大學英語四級考試中作文部分主要考查學生運用英語進行書面表達的能力,要求考生在規定時間內寫出一篇內容完整、用詞恰當、語義連貫的短文。然而在考試過程中,看到作文題目後,有些考生往往不知如何下筆;有些考生挖空心思地堆砌詞語,導致文不對題、詞不達意。那麼,怎樣才能在考試中寫出好作文,取得高分呢?
關鍵詞:大學英語 四級 寫作 策略
大學英語寫作是一種語言技能,是衡量學生英語綜合水平和應用能力的一個重要指標。但當前的大學英語教學對寫作的重要性還不夠重視,寫作成為學生英語技能中最薄弱的環節。作文好壞直接影響整個卷面成績,針對這種現象,許多專家、學者從各方面找原因。筆者從學生在寫作中存在的問題入手,尋找原因,探索其對策,目的在於提高學生英語寫作能力,使學生真正達到書面交際的目的。
一、英語四級寫作中常見的問題
1、常見詞的錯誤
學生常見的用詞錯誤除單詞拼寫錯誤外,包括冠詞、代詞、形容詞、副詞、分詞的誤用,還有詞語搭配錯誤,用詞寬泛。詞彙簡單、平淡、重復等。
2、常見句式錯誤
句子是能單獨存在並能表達相對完整意義的語法單位。好的英語句子不僅僅是用詞得當,拼寫無誤,語法正確。還必須結構嚴謹,語言規范,富於邏輯性,能最有效、最准確地表達思想。好的句子應具備完整性、連貫性和明確性。
3、常見篇章問題
一篇文章應該具有完整性、唯一性和連貫性。四級寫作中常見的篇章問題包括:主題不明確、詳略不當以及結構模糊。為了應對這些問題。
二、提高英語四級寫作策略實施
1、了解英語寫作的測試目的,准確把握題目的要求,迅速梳理寫作思路
英語寫作測試,其實主要還是要考查學生組織英語語言的能力和用英語表達思想的能力,體裁不外乎議論文、說明文和應用文,主題也是在大學生熟知話題基礎上的翻新或擴展。縱觀歷年的四級作文題,變化趨勢是從三段論的議論文向實用性更強的應用文體,尤其是向書信寫作方面傾斜。考生平時應有意識地就他們感興趣的一些話題進行思考和拓展,爭取在實踐中磨練出敏銳的審題能力。
到了大學階段,學生還是非常善於思考的,他們不僅想像力非常豐富,晚上做夢,還經常daydream,各有獨特的思維和寫作思路。但是,如何將千頭萬緒的思路梳理清楚,則必須有真功夫。為此,在進行四級寫作時,考生一定要首先形成自己的觀點,之後合理運用一些手段。如常用的有四種:陳述理由、舉例說明、提供數據、下定義等,之後充分就此展開論說。這樣通過高效思考,嚴密組織,再輔以提綱形式的文章架構,考生一定會寫出符合規范的文章
2、擴充單詞量,包裝語言
大學英語四級考試中,詞彙和語法知識將融入各部分試題中,不再單獨列項考核。要達到大學英語四級考試所考核的各項技能要求,考生掌握的詞彙量應達到4500個單詞和700個片語(見《大學英語課程教學要求(試行)》參考詞彙表)。要解決學生詞彙量不足的狀況,不是一蹴而就的事情,學生應該循序漸進,逐步積累。具體來說,學生應該平時的英語學習過程中增大閱讀量,在閱讀過程中發現新詞彙,積累新詞彙。對於新學習的詞彙,學生應該增加其同義詞,反義詞的學習,以新代舊,加深印象,夯實已經認知單詞的用法。
針對四級考試大都是議論文,而議論文是由開頭、結尾、啟轉、分析、舉例、比較等部分所組成的,其中都有些固定而漂亮的句型來表達。由於這些句型都是地道的英語,是經過千錘百煉,可以放心的拿來使用,背誦並模仿這些地道的英語表達句式非常有助於考生寫出高質量的作文。當然,在任何寫作完成後都一定要有潤色包裝詞彙,並仔細檢查,清除單詞拼寫,時態不一致等低端錯誤,掃清高分作文的障礙。
3、加強閱讀、豐富和積累寫作素材
閱讀和寫作是相輔相成的,閱讀是寫作的基礎,為寫作提供所要表達的內容語言材料.是語言輸入的重要途徑之一。寫不僅有助於鞏固山閱讀和聽輸入的語言材料,促使語言知識的內在化,提高語言運用的准確性,而且還能為實質性的口語能力打下扎實的基礎。由於學生平時語言輸入不足,他們大腦中儲備的語言信息非常有限。「以至不得不用漢語的思維,英語的詞彙,依靠語法編造句子。」當學生在沒有足夠的語言輸入情況下進行書面交際,必然會產生大量不規范的語言輸出。眾所周知,我國傳統的外語教學是十分重視閱讀的,因為大量閱讀有助於學生了解英語國家的文化背景,有助於鞏固和擴大學生詞彙量,提高學生的閱讀能力。培養語感,為成功的寫作奠定必要的基礎。實踐證明,閱讀能力強的學生寫出的文章在句法、詞彙、內容及篇章結構方面比閱讀能力差的學生要好。在平時教學中教師應鼓勵學生大量閱讀英語原文。積累豐富的語言材料,這樣寫出的文章才能更為有血有肉、豐富多彩。針對學生語言輸入嚴重不足,可引導學生充分利用現有的精、泛讀材料,將里邊出現的優美的詞句熟記或背誦,並鼓勵學生將所學所記的新詞、句型及精美句子用於寫作。如遇到優秀的篇章或段落時,提示學生研究作者的寫作思路和思想內容,幫助學生分析課文的寫作方法和技巧,欣賞其表達法及遣詞造句的優美和准確,並在自己的寫作中加以模仿和運用。如此讀讀寫寫,寫寫讀讀,學生的寫作水平很快就提高了。
三、結語
