英語作文語法錯誤反思

⑴ 英語 英語作文 語法錯誤

你好，

首先，第一句沒有什麼問題，只是我不明白你那句「arouse the attention from all walks of life」是什麼意思。「Prevention of the mountain」可改成「impediment of the mountain」，不內過意容思差不太多，我只是覺得prevention聽起來有點怪。「Excellent scenery」可改成「magnificent scenery」。下一句「detect」改成「notice」吧，有點奇怪。「Has conquer」應該改成「has conquered」。最後一句我也沒看能解釋一下嗎。

第二段第一句把「but」改成「yet」比較好吧。「Dazzing」是啥，你是想說「dazing」還是「dazzling」？「MaYun is greatly robust」把is改成「was」。剩下的就沒啥問題了！我給你推薦一個查英語語法的網站，還蠻好的叫 grammarly.com 你有空可以看一下，可能有些我疏漏的點。

如果有幫助到你請採納一下，謝謝！

⑵ 英語作文檢查語法錯誤（回答後再加分）

An important lesson
I learned an important lesson in a school trip when I was in grade six. Our school always held trips at the end of each semester. All the students waited with excitement for that day. We filled up our bag with snacks the day before the trip, then I went to a beautiful park with all my classmate by school bus.
We followed the teachers to walk around the park first, and the history of the park were introced. Later on, the teachers divided us into a few groups, so we can see more details with smaller groups. However, we got some different opinions about going in which directions. Then my best friend and I decided to visit on our own. There were a lot of trees that are over a hundred years, and the lake looked green with the reflection of the trees. Some people were rowing boats in the center of the lake. We also rent a boat for half an hour; it was so romantic. After that, we wanted to have some new fun. We saw an old man, who had many white pigeons stood in the trees. My friend loved pigeons, so I asked the old man if we can feed the birds. He agreed. We put the corns on the ground and all the pigeons flied around us; they were as beautiful as snow. We had a great time to play with them. The sky was getting dark, and we remembered it was time to go back to the school bus. But we forgot where the entrance of the park was. We walked around and around, there was no one here except us. I almost started to cry. Suddenly, I heard someone calling my name. That was my teacher. I know that the school bus had waited for us over two hours - only two of us were missing. All the teachers were very worried.
The teacher ordered us to write a paragraph on realizing our mistakes. I was so regretful; I learned that I should always listen to the teachers and stay in the group, or it will be very dangerous. I will never do that again.

改完了。表示樓主思路很通暢，但是要注意斷句。句號用的太多了，其實有些地方可以改為逗號的說。(^_^)

⑶ 英語作文 語法錯誤 考研

with the passage of time 應該是沒有這樣的用法的，可能有但是不符合英國人對語言的用法，後面回那句話你用了答兩個謂語： revolves,has aroused,你前面你可以用後置定語或者定語從句表示如revolving,walk of life用way of life會更好，人生各路一般用way,可以把selling去掉，而且用with一般是伴隨狀語，這里用定語從句更好，或者直接插入boasting,realize又成為了這個句子的第二個謂語，你可以用and把句子隔開。
這篇文章主要就是句子中出現多個謂語，以及謀些片語的固定搭配不熟悉，建議多記一些固定的片語，這個作文大概可以打十二分左右吧

⑷ 英語檢討書600字

the mistakes that he would like a lot of things, reflect on a lot of things that they are very remorseful, very air itself committed to the iron law school, but also a profound understanding of the seriousness of their mistakes, committed by their own error is a shame.
schools in a school on the repeated injunctions, has repeatedly stressed that school discipline school to remind students not in violation of school rules, but i did not, then schools and teachers in mind, there is no attention to the teacher to say, there is no emphasis on the promulgation of the important issues in schools, as if they were heeded, these should not be. is also a lack of respect for teachers. teachers should bear in mind that in mind, then, the school discipline school rules promulgated minds.
after that, i would like to cool for a long time, the mistakes i have not only brought trouble to their own, held up their own learning. such an act and i also created the school and its adverse effects, damage to the school's management system. in the middle of the students also led to adverse effects. since i am a person's mistakes, it may cause other students to follow, the impact of class discipline, grade discipline, the discipline of the school is also a kind of destruction, but also have great expectations of their teachers and parents is also a types of injury, as well as other students in an irresponsible parent.
each school will wish to see their students achieve high academic achievers, all-round development and establish a good image, but also to make our schools have a good image. students have every hope that a good school for their own learning environment to study and life. including myself, have to have a good learning environment, but a good learning environment that we have to rely on common maintenance to set up and i myself have made a mistake this time to undermine the school environment that is should not, if the students do each and every mistake, then there is no formation of a good learning environment for students violating school regulations should also be given punishment.
i stayed two weeks at home, and own a lot, but also realize that they committed a very serious mistake, i know, cause such huge losses, i should have for their own pay for the mistakes, i am willing to bear although it is the responsibility can not afford, especially for major colleges and universities in the ecation of people in this error should not shirk its primary responsibility.
i accept criticism in good faith and are willing to accept the deal given by the school.
excuse me, teacher! i made a serious question of principle. i know who my teacher is very angry school. i also know that the students did not breach regulations, not inconsistent with discipline and do their own thing is a basic responsibility, but also the most basic obligations. but i did not even do the most basic. now, made a really big mistake, i am deeply deeply regret it. i will take this incident as a mirror and discipline at all times conct themselves and their criticism and ecation, and consciously accept supervision. i would like to know shame and alert, to know shame and to forge ahead, to remedy the situation of shame as a driving force, to study hard.
i have to go through this incident, to raise awareness of my thoughts, and strengthen accountability measures. or would like to make their own learning, learning for me to be the most important for the survival of future employment are very important. i can see now is very small, i still have the ability to fight. i would also like to fight once again to work hard in the hope that a good teacher to give me an opportunity to students, i will turn over, and really serious to learn, as full of life, this course at home is also delayed, schools the courses have been very tight and very hard to learn, learning to live in the future, i will learn, the classes are making an effort to hurry up.
just remember to enter the school, class and sub-class of teachers have high expectations of me, can learn to accept, but in discipline problems in schools under the iron law of the repeated injunctions, in school discipline and strict environment regulations i committed such a serious mistake, the school should be punished to me, and i do not know how many times saying, principals, teachers, i was wrong, i was wrong. mom, dad and i are wrong, i was wrong

