高中英語寫作之語法錯誤分析

㈠ 如何避免在高中英語考試中作文里的語法錯誤。

找大學英語四級的作文模板書,如果照著模板套題就不怕會犯錯啦.我就是這樣提高滴,貌似23分還是很不錯的成績吧... 這是最快最實惠的辦法了

㈡ 高中的英語作文，請英語老師幫忙看一下哪有語法錯誤或者有錯誤的地方告訴我一下，如何修改的更好謝謝老師

第1段
more and more students are home from work everyday because ...
First 改成 Firstly或 At first First 不能單獨用
Second 改成 Secondly
parent +S
problem 問題，習題（數字，事實方面） 應該+S
search it with computer...改成 search for the answers with the help of computer...
第2段
people 改成 students
...they think that it is a good chance for them to communicate with each other and cultivate their teamwork 你那句版人稱權好像亂了
最後那句 Our 改成 their
最後一段
as far as i concerned （好像是)
living on school改成 campus
which can never be learnt at home 應被動

個人觀點 請參考 呵呵

㈢ (高中英語)可以看一下我的作文有哪裡有語法錯誤或表述不當嗎老師每次都不改

稍後發圖給你。

㈣ 高中英語作文 主因 詞彙量少 拼寫經常出現錯誤 覺得語法枯燥無味 看

首先告訴你，語法一點也枯燥，也不難。之所以覺得枯燥和難可以給你舉個簡單例子你就會明白。
比如你站在一面滿是霧氣的玻璃窗後面看景色，那麼任你多聰明，視力多麼好，你就是看不清楚。這時你也許就懷疑自己不夠聰明，視力不夠好，而實際情況是因為有這層迷霧造成了你無法看清。那麼一旦把這層迷霧擦除，你瞬間就會覺得世界清明起來，風景看的一清二楚，簡單明了。

現在你應該明白了，之所以你覺得語法難，什麼從句，主句，單句，復句，時態、非謂語，語氣等你不理解，是因為有這層迷霧，傳統的英語教育，不但無法擦除這層迷霧，反而描的更黑，教的糊塗，學的更加困惑。

老師照本宣科，沒有講透，學生並沒有真正理解，就不得不死記硬背，即使死記硬背記住了，也不能算真正掌握而能靈活運用。

語法也無需死記硬背的。語法對於自己母語的人似乎不存在。因為母語自己天天用，而且自小而大，父母老師不斷教和糾正，自然內化了你正確的語言結構和順序。

但是對於非母語語言，你沒有那麼多練習，不是天天說，也不是每天花很多小時練習，更重要的是沒有老師和家長不斷的幫你糾正和教你講話，導致你不可能像母語一樣內生這門語言的正確的語序和結構。但是為了高效的掌握一門語言，這時就需要先學習這門語言的語法了。

那麼什麼是語法呢？
語法是語言的法則、語言的精華、語言規律的高度凝縮。

語法並不枯燥，枯燥的是沒有理解語法的本質，而去死記硬背。沒有真正的理解，也就無法靈活正確的應用。 語法學的稀里糊塗，用的稀里糊塗，自然就覺得枯燥乏味。

整個小學、初中、高中、甚至大學階段的語法學習，也就數十節課就可以系統透徹的學完，但是傳統教育卻折磨了學子們數十年，卻越學越糊塗。

推薦華東理工大學的《英語思維：解密英語語法的原理》這本書，該書是國內第一本系統講解英語語法原理和思維內涵的書，是第一本從語言原理層面完整系統的呈現英語語法全貌和完整框架體系的書。

也可以學習同名視頻課程http://study.163.com/u/englishthinking，短平快，十節課真正理解英語語法，適合那些英語語法混亂毫無章法同學，也適合那些英語還不錯，但是沒學透無體系遭遇瓶頸無法突破的同學，看完後，對英語的理解有脫胎換骨之感。

建立了英語語法的整體框架結構，理解了英語語法所蘊含的思維內涵後，你就不會再覺得語法乏味。

學透語法之後的英語繼續學習，就可以通過精看美劇進行詞彙的學習，聽、說、讀、寫的鍛煉。

利用高效系統建立起來的語法知識體系後，可以欣賞美劇、閱讀新聞，交友娛樂，快樂的享受英語給你帶來的樂趣。

㈤ 高中英語作文 我的英語老師 這篇文章的語法錯誤幫忙指導一下，謝謝！

Ms. Li is very impressive to me. She is a young and beautiful teacher,with enthusiasm and full of energy. I like her unique teaching style, which usually makes the students get the new knowledge easily and absorb them quickly. She is always ready to explain everything to us patiently and clearly. The most important thing is that she always encourages students to study hard and never give up. For example, she usually tells us stories about succeessful men who had struggled for life before they succeeded. 「How can we see the rainbow without experiencing a rainy day?」 is her classic quote. Overall, she is more and more popular with us. We love her very much. I am sure that we are going to learn a lot from her and make great progress in English.
看來這個老師沒您說的那麼好，否則，您也不會寫出這么爛的文章。

