A. 這是一篇需要更改語法的英語作文=L= 英語大大快來幫我一把
嗯fake commodities 是兩個詞……是排版問題嗎？
*第一節可以直接變成一句話：...China today, that...
*the beginning of 可作 the emergence of, beginning我也說不出哪兒不對，但是意思稍微欠那麼一點兒……
pharmaceutical (拼錯了
這句話的介詞似乎有問題……理論上應該是There are lots of fake commodities in XXX instry。那你想表達「從這個行業到那個行業」，這是一個同位語。所以應該是There are lots of fake commodities in various/almost all instries, from pharmaceuticals to food（嗯這里好像instry也不用做重復，可以這樣直接說東西）
buy這個動詞強調動作，這句話也就變成了「很多人害怕他們會去買假貨」。可以變成「have bought（買到了假貨）」或者「will get（會買到假貨）」
「In order to..."一句，我的理解是」為了放心，所以人們傾向於高價購買商品「？如果是這樣的話，」make people assured「加上之後主語是另一個they在這樣的上下文中有讓」別人「放心的意思。可寫作"In order to be assured, customers tend to..."
high price 是兩個詞？但是這個地方也不能用high price，不能和spend一起用。可以是to spend a good sum of money/ to buy goods of high price
"in my opinion..."句：首先復數一般不需要和the連用，而且這里也無需特指，所以可以是"A fake commodity is..."或是"Fake commodities are..."
這句話的後半段意思是否是」假貨是不良廠商為了牟利（的手段）「？一個是manufactures應作manufacturers。句子也有一些語法問題，如果我理解的句意沒錯的話……保留一下你原文的詞句，這句話的翻譯可作"In my opinion, unscrupulous manufacturers proce fake procts in order to generate maximum profits"。 這里 to reap benefits 不妥，這主要是褒義，或者隱喻的用法。
I think this must be? might be?可能是原文筆誤
*中文中雖說」和什麼有關「，英文中常直接寫作」有什麼引起/引發了什麼「，但似乎並不怎麼重要= =
*既然這里說了"Internationally"，不如上一節的開頭也說"domestically"，也顯得結構比較完整
"The reason"一句應作"The reason is thatChina has too many fake commodities"原文中缺少從劇中的動詞，也一般不那麼說
"In order to"一句，是否是指」為了中國的形象和人們的安全「？In order to是連詞片語，後面必須跟著動詞（所以in order to ensure是對的）。可作"In order to rebrand China's image/re-image China and to ensure..."。事實上，表達」為了某樣東西「的時候可直接使用介詞for，因此也可作"for the image of china and the safety of..."
"the safety of people",此處應該去掉原句中的介詞，或者保留介詞變成"...of the people in China"——因為介詞表示限定，必須有特指。事實上，不如改成"...of Chinese citizens"，避免詞語重復……（不知道你是什麼標準的作文要求哈
"can not"應作"should not"，前者是「不可能（被虛假廣告騙）」的意思
*secondly前面得分號那裡其實可以斷句？
"the supervision ability"應作"supervisory abilities"，或直接作"improve their supervision"
"circumstance be solved"處，circumstance所指的「情況」不是中文裡有問題的「情況」，只是一種描述的「情況」。所以這里還是應該用"problem be solved"
最後的"persecution"我不太確定你的想法……persecution」一般指政治上的迫害。如果表達「不再受假貨的荼毒」這樣的話可作「be free from the threats of fake commodities」(不再受假貨的威脅)
註：標注星號的只是用詞問題，其餘的是語法問題。
嗯其實寫完了之後想也許你只想讓我幫你改完把成品給你就好了……但總之我還是把大概的理由羅列了一下，希望能對你有幫助
因為只要求改語法所以就只改了一些語法（可能沒改全（應該不會改錯（喂
希望你能加油哦！不知道你這篇文章是哪種考試用的文章，除了語法以外英語寫作還有其他技巧上的也可以多注意一下
其實英語語法不算語言裡面很難得，想想我們中文多微妙啊他們可死板了……我覺得多看看記記下一篇就不會有問題啦（何況網路翻譯君自己的語法也……
另：順手輸入了fake commodity搜索，發現了 My view on fake commodities的例文，也許對你有幫助。
http://www.360abc.com/article/2135.html
B. 大家的英文文章語法都是自己修改的嗎
Competition and Coorporation：
First of all, I think competition has a more important influence than coorperation.
In the whole society, people never be satisfied with what they owned and they just want to gain more,such as resources and rooms, etc.
For example, people want to gain the biggest benefit by competition in a business rather than achieving the benefits distribution equally by coorperation.
In addition to this, even people's life has a close relationship with competition.
Since human beings were born, people have been alive by continually competition. Therefore, now, the whole world is a highly civilizated society by continually developing.
In a word, I think the importance of competition is bigger than coorperation.
C. 求一篇英語作文，，語法錯誤多不礙事，我可以自己修改，，
我的理想——魔術師
呵呵!聽到這個題目,也許會有人感到很奇怪!也許會有人問我說:"魔術師,有什麼好的.只不過是一些騙人的把戲!"但是我想成為的不是騙人的魔術師而是真正的魔術大師.
有時,我也想成為一名魔術師.因為我想用我神奇的魔力來改變這個地球.
有時,我想成為一名魔術師.因為我想用我神奇的魔力來讓天更藍,水更清.為什麼?為什麼現在的人們這么對待大自然.難道沒有人去組織么?不,不是這樣的.人們不是這么殘忍的我門曾經去嘗試阻止過.但是沒有用,如果我真的是一個魔術師,我會用我神奇的魔力來改變這些,來改變現在這些讓心痛的事情,我會用魔力把這些垃圾徹徹底底的消除掉,不會早讓它污染到空氣.土壤.讓"污染"這個詞語永遠在字典里消失.
