1. 幫忙看一下我寫的這篇英語作文有什麼重大語法錯誤，幫忙改一下，提一些寫作建議。萬分感激。（四級作文）
寫的不錯，ingoring 拼寫錯誤，其他沒問題
What the drawing vividly depicts is that people play computer in modern life when working,playing,staying at home or sleeping.The picture illustrates that the time of people play computer increasingly than before.Playing computer account for more time than before.
This no deny that computer have important impact in modern life.It can broading our horizon,working efficultly communicating conveniencly.Whereas,this is a largely harm to our eyes because play computer long time.We concentrate on computer,ingoring other interesting incidents.
2. 英語語法錯誤
你這句子讀上去奇奇怪怪的，幫你改了一下
A new law was issued （law 不能用publish做動詞，in可以省略）回this week and it required （時態一致）答children must frequently visit （小輩拜訪長輩應該不是被動吧） their parents whose age were over （使用定語從句，超過60歲介詞用over）60 years old.
3. 求英語高手查看語法錯誤。
In this article Mansell reviews the trend of smoking for the young is on the rise and points out some approaches to prevent or solve the issue. The author uses data gained from the experiment and The FDA, which is meant to protect the(應該去掉) American consumer. They put people into three different groups and each group gains different things, (應該去掉) in six months,（改為。） They got the data about(應該去掉) what they expected to get. Their researches focus on standardizing the habit of smoking for the young and how do(應該去掉) parents help their children to quit smoking. This article is useful to my research topic（the topic in my research）, it (which)covers that there are a (應該去掉) several ways of stopping(to stop) the young from swallowing in smoking, such as do(doing) more exercises. The main limitation is that there are no others (other)experiments to support his opinion; only one experiment cannot convince people to believe what it is. Thus, the author indicates that further study is needed into teenage smoking to find what works best, （改為。） Therefore, more experiments will be testing(tested) in the future and outcomes(outcome) will be showing (showed)as soon as possible.
4. 英語中常見的語法錯誤
所謂的常見個人覺得因人而異。有的人常犯其他人不一定。建議樓主在平時的學習中注意積累，到復習的時候溫習一下，大有裨益。
祝你學業進步！
5. 英語語法有哪些常見錯誤
您好
常見英語語法錯誤
1．句子成分殘缺不全
We always workingtill late at night before taking exams.（誤）
We are alwaysworking /We always work till late at night before taking exams（正）
We should readbooks may be useful to us. （誤）
We should readbooks which may be useful to us. （正）
2．句子成分多餘
This test is end,but there is another test is waiting for you. （誤）
One test ends, butanother is waiting for you. （正）
The driver of thered car was died on the spot. （誤）
The driver of thered car died on the spot. （正）
3．主謂不一致
Someone/Somebodythink that reading should be selective. （誤）
Some think thatreading should be selective. （正）
My sister go tothe cinema at least once a week. （誤）
My sister goes tothe cinema at least once a week. （正）
4．動詞時態、語態的誤用
I was walkingalong the road, and there are not so many cars on the street. （誤）
I was walkingalong the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street. （正）
We have little time to read some books which we interest. （誤）
We have littletime to read some books in which we are interested. （正）
I am a student who has studying in the college for two years. （誤）
I have beenstudying in the college for two years（正）
5．詞類混淆
It is my pointthat reading must be selectively. （誤）
In my opinion,reading must be selective. （正）
Honest is so important for everyperson. （誤）
Honesty is soimportant for everyone. （正）
The old man was hit by a car when he across the street. （誤）
The old man washit by a car when he was crossing the street. （正）
6．名詞可數與不可數的誤用
Too much tests aredisadvantage for students』 study. （誤）
Too many tests aredisadvantageous to students. （正）
In modern society, people are under various pressures（誤）
In modern society,people are under various kinds of pressure. （正）
7．動詞及物與不及物的誤用
The trafficaccident was taken place at the junction of two highways. （誤）
The trafficaccident took place at the junction of two highways. （正）
Because of his excellent performance, the boss rose his salary. （誤）
Because of hisexcellent performance, the boss raised his salary. （正）
8．介詞to和不定式符號的混淆
Too many testswill do harm to cultivate our independent thinking. （誤）
Too many testswill do harm to the cultivation of our independent thinking. （正）
All these contributed to solve the serious problem. （誤）
All thesecontributed to the solution to the serious problem. （正）
9．情態動詞的誤用
It may not good toour health. （誤）
It may be not goodto our health. （正）
They should spent much time. （誤）
They should spendmuch time. （正）
10. There be句型的誤用
There exists somenew problems such as being dishonest. （誤）
There exist/arisesome new problems such as being dishonest. （正）
There are many way to solve the tuition and fees of college ecation. （誤）
There are manyways to raise the money for the tuition and fees for college ecation. （正）
1.動賓搭配不當
We must payattention to it and make solutions to the problem. （誤）
We must payattention and find a solution to the problem. （正）
It also may help you to make success. （誤）
It may also helpyou succeed/obtain your goal. （正）
2.根據中文逐字硬譯
If someone』sfamily situation is not well, he can apply for loan to bank. （誤）
If one』s family isnot well off, he can apply to the bank for a loan. （正）
Let alone touch the outside world of campus/keep a good body health（誤）
Let alone get intouch with the world outside of the campus/keep fit（正）
上面這些錯誤比較典型、集中，請大家務必要注意，其他的錯誤，如單詞拼寫、大小寫、標點符號的誤用等，可謂千姿百態，無奇不有，在此就不一一列舉。
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6. 英語語法錯誤檢查
When we see them, some of us （復may be happy to crazy）.句子制要有謂語
We can see many stars （in the news on the outdoor photos）, whether （attending）some formal activities or （going） for a walk, mostly is wearing sunglasses. 注意介詞,動名詞
（Like the famous singer Madonna, she always wears ）these big sunglasses which almost can obscure half of the face.
句子要有主語
7. 英語句子有語法錯誤嗎
整體表達還是非常流暢的，個別措辭不準確，比如original改成initial較好。however連詞用的不很恰回當，答意思不很清晰，不知道你本來想如何表達。
1，in front of the people，加上the，表示「人民，民眾」，如果表示「人們」一般後面加上定語比較合適，例如：in front of the people you care about，你關心的人。
因此建議：in front of people
2，because和so不能連用，把第二句的so去掉，因為兩個都是連詞，一起用，就不是完整的一句話了。
8. 幫我檢查一下有沒有大的語法錯誤~（英語）
我幫你改了一下，是不是更上一層版樓權？
Oh,my darling
are u listening
a song is singing
it tells u my loving
it is feeling of wondering,
if i can only say it while sleeping
who's ever heard my heart crying
next time i will be trying
try forgetting
because i can not help loving
oh,my darling
please stop escaping and running
all you know is my feeling
9. 我是個外國學生，「（英語寫作時）無重大語法錯誤」是什麼意思
That means that there are no major grammatical errors in your passage.也就是說你的文章基本還可以，沒有有版多大問題。權Understand？
10. 英語語法錯誤！
Spainsh----Spanish
they still living in MM.------they still live in MM
as i said i'm not trying to be a rich people------as i said i was not trying to be a rich person
which i don't want to living in a too much pressure just becouse the money--------------whcih i didn't want to live in a way with too much pressure just because of money