A. 求英語高手查看語法錯誤。
In this article Mansell reviews the trend of smoking for the young is on the rise and points out some approaches to prevent or solve the issue. The author uses data gained from the experiment and The FDA, which is meant to protect the(應該去掉) American consumer. They put people into three different groups and each group gains different things, (應該去掉) in six months,（改為。） They got the data about(應該去掉) what they expected to get. Their researches focus on standardizing the habit of smoking for the young and how do(應該去掉) parents help their children to quit smoking. This article is useful to my research topic（the topic in my research）, it (which)covers that there are a (應該去掉) several ways of stopping(to stop) the young from swallowing in smoking, such as do(doing) more exercises. The main limitation is that there are no others (other)experiments to support his opinion; only one experiment cannot convince people to believe what it is. Thus, the author indicates that further study is needed into teenage smoking to find what works best, （改為。） Therefore, more experiments will be testing(tested) in the future and outcomes(outcome) will be showing (showed)as soon as possible.
B. 請英語高手看看這里又沒有語法錯誤
把最後那兩句連起來比較好。不然你的那句"now..."里沒有謂語，屬於病內句。
可改為：容
now,
as
attendant
at
the
yindo
hotel
zhuhai
i
am
pleased
to
be
able
to
participate
in
this
interview.
C. 英語高手請檢查語法錯誤
1.my topic 應該是the topic of mine這個是慣用通病
2.It may pass by without your attention我個人認為不應該有 by 不是經過，而只是時間的消逝，用pass 你後面的都是這樣用的
3.Grasping the young well means a better time is waisting for you in the near future, 我覺得不是young 而應該是youth名詞 你說的那個是青年人，而不是青春
4.they all made full use of their youth time,後面不用加time吧或者是yong time.
5.Then we may lose our passing when getting older and older中的passing 是不是應該是passion猜測你是筆誤
6.We should work harder and harder. We should master more knowledge and more skills.改成
We should work harder and harder to master more knowledge and more skills.你覺得怎麼樣，盡量減少用第一人稱做主語的句子毫無關聯詞地重疊在一起。
其實我還覺得，應該在你引用的那段前面加上一個承上啟下的句子，比如說，what is the youth.更好些然後在How do you master your youth? 的前面再加個連接句，你的連接太硬了，就主題部鮮明了啊
D. 請英語高手給指點一下，有沒有語法錯誤
第七句改成，We can have lunch together.
第十一句改成：回答是過去式，提問怎麼能是現在時呢？How did you get there
而且方式不能用從內句，改成：I got here by (driving my) car.
下面那容句話一樣。改為：When did you buy it?
倒數第三句、可以直接說：It spent me $5000
倒數第二局：I think it is worth it
沒有of
總之你還要細心點，因為這些東西都是很簡單的
純正美語，希望加分，也希望有幫到你，我急用分，謝謝
E. 急!!!!! 求英語高手檢查是否語法錯誤!!!
I not no!
F. 請英語高手幫忙修改語法錯誤。
你這里的語法錯誤很多啊。我盡量在你的基礎上改吧。
Along with the computer application increasinged widely and deeply and the fast development
of information technology,the network is graally intergrated into people's lives.So the network is good or harm to our life.
如果不知道為專什麼屬，可以追問
G. 急！！！！請英語高手指教 有沒有語法錯誤。在線等。。。。。。。
We don't think that some kinds of behaviors in White Day or Valentine's Day are helpful for our friendship.
When I was a primary student ,a friend of mine, he just gave peperos to the friends who were tall. So the friends who were short were very angry, and a great deal of trouble arosen between the two groups of friends. The friends who didn』 receive the gifts would be very sad, and they would hate the people who didn』t give them gifts.
And I think we don』t need to/ needn't use the gift to show our true friendship . We can use the expression of eyes or look of faces to show our thinkings or feelings .
On Pepero Day it is not just giving friendship and receiving friendship. People will buy so many peperos. People use this way to give and receivie gifts to develop friendship, though this way is a waste of money. Maybe giving gift s will make someone happy but it is just for a short-time not forever.
H. 求英語高手糾正語法錯誤，在線等答案！
Three different endings, it is not the director have his words at hand , It because of Laura` reaction when she met that dog. The first ending, Laura is shocked by the dog. The second end,she is tripped down by the dog owner and then falling down the stairs , the overall time delay a few seconds. The third ending,she skip several stairs with a few steps. The overall time advance a few seconds . Indeed, the faster you run, the better the outcome.Perhaps the director is illustrating that we must strive to grasp every inch of time, even just a few seconds.
I. 請檢查此段英文中的語法錯誤
原文
UNDER THE BRIDGE _ the upcoming season
In recent days, the second season of a interesting animation had been on show. It was proced in a major TV station, TBS (Tokyo Broadcasting System Incorporation). Its name is Under the Bridge.
改後
UNDER THE BRIDGE on the upcoming season【個人認為介詞有用on較好】
In recent days, the second season of an interesting animation has been on show.
【有 recent days通常都用完成時態 可是個人認為沒必要用過去完成時
此外 interesting 讀音為母音開頭 所以 a 要改 an 】
It was proced on a major TV station,【介詞用on才能表達那個頻道在上演什麼吧】
TBS (Tokyo Broadcasting System Incorporation).
Its name is Under the Bridge.
【此句沒語法錯誤 但不符合表達習慣
改為 it named (called) Under the Bridge 較好 不過原句絕對沒有語法上的錯誤】
以上僅為初中生的觀點 知識面還很淺薄 希望有高手能指出毛病
J. 英語高手請進 有無語法錯誤 為什麼
有錯誤，下面的才對
as you can see that he is a good boy .
as you can see , he is a good boy .