⑸ 英語考試考砸了。要寫英文檢討100字。主要是因為詞彙量不足，語法錯太多，平時不夠認真。要用英文哦！

I am feeiling very sorry for not doing well on my english exam.
I am, hereby, doing some self-reflection.
The reasons that I did not do well on my exam would be the following:
first, lacking of quantity of vocabulary; second, too many grammatical mistakes; and third, the most important one, i did not review well enough.
I, starting from this moment, will put as much time as i should on reviewing stuff i learn everyday.
Specifically, I will review the vocabulary, ensure mastering at least 5 new words per day; and I will make sentences with the grammar I learn.
I'm sure I will do better on my next exam.

⑹ 英語考試反思 500字

尊敬的老師：
您好！
時光匆匆,轉眼間考試也已結束,試卷也發下來了.望著試卷上的分數,我驚訝了.因為這和我應有的水平相差甚遠， 我在此向你說一聲對不起，我辜負了您對我的殷切希望。在這次期末英語考試中我成績十分不理想，不僅傷透了你的心，也讓我無地自容。於是，今天，我懷著十二萬分的愧疚和懊悔寫下這份檢討書，以向您表示我對不好好學英語這種惡劣行為的歉意及打死也不再不好學英語的決心。
早在您剛帶我們的時候，您就已經三令五申，一再強調，全班同學，一定要好好學習，認真學英語。直到現在，老師的反復教導言猶在耳，嚴肅認真的表情猶在眼前，我深為震撼，也經深刻認識到此事的重要性，於是我一再告誡自己要把此事當成頭等大事來抓，不能辜負老師對我們的一片苦心。也應此，我現在開始自我反省.
正如高爾基說過的那樣---當你把一件是看得十分重要的時候，磨難和失敗就接踵而來了。就像在這次考試前，我因為太想考好太緊張導致我焦慮失眠，第二天精神狀態極其不好。但歸根結底，還是由於我學得不牢固，要不然就是精神不好也不會考這個分。憶起當時，我當時就因為太焦慮不好好復習！但，悔亦晚矣，悔亦晚矣！而其他那些諸如粗心大意，沒看清 題目的事情我就不想多說了，我知道這些理由說出來都是不能成立的，因為，這所有的問題都只能歸結於我沒有學扎實，還未能達到一個現代中學生該具有地認識問題的水平。未能對老師們的辛勤勞作做出回報，我越來越清晰地感覺到我是一個對自己，對父母，對老師不負責的人
對於我（們）沒有考好的事情，所造成的嚴重後果如下：
1、 折磨了老師的精神，這樣的折磨可能讓老師工作分心，造成更為嚴重的後果。
2、 影響個人綜合水平的提高，使自身在本能提高的條件下未能得到提高，違背父母的意願，實乃不孝。
這次期末考試，我考的不好，在此深刻檢討，希望以後不要再考這個分數……
學英語，最重要的就是讀，聽，背，只要這三個能100%做到的話，那英語成績，沒有100分，也能95分。 但是，我卻沒有做到，沒有聽，沒寫好，沒背好，什麼都只做了三分之一，導致成績不理想……
此次考試後，我深刻檢討，認為深藏在我思想中的致命錯誤有以下幾點：
1、 思想覺悟不高，對重要事項重視嚴重不足。就算是有認識，也沒能在行動上真正實行起來。
2、 平時生活懶散。如果不是因為懶散、粗心大意、記憶力水平低，我怎麼會把老師教的東西學不扎實？又怎麼會考不出分？
我平時學習不認真，考試成績便很好地回報了我，為此,我決定以後好好學習，天天向上，在此，我訂了一份計劃：
一、學好課本知識。
學習的最重要階段是預習。也就是說在老師上課之前，先得自己學習一下課文，在預習中要盡量主動地解決問題，把不懂的問題記下來，在上課時跟老師、同學一起學習討論。課本要反復閱讀，直到把問題看的透徹了、明白了。
二、注意課外積累。
適當的課外閱讀是很有必要的。進入了緊張的學習階段，我們不可能再有大量的課余時間進行閱讀，因此，閱讀時要有選擇。我們應廣泛瀏覽各種書籍和報紙雜志，從電視、廣播、網路上獲取信息，並有條理的做下筆記。要關心社會生活，了解社會動態，使自己的思想要不斷進步。這樣不僅能使我們積累更多知識，更能豐富我們的生活。
三、加強寫作訓練。
我們學習英語的一個重要應用方面就是寫作。提高寫作能力要從點點滴滴做起。課外積累是寫作的基礎，要學會對文章的細讀，精彩的篇章最好能背誦。如果腹內空空，是寫不出好文章的。除此之外，注意觀察生活、感悟生活，堅持不懈的記日記，有感而發的寫隨筆，都是幫助我們寫好作文的有效途徑。寫好的作文要反復修改，也可以請教老師、同學的意見，精益求精。
但我想僅靠以上幾點還是不夠的,我還就該擁有幾點科學應試技巧.於是,我根據我自己的實際情況想出了幾點.第一點:拿到考卷後,應把考卷整體審視一遍,看一看哪些題比較容易,哪些題比較難.第二點:先從簡單的題做起,把那些好拿的分數全部拿過來.第三點:如果有選擇題不會,亂蒙也要寫上一個.因為如果你寫了你就有的機會,總比沒有機會好.第四點:遇到難題,實在寫不出來的話,就過.不要死死地盯著那道題,而忽略了別的題.第五點:考完後,認真地檢查,看看自己有沒有把題目看錯或抄錯.
在下一次考試中,我一定會盡自己最大的努力做到最好.，以我的實際行動來表明我的決心。
如果你是真心想檢討的話，建議你還是不要抄的好，要自己寫。考不好又有什麼關系，下次努力就好了，我也有沒考好的時候。
祝你好運！！！！