學生提高寫作能力,要想在四級考試中作文取得高分,不是一朝一夕的事情,要經過教師和學生長期不懈的共同努力才能獲得。如果學生們在平時多下功夫,在日常的學習中努力積累知識,多學多練打下牢固的基礎,在考試中講究寫作技巧,正如一句英語言語所講:Practice makes perfect. 考生一定能夠發揮出水平,潤色出高質量高分數的文章來。
『貳』 求一篇大學英語作文,議論文~
What animals mean to human being, close friends or lists of recipe? Some people consider that animals should be regarded as friends instead of food or sources of clothing, while the opponents think animals are born to service for human being.
As far as I am concerned, I advocate the former』 opinoin. There are two main reasons for that. First of all, it is known that more and more rare animals are endangered, because of the human being』s capture. People peel off the animals』 skin to make coats and use their further to make clothes, even eating the meat of extinct animals and don』t care whether the food is delious or not, only because it is rare and not easily available. Which definitely leads to the extinction of certain animals. On the other hand, with the development of civilization, people should acknowledge that every creature has its right to live. Which guaranteea the harmony of the earth. Thus people need to show their respect to the animals and let them live better instead of hurting them or killing them. This behavior should be forbidden in today』s civilized circumstance.
In conclusion, presently animals are no longer regarded as sources of food and clothing. In stead, animals are people』s close friends who can company people especially to the olders who always like rearing the pets with whose company the olders don』t feel lonely any more. For those animals who are disapearing, people need to pay more attention to them to aviod their extinction. Otherwise people could only see them in museum, not in the nature. What a pity.
『叄』 國內外對大學英語作文進行糾錯研究的名家和論文有哪些謝謝解答
可以說這方面的名家是沒有的。你身邊的英語老師就是最好的名家。論文,我有幾篇。但是我怎麼給你呢?
『肆』 關於提高大學生英語寫作的論文
1加強閱讀,擴大詞彙量
2注意英漢差異,克服「中國式英語」
3加強理論教學,發揮範文的作用
4重視語言基礎教學,恰當運用英語連接詞
5發揮學生的主體性,激發寫作熱情
6堅持寫作訓練,持之以恆
『伍』 大學英語作文 議論文 和 記敘文 中能用的萬能模板
對比觀點題型
(1) 要求論述兩個對立的觀點並給出自己的看法。
1. 有一些人認為。。。
2. 另一些人認為。。。
3. 我的看法。。。
The topic of ①-----------------(主題)is becoming more and more
popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A
is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).
