不一致、主謂不一致等。
例如:1. 「人一旦有了知識,他就能想干什麼就干什麼。」錯誤的寫法「when one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do.」這里one是單數第三人稱,因而本句的have應改為has ;同理,want應改為wants。這是典型的主謂不一致。因此,應該這樣改「when one has knowledge , he can do what he wants (to do)."
9.時態、人稱和數的搭配錯誤
漢語動詞無時態、人稱和數的變化,而對英語來說,這些都至關重要,這也是英語語法中的難點。
例如「當我到達車站時火車就已經開走了」,錯誤的寫法「when I get to the station the train leave.」這句就是典型的時態錯誤,錯誤的示例中用的一般現在時,但是第一人稱「I」在說出這句話時,無論是「到達車站」這件事還是「火車開走了」這件事都已經發生了,那麼當「我到達車站時」發生在說出這句話的現在之前,所以應該用一般過去時「get」應該改為過去式「got」;「火車已經開走了」是在「我到達車站」之前就開走了,所以是過去的過去,因此,要用had left(left是leave的過去式)。正確的應該是「when i got to the station the train had left.」
10.其他錯誤
除了上述的9點語法與拼寫的錯誤之外,還有單詞的大小寫、標點符號的錯誤等,以及形容詞和副詞的混淆、連詞的誤用等等。
其實這些錯誤都是基礎知識沒有掌握好或者粗心大意造成的,同學們平時應該多加練習,「熟能生巧」,只要做得多了,自然錯誤就少了。
Ⅱ because可以做英語作文開頭嗎
英語作文的開頭,沒有具體規定能用什麼單詞,不能用什麼單詞開頭。
但是一專般,不先陳述原因,屬要先陳述現象,再附加原因,這樣不會太唐突。
with the rapid development of our society, more and more people pay attention to their health. Because health is more significant than anything else.
這樣的表達,是不是比Because 開頭更順暢
Ⅲ 寫一篇自己生病的初中二年級英語作文。寫作中盡量使用because和should.
Yesterday, I felt very tired. When I was in class, I felt sleepy and could not listen to the
teacher carefully. And I did not want to eat anything at home. I went to bed early. This
morning, I felt dizzy and my head was hot. My mom said I had a fever. She took me to see a
doctor. He gave me some medicines and told me to have a good rest at home. It was not too
serious. I hope I can be good soon.
Ⅳ 英語小作文:I want to go to__________because___________________
school,we need knowledge
bed,I'm tired
have a drink,I'm thirsty
play ,I『m tired of staying here
Ⅳ 英語議論文怎麼寫格式
一,議論文的格式:
議論文的格式應由三個部分組成:
立論部分,
2.論證部分。
3.結論部分。
二,一般說來,議論文可分三個基本段落來寫:
1.第一段引出話題,
2.第二段立論且加以論證,
3.第三段給出明確的結論。
第二段是中心段落,應試者應將主要的內容放在第二段中,同時也要注意開篇及結尾段落的完整性,且應盡量做到首尾呼應,切忌前後矛盾。
三,寫作攻略:
初中生在寫議論文時要首先考慮自己的觀點是什麼,明確觀點後要圍繞觀點進行論證,最後再進行總結。議論文在寫作手法上以議論為主,但有時也要運用說明,敘述,描寫等手法。初中議論文的寫作格式一般為三段式:開頭,主體和結尾。
四,一般寫作步驟如下:
1.確定主題,引出論點。
2.通過擺事實,講道理來支持自己的觀點。所用的事實,原因,理由應緊密地同結論聯系在一起。
3.得出結論。要簡明扼要,回扣全文。
(5)英語議論文寫作中because擴展閱讀:
1.模板範文
Many students think thatthey do not need to learn Engish,becausethey don't plan to go abroad。
But as to me,I am not in favour of this point of view。Ithinkthat English is very important to us, so we should learn English well。First of all,in the opening times, if you want to do business with foreigners, you must use English because most of them speak and write in English。
Secondly,in the world today most books are written in English。If you know much English, you can read newspapers and magazines in English。Most importantof all,you can learn something more widely。
All in all,I hold the opinion thatwe should learn English well。 And I hopethat all the students can use English freely。
Ⅵ 求以 because so 題目的一篇英語作文
Everyone wants to succeed.So do I.But there are a lot of difficulties on the way to succeed and stop us from being succeed.So,how can we do?There are some advice to you.
First,you should set a goal.Because a gole can make you konw what should you do and let you go towards to success all the time.Second,you must make a plan for you a goal.This is a key to success.Due to the fact that,a plan will let you understand the next set clearly.And then,you will near to the success.Third,you have to have a never-give-up attitude.Like this,you will be succeed nearly.Because,all of everything's result come from everybody's attitude.
These are all my suggestions.I think if you do things like these,you will be succeed in the future.At last ,beliebe in yourself.Beacuse there is a saying:"There is a will,there is a way"
Ⅶ 在120字左右英語作文,其中because用的多
On Blessing Messages
Currently,there has been an increasing number of adolescents and alts taking cellphones as their main tools of communication.Every time on festivals,large quantities of blessing messages will be transmitted and retransmitted among relatives and friends.However,a heated debate on whether the blessing messages should be retransmitted have aroused the public's attention.
Majority of indivials support the idea that the blessing messages should not be retransmitted.On one respect,it is not sincere and serious for one to express his best wish by ing others' blessing messages.On the other respect,although some of the blessing messages written by oneself is not as brilliant as the intricate and well-designed ones from the Internet or others,nothing can be compared with the heartfelt wishes revealed in the simple words.
Nevertheless,minority of folks refute this idea.They argue that besides the sincere wishes,the elegance of words are also of profound signifacance which will facilitates the expression.
After weighing the pros and cons,I am apt to accept the previous perspective that the blessing messages should not be retransmitted.However,on the basis of writing the blessing messages by himself,it can never be too perfect for one to take others' excellent messages as reference.
Ⅷ 用because 和i think寫一段話【英語小作文】
Yesterday was Monday.I got up late,because my alarm clock did't go off.I think I should go to sleep early and adjust my alarm clock.
Ⅸ 我寫英語作文時because用的好像太多了 用什麼換一下
用e to ,也是因為的意思
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