有時,我也想成為一名魔術師.因為我想讓我神奇的魔力來讓地球的每一個角落都變成綠色.現在有許許多多的人們為了錢把樹木砍伐掉.也許他們只考慮到眼前的利益.但是他們真的不知道後果么?還是明知故犯?這些失去的永遠也補不回來了.如果,我真的是一名魔術師,我會用我的魔力來彌補這些,用我的咒語來打動這些人,希望他們能和我們一起來創建美好的家園.
有時,我也想成為一名魔術師,我想讓我神氣的魔力來改變我的家園,校園,把我的校園變成一個四周都是樹.一眼望出去.天是那麼的藍,在藍天的照耀下,草是那麼的綠.樹又是那麼的高大.如果我是一名魔術師,我用我神奇的魔力,為太陽畫上一張笑臉.
這不過是一種無畏的想像,我只是希望告訴大家,我們大家每一個人都是神奇的魔術師,用咱們的手去改變我們美好的家園把!讓我們的家園更美麗,漂亮把!
D. 英語作文修改，主要在句子文章結構和語法上，更高級一點。（電腦自動評分，應付電腦就行）
改了改當中不太對的地方
When facing work, we may have such a question--why we work. Some people think that work is to earn a living. Nonetheless, the rich are still working. So, I think we work to realize our self-value and prove ourselves fundamentally.
For one thing, work makes us valuable to society. When we work, we can not only support our families, but also create social value. In addition, we also benefit others at the same time. And finally we gain the inner validation.
For another thing, work gives us a chance to prove our abilities. If we do a good job, we are telling others that we have strong ability and others will approve and respect us, which means that we gain the endorsement of others.
No matter waht inner validation or endorsement of others is, they are all for proving our existence is meaningful. So everyone ought to try his best to make contributions to the society positively.
E. 英語作文語法修改
Half year before, when I first came to the U.S.,
since I took ENG100, I have taken EAP 121 and EAP 131.
F. 英語作文求語法和句式修改，謝謝
Nowadays, a word called 「competent」 is widely used in the society, which caused stressful atomosphere among people. To accomplish their goals, people try their best to accomplish their work only for more money and fame. Thus, people are easy to get more pressure from both work and life, and that』s the reason why people』s average weight are increasing but their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
It is well-known that more stress may cause people getting more fat. Because some people don』t keep to a regular time to do the proper things they should and may stay up late in the night for hours. For example, my history teacher is 24 years now but since she has taught 30 classes for a week and what's more she haven't the time to relax, however, she』s now gaining more fat and can easily become ill. Learning this from my teacher, we can make a conclusion that work under high pressure not only makes people unhealthy but also gives negative influence on life and regular work..
Moreover, stress also can easily make people get angry, which plays an important part in people』s unhealthy lifestyle. This is because when people get angry, they choose to eat more foods than before to eliminate their bad tempers. Meanwhile, when some people get angry, they may give up doing sports as they should everyday, and this in turn, causes the lack of exercises. By and by, people pay less attention on living a peaceful and healthful life but instead they chose to live a irregular and high-stressed life in the end, which also leads to their attitude towards the world a more negative one.
From what I have discussed above, it』s a great way for people reaching for their hopes. And I think little stress could make people be more successful. So, I reckon that people need a more peaceful life to enjoy health and also to enjoy true life.
修改了一下用詞語法和句型~~希望對你有用~
G. 英語作文修改.就修改語法的，，拜託了。。
Dear Ms.Lee
The new semester has begun.In this semester.I plan to preview before English classes.I will spend thirty minutes to one hour on it in the day.And in class,I will take notes when necessary. I want to be more active in class,so I will ask at least one question every class and be active speaking.
After class,I will follow the requirements of the teacher to do exercises.In every morning ,I will read texts aloud from 7:25-7:45 am except Sunday.
When I have a rest every week,I will practise my oral English 30 minutes twice .And I plan to memorize 6 words everyday except Sunday.
Of course,the review is necessary.I will spend one hour every Sunday to review what has been learned in the past week.
H. 有沒有專門的英文語法修改軟體
易改
I. 哪裡有能夠修改英語作文語法的網站
你去文國網看看
上面幾乎涵蓋所有的小語種
網站：
www.vechina.com
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J. 論文英文怎麼修改啊，我總覺得自己好多語法錯誤。
你覺得自己出現好多語法錯誤，那是你對英語語法學的不精。對於這一方面的問題回就是必須把語法學到位，熟練掌握答：1、十大詞類，每種詞性的用法特點及其在句子中的句法功能和位置。2、動詞時態，十六種時態的用法特點及其句子結構和連用的時間狀語必須明確，運用自如。3、動詞語態，明確動詞的主、被動語態，並且何時用被動語態更貼切。4、動詞的語氣，對於一個句子是用陳述語氣、疑問語氣、祈使語氣還是虛擬語氣，要根據表達的需要恰當定位。5、非謂語動詞的用法，固定短語以及固定搭配等的正確記憶和運用。6、主謂一致的情況。7、簡單句、並列句和復合句的正確使用以及句子成分的正確分析等等。所以，要明確自己的錯誤在哪，才能夠正確糾正錯誤，甚至不再犯錯誤，還要注意中西文化語言表達的不同。 另外，對於論文英文如何潤色，我的建議是要注意正確使用形容詞、副詞等修飾成分和關聯詞，以及長句子，即並列句和復合句以及高級句子的使用，如果一味的使用簡單句子描寫，即使文章中沒有錯誤，但也不會有多大的起色，反而會使文章顯得生硬、蒼白無力，更拿不到高分。因此，寫作時要根據情況適時潤色，根據需要恰當而正確表達。