㈠ 2009年安徽省的英語高考作文
2015年安徽高考英語作文題目及參考範文某英文雜志正在舉辦以 "Fancy yourself as an interviewer" 為主題的徵文活動，請你 以「A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview" 為題, 寫一篇英語短文。內容包括： 1. 采訪的對象; 2. 采訪的原因; 3. 想提的問題。注意： 1. 詞數120左右; 2. 可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫; 3. 短文中不能出現與本人相關的信息; 4. 短文的標題已給出,不計人總詞數。 one possible version: A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview The person I would like to interview is Yang Liwei. I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world.I have long been interested in space exploration and I believe I could learn a great deal from him about it. If I could interview him, I would ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was trained. I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read. I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must be very interesting. 。
㈡ 2013年安徽高考英語滿分作文
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熱烈祝賀xxxx完全命中2013年安徽高考英語作文題
預測七：交通規則與人文素質（中國式過馬路、酒後駕駛）
預測題（1）中國式過馬路
最近，你將參加一個英語作文比賽。要求參賽者根據下面的這幅漫畫進行寫作。請按照下面的提示，寫一篇120字左右的英語短文。
1、這幅畫反映了當前的一種什麼現象？
2、分析出現這種現象的原因；
3、針對這個現象發表看法。
生詞提示：中國式過馬路：Chinese style of crossing road 紅綠燈：traffic light
【參考答案】
The picture shows what the Chinese style of crossing the street is. It is clear that some pedestrians tend to run the red light in groups when crossing the street. This phenomenon has attracted widespread concern in China.There are two main reasons behind this phenomenon. Some people are always in a hurry, so they ignore the traffic signal to save time. Others lack safety awareness,thinking drivers have to stop because so many people cross the street together.Actually running the red light is very dangerous because it may lead to more traffic jams and accidents. I hope immediate measures should be taken to prevent this bad behavior. First, the public should be ecated to follow the traffic rules. Second, more overpasses should be built to make it easy to cross the street. Besides, whoever breaks the traffic rules should be severely punished. By doing so, we will be able to get around safely.
【相關報道】2013安徽高考外語考試結束 英語作文與中國式過馬路有關
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6月8日，2013安徽高考外語考試結束，合肥八中、六中等考點的考生已陸續地走出考場。據合肥八中考點的一位孟姓考生介紹，英語試題不難，聽力也很清楚，作文題目涉及當下的時事熱點，教導行人車輛遵守交通規則。
合肥市十一中張姓考生說，英語考試和模考難度差不多，完型填空和閱讀均不是很難，單選是自己的弱項，英語作文是以「遵守文明，從我做起」為題，寫120字的作文。（吳婷婷 黃叢萍）
㈢ 2017年安徽省會考英語作文
Happy is neither a gift nor a right,we must take the initiative to seek out,heart to pursue in order to obtain.When you try new things,accept new challenges,because you will discover a new dimension of life but pleasantly surprised.T here are dreams,there to pursue,there will be happy.Because the course of the struggle and achieve the goals of the brilliant,can engender immense pleasure.
㈣ 09-11年 安徽高考英語滿分作文
2006【安徽卷】【試題回放】
假設你是李華，作為選派的交流學生在美國某中學學習了一年，寄住在Mr. Brown家裡，剛回到國內。回國後，你發現自己的一本英語詞典遺忘在他家，因此給他寫了一封信，請他幫助寄回詞典。信的主要內容如下：
感謝在美國期間他所提供的幫助
一本英語詞典忘記帶回
詞典是美國老師送的，非常珍貴
詞典很可能丟在卧室的書架上
郵資自己付
注意：
1、詞數100左右;信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好。
2、可適當增加細節，使行文連貫
3、參考詞彙：郵資-postage
Dear Mr. Brown,
I have been back, and write this letter to show my thanks. As the exchange student, you make me feel warm. Welcome to my country ,I』ll show you around in turn.
However , there exists a problem that I have left my dictionary at your home. I like it very much , for it was a precious gift from my teacher who comes from the U.S. I guess that my book may stay on your shelf in the bedroom .
Do you mind if you send my dictionary to me? I will pay for the postage and I』ll be very grateful if you show your warmness again.
I』m eager to receive your reply.
Yours,
Li hua
[名師點評]
本文作為信件，首先其格式是正確的。既然是應用文，那麼文章的意圖就要明確表示出來，本文在表達作者寫作意圖的時候，情真意切，用詞委婉而合理。文章不但使用了定語從句，還採用了疑問句，讓句式變化而不呆板。
2007【安徽卷】【試題回放】
假如你是李華，美國一所友好學校準備與你們學校共同創辦一份中學生英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關情況。請你給她寫封回信，假如你是李華，美國一所友好學校準備與你們學校共同創辦一份中學生英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關情況。請你給她寫封回信，主要內容如下：
l 表示贊成。 l 提出你喜歡的欄目。 l 簡要說明理由。
注意：1. 詞數100左右。 2. 新的開頭和結尾已為你寫好。
3. 適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。4. 參考欄目：欄目—column
Dear Mr. Green,
I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.
Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, 「culture express」 gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it』s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, 「blurt out」 is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, 「entertainment」 is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can』t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.