㈥ 求10篇高中英語作文120字左右，要有一些語法錯誤

Everyone has their own dreams, I am the same. But my dream is not a lawyer, not a doctor, not actors, not even an instry. Perhaps my dream big people will find it ridiculous, but this has been my pursuit! My dream is to want to have a folk life! I want it to become a beautiful painting, it is not only sharp colors, but also the colors are bleak, I do not rule out the painting is part of the black, but I will treasure these bleak colors! Not yet, how about, a colorful painting, if not bleak, add color, how can it more prominent American? Life is like painting, painting the bright red color represents life beautiful happy moments. Painting a bleak color represents life difficult, unpleasant time. You may find a flat with a beautiful road is not very good yet, but I do not think it will. If a person lives flat then what is the point? Life is only a short few decades, I want it to go Finally, Each memory is a solid.

翻譯：
每個人都有自己的夢想，我也一樣。但是我的夢想不是律師，不是醫生，不是演員，甚至不是一種行業！我的夢想也許大人們會覺得可笑，但是，這是我一直追尋的！我的夢想是想要自己有一個七彩的人生！我要它成為一幅美麗的畫，它不但要有鮮明的顏色，也要有暗淡的顏色，我不排除這幅畫有一部分的黑色，我反而會很珍惜這些暗淡的顏色！不是嗎，試問一下，一幅色彩鮮艷的畫，如果不加一點暗淡的顏色，又怎能更突出它的美呢？人生就象畫一樣，畫中鮮艷的顏色就代表著人生美麗快樂的時光。畫中暗淡的顏色就代表著人生遭遇困難，不愉快的時候。也許你會覺得擁有一條平坦美麗的路不是很好嗎，但我並不覺得。一個人如果一生平坦那有什麼意思呢？人生只有短短幾十年，我要他走到最後時，每一個回憶都事充實的！
親你看看這篇行不行？你說要長點兒的話，好像我這篇又有點兒短。親你要是看著還順眼的話，就湊活著用吧~~~~~(*^__^*) 嘻嘻……
再給你兩篇，是寫朋友的，你自己選選~~~ A friend is a person who can let you feel warm when you are
depressed. I have many friends.But XXX is my best friend.He is as old as me.He taller than me.Basketball is his favorite sport.We are in the same class.He is good at study.So his study is very good.We learn from each other and help each other.He will help me if i got in trouble.I will help he as much as I can. I hope our friendship will forever and ever.
A friend is someone who can let you feel warm when you are depressed. I have many friends. However I only have one best friend and it's XXX. He is the same age as me. He is taller than me. Basketball is his favourite sport. We are in the same class. He likes studying and is good at it, so he gets high marks. We learn from each other and help each other. He will help me if I ever get into troubles. So will I. I hope our friendship will last forever and ever
或
My best friend and I get along with each other quite well. But we are so different. He is funnier, more outgoing than I am and i'm more serious. He is more athletic and likes to play all kinds of sports but I am smarter on study. My friend is wilder than me and I am calmer. He is tall, thin, strong,with short hair, And sometimes he is very careless and lazy. On the other hands, I am short, fat, weak, with shorthair. He is very helpful because I am very lazy and don't want to do any sports. And I will help him with his study.
I think our friendship will last forever.

