㈠ 急！！這篇英語作文有語法錯誤嗎
有錯誤。Besides, my hometown develop the eco-tourism, make it popular with ...... 權且不說選詞、用詞，句子結構就錯了。在make 前面加：which即可。內還有，the economy in my hometown have benefited..., the economy 不是看作復數吧？？ 怎麼容用 have 了？？
㈡ 這篇英語作文有什麼語法錯誤
Thursday April 12th rainy
Today is(改為) really too bad!When I opened an umbrella,Ifound my purse is(改為was) missing.there was (改為were)some money and(去掉and) my photos and so on in the purse.I looked for it everywhere,but still can't found(改為couldn't find). I'm(改為I was) very worried to run home to tell my parents。(改為.)They called the police.I hope (改為hoped)they can (改為could)help us(改為me) to find my purse.Few hours later,a police called us to go to the police station to get purse.I looked and sure(改為was sured) this is (改為was)my purse.Thank goodness!I really thanked the police and picked up my purse person.(最後一句話改為I really thanked the police because they picked up my purse.)
㈢ 英語作文中常出現的語法錯誤有哪些
時態 三人稱單數的變化 單詞過去式，過去分詞的變化 固定句型的用法（如：打電回話的固定模式……） 固定片語（答如：there be) 動名詞作主語謂語動詞用單數等的語法 還有like後面接動詞的ing形式，would like+動原這些易混淆的地方……
㈣ 英語作文，盡量不要有語法錯誤。但是可以有一點點
My opinion on rise of population
As the population of the globe rises rapidly, many problems have arisen: insufficiency of grain's supply, high unemployment rate, roaring of house prices and so on. As a developing country, China is a populous nation whose main instry is agriculture. Although a few people are rich, the majority of Chinese are below the poverty line. Anyway,we should persevere in family plan policy to slow the rise of the population in order to relieve the press of shortage of resources.
網路教育團隊【海納百川團】
㈤ 請問這篇英語作文有什麼語法錯誤
When I was in Grade 2 at senior school, I was a positive and hardworking student who had lofty ideals. However, nothing was satisfactory. I tried my best to get good grades in every test, but none of the tests was satisfactory. (At that time—時間不明確) I began to be lazy and negative and began to be addicted to computer games.
One afternoon when the class was over, I stayed on my seat waiting every to leave the classroom. Five minutes later, no one was in the classroom except me. I stood up and stepped up to the platform. I excitedly turned on the computer that was used to play the PPT to play computer games. In the following thirty minutes, my fingers constantly tapped the keyboard like playing the piano. And I totally abandoned myself to computer games enjoying the pleasant sensation the computer game gave me. I was so intoxicated that I didn』 feel the passage of time. Suddenly I was disturbed by a cough. I subconsciously raised my head and looked around. To my surprise, my head teacher stood still by the door staring at me. 」Yang why don』t you go to the canteen?」 he asked.
I falteringly answered, 」I was just studying.」 and left the classroom in a hurry.
In the evening when I was studying I received a message from my head teacher. It read,」Yang, you don』t have to study all day. You can alternate work with rest. I believe you will get good grades. If you have any questions, you can consult me and I will be happy to help you. Let』s make efforts together!」 Sense of guilt rose in my mind. See what I have done. I lied to my teacher! I realized that if I didn』t study hard, I would let not only my head teacher but also myself down. At that moment, I decided to work hard and finish my ideal university to thank my teacher for his care. I would never say Never!(最後一句話，讀不懂)
㈥ 我的這篇英語作文有語法錯誤嗎
句子開頭是不是沒復復制制全？
第一個：訓練營是training camp，你是寫多了個n吧。而且這句後面的從句如果是要表達為了跟人比賽所以邀請人的話我覺得用so that we can比較好，比賽劃船可以用have a boat racing。
第二個：時間和日期在英文里是分開的，反正我是沒見過時間+of+月日這種結構：其次日期的表達是寫先寫月份後寫序數詞的日期，表示某月的第幾天。
改成at 7：00 a.m，april 5th.
㈦ 看英語作文有沒語法錯誤
樓主你好，您的短文很精彩，
您的這篇英語作文沒有語法錯誤，但是有一處單詞專錯誤：There
are
a
lot
of
problem
on
the
earth
such
as
water
pollution
and
air
pollution.（您文章的第屬一行）應該變成=可數名詞變復數時應該加s。
㈧ 一個英語作文，有沒有語法錯誤
你這完全是中式英語，語法錯誤太多了。
㈨ 我這篇英語作文有哪些語法錯誤
1 increaseing--increasing 2 Socreateing Green Campus -- So creating green campuses
3 accord mederning standard--meet the need of modern ecation
4 Creating a Green Campus is not only means that pay more attention in protecting the environment but aslo means that improving the manners and try the best in studying.----Creating a Green Campus not only means paying more attention to protecting the environment but aslo means improving the studying method and trying one's best to study.
5 A clean campus and a positive learning environment could accelerate students studying harder and persist their dreams. -----A clean campus and a positive learning environment could get the students to work harder and be more active.
6 As far as my personal experience and best knowledge,in order to creating a Green Campus ,i suppose that we could do not throw rubbish everywhere and learn our subjects harder. ----As far as I know,in order to create a Green Campus ,I suppose that we shouldn't throw rubbish everywhere and should learn our subjects harder.
㈩ 這篇英語作文有沒有語法錯誤求指點。
總體來說寫得很好，是一篇很有想法的文章，其背後隱含的思考也很有深度。有一些語法和拼寫錯誤，但是瑕不掩瑜。以下為修改建議：
注意時態一致性。文章開頭即說「It was a long, long, and horrible dream」，後面的內容也是圍繞dream展開，所以描述dream的內容都應與開頭句的一般過去時保持一致。如這一句：At the beginning, if anyone is(was) in touble, it would call that person and give(gave) him or her the precise solution. But if they ask(asked) it, 'who are you?', it would never tell them.
拼寫錯誤。最後一句maters應該為matters，要細心哦！另外最後一句整理一下：But later, it(可改this cunning evil，避免it過多） didn't only(可改just) call them when they are(were) in trouble,(.) It would call them anytime anywhere(anytime anywhere可直接用，不加and，表示隨時隨地）, and commanded(command，省略would，與前面的would call保持一致）them to do the matters which they're sick of.
其它搭配和連接問題。WIth the help of '10,000', people seemed to live in a proctive way. It was like a cult, and massive people became crazy about it.
最後再說一次，我很喜歡你這篇作文。後面應該還有內容吧，要寫下去哦！希望對您有幫助；）