Well, I can』t list more. I really can』t wait to read that magazine!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【名師點評】
這是一篇滿分作文。由於這篇作文的出現，導致了安徽省該年的英語作文分數普遍偏低。仔細分析了這篇文章，寫的的確是好，很地道的美式英語，一些詞語的大膽使用，讓人不得不猜測此人或者是家人可能有過國外生活的經歷，否則這么地道標準的英語，可不是一朝一夕所能寫出來的。比如說：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大膽運用，list, can't wait to 簡直是perfect! 況且文章中沒有一個錯誤，不管是書寫還是語法。英語能夠學到這種程度，不可謂不讓人佩服。
2011高考英語滿分作文賞析
作文題目
假設你是李華，你的英國筆友Bob將於九月到你所在城市的建新華文學校學中文，來信請你在學校附近為他找一套住房。請根據圖畫提供的信息，寫信介紹住房的情況，並告知住房面積為25平方米，月租500元。
注意：
1.詞數：100左右：
2.參考詞彙：房租—Tent(n.).
I』m very happy to receive your letter, and I』m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I』ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
滿分理由
本文格式正確，意思表述完整，行文流暢自然。作者在寫作過程中注意長短句並用，還使用了以 『which，』引導的非限定性定語從句，從而使文章層次分明，富於變化，不愧為考場佳作。
Dear Bob,
Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.
I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there』re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.
Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I』U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.
Best wishes !
Yours,
Li Hua
滿分理由
本文格式正確，內容完整，表述清楚，銜接緊密流暢，時態語態使用准確，特別是結尾末段適度的發揮，既充實了內容，又符合邏輯，成為本文與眾不同的亮點。
Dear Bob,
How are you these days?
I』m so glad to know that you』ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I』ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. It』s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.
There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you』ll like it. If not, I』ll try to find another place for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
滿分理由
本文內在邏輯性很強，由遠及近。由外及內，層次分明，錯落有致。同時讓步狀語從句運用得恰到好處，很出彩，再則結構完整，從開頭的問候語到結尾都很完備。
作文：
Dear Bob,
I』m glad to hear from you.
Welcome to our city in september. I』ve found a suitable house for you.
The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.
It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.
Will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? Just let me know. I』ll try my best to help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
滿分理由
本文內容詳實，描述具體細膩，用詞適當准確，如「suitable house」、「not far from』』等，另外文中的選擇疑問句也很有新意。
㈤ 求十篇好的高考英語作文(近幾年的安徽省高考)及翻譯，給好評。
高三學友， 市面上很少你可以把作文（真題卷）的共有結構提取背下來（導語 過度回……）再記一答個主題的（翻遍卷子就知道了 節約）句子 差不多五句 最後把好句子記了 不要有錯誤，我作文一般18.19很強了。按理我不該說的 但咱是一個省的。
㈥ 翻譯2008安徽英語高考作文範文，在線等...
早上好，先生們女士們。我們中的一些人與父母有問題，當他們經常查我們的書包或看我們的日記。我完全明白為什麼我們對這種行為感到不舒服，但是沒必要感到難過。我們的父母檢查我們的包或者日記是為了確保我們沒有陷入任何的麻煩。他們可能聽說過一些可怕的故事關於其他的一些孩子，認為我們可能也會那樣做。或者他們只是想要和我們聯系但是那種做法是錯誤的。我的建議是：我們需要他們的信任就像我們信任他們一樣。假如你認為你不可以跟他們交流，就寫一封信放著---他們一定會看到的。謝謝
㈦ 英語高考作文有語法
高考英語中最常見的作文類型是議論文,論述你對某一樣事情的看法.可以專用以下模板,這都是屬我高三常用的句子.
開頭：nowadays,there is a heated discussion on sth .Views on that vary from one person to another.
中間敘述一些人的看法：someone hold the view that·····others claim that`````
說出自己的看法:from my own perspective``````on my point of view````
㈧ 2015年安徽高考英語作文範文
2015年安徽高考英語作文題目及參考範文
某英文雜志正在舉辦以 "Fancy yourself as an interviewer" 為主題的徵文活動，請你 以「A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview" 為題, 寫一篇英語短文。
內容包括：
1. 采訪的對象;
2. 采訪的原因;
3. 想提的問題。
注意：
1. 詞數120左右;
2. 可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;
3. 短文中不能出現與本人相關的信息;
4. 短文的標題已給出,不計人總詞數。
one possible version:
A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview
The person I would like to interview is Yang Liwei.
I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world.I have long been interested in space exploration and I believe I could learn a great deal from him about it.
If I could interview him, I would ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was trained. I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read. I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must be very interesting.
望採納。
㈨ 我寫的2010安徽高考英語作文
看了一遍，覺得你的主要問題是語句不通順 （不是說語法不對，就是這么用著有點別扭）。還有一個就是詞彙還不夠，在我看來用詞比較簡單，缺少可以為你加分的深度。這兩個可能就是你得了18的原因；但我覺得你的整體結構啊什麼的都是沒問題的，我打的話20左右。下面在你的文里舉幾個例子。
「Nowadays, TV, cell, and Web are very common in our daily life. 」 如果改成 "Televisions, cell phones and the internet are all very widely used in our daily life." 就好些，名詞前面不是復數應該加個 "the"
"masses of rubbish short messages" 應該是「junk message" 啦，不是"rubbish" 哦。
」there are a great deal of bad information「 應該是 "there is", "information" 是不可數名詞。還有，盡量避免用比較空泛的形容詞，比如 "bad"/"good", 因為看起來覺得你詞彙不夠，影響打分者對你的印象。
」on some mobile phone websites「 - "some of the mobile phone websites"
"which is harmful to our mental health" - "mental development" 雖然你說的沒錯，但是聽起來別扭。。。
"However, I believe that TV and Web are both useful" - "on the other hand...", 用"however"一般是在說同一件事物的不同方面時用的。
就這些，沒考好也不要擔心，繼續努力學習吧。