㈦ 高中英語作文，麻煩幫忙幫忙看看有什麼語法錯誤

I am a big fan of climbing (climbing 什麼？climbing本身不是個活動。如果你指的是在野外走路/ 探險，可以替換成 「hiking」). (插入transition，因為這前後兩句話沒有任何聯系。比如你可以在這里插入 「However, I almost got into trouble because of my hobby once.」) One afternoon, I went (改為 「was」) climbing (改為 「hiking」或其他更好的詞) in the wild. （插入轉折，還是前後沒關聯，比如「I had a good time, yet）When I decided to go home nearly （改為「near」）the (刪除「the」) evening (或者把 「nearly the evening」 改為 「at sunset」), I realized that I have (刪除 「have」) lost my key somewhere (刪除 「somewhere」). I looked for the key while (改為 「as」) I go (改為 「went」) down the hills for a long time (,) but I had no luck (把 「I had no luck」 改為 「the action was in vain」—不改也沒錯，但是這是更高級的用法，你的讀者會喜歡的). I was so worried and (改為 「because」—大哥，這是因果關系好不好—因為你餓了而沒有鑰匙回不了家，所以你才擔心……) I started to feeling （改為 「felt」—更簡潔）a little bit (改為 「rather」—a little bit 太口語化) hungry. But （兩句連一句）I couldn't (could not—正式作文里，永遠不要用縮寫！！！) go home (加入 「and eat dinner」—前面你說你餓了，後面你說你回不了家，兩者有聯系么？我知道正常人都能看出來有聯系，但是答題一定要把老師當弱智一樣，把所有的東西都寫清楚。別不服氣，我受過慘痛教訓，不希望你重蹈覆轍而已) without my key. (加轉折 「Luckily」) Just when I (was) about to gave (give) (寫過去時就要全用過去時啊，時空穿梭機還沒被發明出來呢) up, I met one of my friends (a friend, 你要說的是「一個朋友」不是「朋友之一」). I told him the story of (改為 「about」—更簡潔) me losing the (改為 「my」—你的鑰匙沒有那麼偉大，也不是人人皆知世間只有這一把，所以你要說清楚是你的鑰匙) key. He was so kind and (改為 「that」—又應該是因果關系，他之所以是好人，是因為他幫你找鑰匙—that 後面放解釋/ 原因) he helped me to find it. After about (刪掉，或者換成 「approximately」—一樣的意思，about 太口語化了) 10 (ten—minutes, 正式作文里，永遠不用阿拉伯數字, 除非數字太大，寫出來不簡潔，比如76663549) we finally found it (改為 「my key」—上句已經用過it 了，這句換個花樣，讓文章多樣化) behind a bush. I was so excited (excited? 找著個鑰匙你像磕了葯一樣一蹦三尺高？不是吧？但是 「excited」 就這意思—改成 「relieved」 或者 「happy」. (+轉折 「Thus」) To express (my, 知道你學的是個定語，但是要學會變通) gratitude, I decided to have dinner with him. And I will (用過去時, 「would」) pay for the bill.

*這是真事？有些不合理呢。因為找不到鑰匙回不了家，又餓，所以才擔心。 但是你朋友幫你找到鑰匙了，你又有錢請人家吃飯。。。既然有錢，幹嘛開始因為找不到鑰匙回不了家，又餓而擔心啊？如果是編的，把結尾改成「以後會請人家吃飯」

I am a big fan of hiking. However, I almost got into trouble because of my hobby once. One afternoon, I was hiking in the wild. When I decided to go home at sunset, I realized that I lost my key. I looked for the key as I went down the hills for a long time, but the action was in vain. I was so worried because I felt a rather hungry, but I could not go home without my key and eat dinner. Luckily, just when I was about to give up, I met a friend. I told him about me losing my key. He was so kind that he helped me to find it. After approximately ten minutes, we finally found my key behind a bush. I was relieved. To express my gratitude, I decided to have dinner with him. And I would pay for the bill. (*To express my gratitude, I promised myself that I would buy him dinner to pay him my thanks.)

看不出兩段的差異，講的是一個事情啊。只是兩種語法錯誤而已啊。如果要求是用兩種寫法的話，讓別的大大改第二段吧。 我一個人有一個寫作風格，所以只能寫出一個正確語法的答案。

要想要高分，有三點：詞，句，段
詞：用長詞，難詞。並且要准確把握詞的意思。比如找到鑰匙你是不擔心了，不是興奮。。。

句：我不清楚你都學的什麼，但是盡量用不同的句型。你上面的這段話，句句都是主謂賓 （I 幹了什麼。I 幹了什麼）。這不是語法錯誤，但是會讓你的文章及其單調以及初級。抱歉沒法幫你改，我要是改了，就等於幫你重寫一篇了。。。

段：大哥你寫的不是文章吧。根本沒有中心思想。從你愛登山扯到你要請朋友吃飯。事件雖然發生的比較合理，但是沒有中心思想。沒法只言片語講清楚，可以發網路信息給我或者自己找書學。還有就是你的轉折，前言不搭後語。教你個辦法：寫出來後，把兩句挨著的話單拎出來，想像自己只寫了這兩句話，看看兩句話連貫不連貫。用白痴的智商去看，不要讓大腦自作聰明的補全。

貌似就這些了。我寫的可能有些苛刻，別介意啊。不清楚中國高中的英語程度，我盡量改成完美了

㈧ 高中英語作文出現語法和時態錯誤一般回扣幾分，還有疑問句也用錯了

一般的話,英語錯一句話,扣1分,錯一個單詞扣0.5。在作文裡面,寫錯時態影響不大,1-2分吧.還要看你內錯的多不多容了.錯的多老師就認為你英語基礎不好,沒准分數就下來了,錯的少而內容豐富改卷老師也可能會忽略小的錯誤一般扣多少分也會根據很多情況來決定的比如整體寫的怎麼樣,字跡是否工整,內容怎麼樣,象你這種情況少則1分多則3分吧跑題了.10分左右.

㈨ 高中在寫英語作文時,怎麼減少語法錯誤.

如果基本時態你都可以掌握的話,那麼作文里就不要寫那些從句什麼的,簡單一些的句子就可以了,加上適當的關聯詞連成長句即可.