㈠ 我這篇英語作文有哪些語法錯誤
1 increaseing--increasing 2 Socreateing Green Campus -- So creating green campuses
3 accord mederning standard--meet the need of modern ecation
4 Creating a Green Campus is not only means that pay more attention in protecting the environment but aslo means that improving the manners and try the best in studying.----Creating a Green Campus not only means paying more attention to protecting the environment but aslo means improving the studying method and trying one's best to study.
5 A clean campus and a positive learning environment could accelerate students studying harder and persist their dreams. -----A clean campus and a positive learning environment could get the students to work harder and be more active.
6 As far as my personal experience and best knowledge,in order to creating a Green Campus ,i suppose that we could do not throw rubbish everywhere and learn our subjects harder. ----As far as I know,in order to create a Green Campus ,I suppose that we shouldn't throw rubbish everywhere and should learn our subjects harder.
㈡ 求幫忙分析這篇英語作文中的語法錯誤~
Amy Chua ,an America-bornChinese
was a professor of Yale who wrote Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother and the book came out in 2010.
The content of the book is about how the writer teaches his two daughter in Chinese traditional ways.
This book has an effect on the readers by raising the question of what kind of ecation is better for children, the American one or Chinese one ?
The Chinese version was sold in 2011, which made a lot of Unexpected reaction from Chinese mothers who disagreed with the writer
the lastest news is that Amy』 The eldest daughter has been admitted to Harvard and Yale
㈢ 求解這篇英語寫作有什麼語法錯誤 求幫忙改正
第一句：1.Wednesday2.過去式用had an.....3.最好改成and discussed about...spelling with....
第二句：about前最好有and。only can speak but can't write well.這樣應該流暢一些。
第三句：既內然是last wednesday就應該用過去容式，後面的時態錯誤就不一一寫了。最好不要用one
reason有些像由中文直譯的，應該用first reason，is後面用that合適一些。type去掉，太像直譯的了。training改成practice。in normal time改成at ordinary time。also後加is。提高弱點，沒這種說法，邏輯問題。pay attention to固定搭配。it指代不明。
整篇文章直譯句子過多，事態錯誤，簡單句太多，內容不豐富，但詞彙量還好。
㈣ 這篇英語作文有語法錯誤嗎急急急急！！！！！！！
第一句話就很別扭：你就可以直接說：I am very glad to share my Shanghai expo trip with you。
世博就是exposition，簡稱expo 就可以
第二句話的語意大概是：他教會了我許多，對吧。應該是：It's tayght me a lot.bring沒有教會的用法
得~我給你重寫吧，詞還是你的，就是給你改改，你重復的太多，總是A LOT，英語尤其是口語最忌諱這個~從First開始：
First, the activity really impressed me deeply, including the constructions, foods and the parades. It』s really a shock to me，like all kinds of styles of buildings and costumes come in to my eyes, you know, as they are all something new to me and made me surprised. Second, the holding of World Expo in my own country brings me a sense of honor. It』s a symbol of the 此處換一個別的詞 of my homeland. Thirdly, the Expo is not only a exhibition to me but also a class; I really learned a lot from every word the guide have told me and every picture that was shown to me.At Last, I want to say that the Expo really means a lot to me, the nation(更正規), and the world.
寫的還是很有文筆的，但就是在自然點更好，希望有幫到你，我可能跟你一樣是個中學生...呵呵
也希望你給點分啊~
㈤ 求解這篇英語寫作有什麼語法錯誤 求幫忙改正
第一句：which ...【and】 has a long history.
第二句：
It was prosperous/quite popular in the Qing Dynasty and then turned into part of people's daily life.
第三句：
Paper-cutting is mainly used in three ways:decoration，religion and design,with decoration the most widely used.
第四句：
Nowdays, paper-cutting has become one of the best gifts sent to friends,which is very popular with foreigners.
第五句：
There are now more than 30 stores managing paper-cutting ,whose artworks are sold as far as Southeast Asia.
祝你開回心答如意！
㈥ 這篇英語作文有語法錯誤嗎
1，去掉第二句開頭的And
2，第四句When we are playing（加個are）
3，第五句which team gets（get加s）這句話最好改成the team which scores the most points will win the game.
4，第六句because it requires teammates to cooperate
5，最專後一句together和with others是重屬復的，隨便去掉一個
㈦ 這篇英語小作文有什麼語法錯誤嗎
1行改成includes
3行去掉more and more,large改成larger
4行since改成from,因為內有since要用現在完成時
6行less後the改成than
倒數容第三行phone要用復數
倒數第二行hand改成word
最後一行a 改成an
㈧ 求檢查這篇英語作文，有沒有語法錯誤或單詞錯誤，求改錯，拜託一定要仔細檢查(>﹏<)
an old man
㈨ 這篇英語作文有什麼語法錯誤
句子開頭是不是沒復制全？
第一個：訓練營是training camp，你是寫多了個n吧。而且這句後面的從句如回果是要表達為了跟答人比賽所以邀請人的話我覺得用so that we can比較好，比賽劃船可以用have a boat racing。
第二個：時間和日期在英文里是分開的，反正我是沒見過時間+of+月日這種結構：其次日期的表達是寫先寫月份後寫序數詞的日期，表示某月的第幾天。
改成at 7：00 a.m，april 5th.
㈩ 求英語大神指導，，我寫的這篇作文有什麼可笑的語法錯誤，就是特別突出的語法錯誤，，請指出，，越多越好
Wild animals
Animals are our friends, but many people kill "friends" for their fur and meat. The people have killed a lot of wild animals. So many kinds of animals are in danger. Meanwhile, the green house effect makes temperature rise, therefore, the iceberg is melting and it will make some animals like polar bears have fewer and fewer places to live. Now, just imagine, what will happen if there aren't animals? The world will happen a chain of events, we people won't have meat to eat and we ill die! Therefore, we should protect wildlife animals. I think First, every country's government should make the nature reserves bigger and bigger. Then, they should make the wildlife animals have enough food to eat. But there is still a long wall to make this two points come true.
你的觀點還是很好的.打字上可能有些錯誤, 我這里給你改過來了.然後,我給你修改了大部分句子,如下：
The people have killed a lot of wild animals. So many kinds of animals are in danger.
改為：These people have killed so many wild animals that some species are in danger of extinction.
Meanwhile, the green house effect makes temperature rise, therefore, the iceberg is melting and it will make some animals like polar bears have fewer and fewer places to live.
改為：Meanwhile, the greenhouse effect leads to temperature rise, which results in iceberg getting melted and animals like polar bears will lose their habitats.
The world will happen a chain of events ,we people won't have meat to eat and we ill die!
改為： A chain of events will happen in the world. We people won』t have meat to eat and we will get ill and may even die in the end!
But there is still a long wall to make this two points come true.
改為：But there is still a long way to go before we can make these two points come true.