While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.
Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------(理由二). Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三).
From my point of view, I think ⑧-----------(我的觀點). The reason is that ⑨----------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .
(2) 給出一個觀點,要求考生反對這一觀點
Some people believe that ①----------------(觀點一). For example, they think ②-----------------(舉例說明).And it will bring them ③-----------------(為他們帶來的好處).
In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④-------------(我不同意該看法的理由一). For another thing, ⑤-----------------(反對的理由之二).
Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥------------------(我對文章所討論主題的看法).
闡述主題題型
要求從一句話或一個主題出發,按照提綱的要求進行論述.
1. 闡述名言或主題所蘊涵的意義.
2. 分析並舉例使其更充實.
The good old proverb ----------------(名言或諺語)reminds us that
-------------(釋義). Indeed, we can learn many things form it.
First of all,-----------------(理由一). For example, -------------------(舉例說明). Secondly,----------------(理由二). Another case is that ----------(舉例說明). Furthermore , ------------(理由三).
In my opinion, ----------------(我的觀點). In short, whatever you do, please
remember the say------A. If you understand it and apply it to your study or
work, you」ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.
解決方法題型
要求考生列舉出解決問題的多種途徑
1. 問題現狀
2. 怎樣解決(解決方案的優缺點)
In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and
more serious. First, ------------(說明A的現狀).Second, ---------------(舉例進一步說明現狀)
Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with
the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解決方法一). For another -------------(解決方法二). Finally, --------------(解決方法三).
Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解決方法). Consequently, I』m confident
that a bright future is awaiting us because --------------(帶來的好處).
說明利弊題型
這種題型往往要求先說明一下現狀,再對比事物本身的利弊,有時也會單從一個角度(利或弊)出發,最後往往要求考生表明自己的態度(或對事物前景提出預測)
1. 說明事物現狀
2. 事物本身的優缺點(或一方面)
3. 你對現狀(或前景)的看法
Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily
life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ----------------(A的優點之一). Besides -------------------(A的優點之二).
But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of
the important disadvantages is that ----------------(A的第一個缺點).To make matters
worse,------------------(A的第二個缺點).
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the
negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法).
(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we
should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.
Only by this way, ---------------(對前景的預測).)
議論文的框架
(1) 不同觀點列舉型( 選擇型 )
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文題目___. But it is well known
that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A
majority of people think that _ 觀點一. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二___. So it goes without saying that ___觀點一_____.
People,however,.Somepeoplehold the idea that ___觀點二_______. In their point of
view, on the one hand, ___原因一_______. On the other hand,
____原因二_____. Therefore, thereis nodoubtthat ___觀點二______.
As far as I am concerned, Ifirmlysupporttheviewthat __觀點一或二______.Itis not only because ________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more ________.
(2)利弊型的議論文
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)___作文題目______. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __題目議題_____. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, ___優點一______. And secondly ___優點二_____.
Just As a popular saying goes, "every coin has two sides", __討論議題______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, ___缺點一______. In addition, ____缺點二______.
To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __討論議題____ into full play, and
rece the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will
definitely make a better use of the ____討論議題___.
( 3 ) 答題性議論文
Currently, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)__作文題目_______ .It is really an important concern to every one of us. As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.
As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem.
First of all, 途徑一. In addition, another way contributing to success
of the solving problem is 途徑二.
Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文題目______, we should find a
number of various ways. But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve
the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.
( 4 ) 諺語警句性議論文
It is well know to us that the proverb: " ___諺語_______" has a profound
significance and value not only in our job but also in our study. It means ____諺語的含義_______. The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows. ( also theoretically )
A case in point is ___例子一______. Therefore, it is goes without
saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____諺語_____.
With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing
number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to
the saying: ____諺語_____. The more we are aware of the
significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily
study and job..