⑺ 求改正我的英語作文的語法錯誤。

1 higher paying -high paid
Professionals who make -get這里make不對
there are several benefits to a good ecation-to 改為for

2 condition was the biggest obstacle at me-at 改為for
So I hardly worked for my living expenses spending in china表意不清，我不知道你想表達內什麼意容思

⑻ 英語考試沒考好反思的英語作文800字

寫作思路：從文章的寫作目的、中心主旨入手，以使文章中心思想鮮明、深刻地表現出來，正文：

But when I saw the bright red handwriting, I felt as if the world was still. A low score is like a sharp sword that deeply hurts my competitive heart, and cold water falls on my face, which makes me more sober. There are two main reasons.

但當我看到那鮮紅的紅筆字跡時，我感覺彷彿這個世界都靜止了。偏低的分數猶如一把利劍深深刺痛了我爭強好勝的內心，也如冰冷的水倒在我的臉上，使我更加清醒。試分析主要原因主要有以下兩點：

Hearing loss is too serious. I am very clear about the reasons for this defect, because I have hardly listened to tapes since the beginning of school, and I find reasons for not practicing listening every day, which leads to a serious loss of marks in the listening part.

聽力部分失分過於嚴重。關於造成這一缺點的原因我是非常清楚的，因為開學到現在我幾乎沒有怎麼聽過磁帶，每天都為自己的不練習聽力找理由，所以導致聽力部分的失分嚴重。

Listening, for good English learners, is not to lose points, but there are no small problems. After this blow, I have made up my mind to practice listening. No matter how late I learn every day, I will spare time to practice. I believe that with my efforts, listening will no longer be a part of lowering English scores.

聽力，對於好的英語者來說是不能丟分的項目，但次卻出現了不小的小題。經過這次的打擊我已經下定決心一定要練習聽力，不論每天學到多晚，都要抽出時間來練習。我相信，經過我的努力聽力會不再是拉低英語成績的部分。

This test is to a large extent the summary of my recent English learning and the exposure of learning problems, so this test has an extremely important role in improving my learning methods.

這次的考試在很大程度上是對我近期英語學習的總結及學習問題的暴露，所以這次考試對我改進學習方法有著極其重要的作用。

Only by finding problems in time and solving them quickly can we be a qualified learner. I believe that with my unremitting efforts, my English score will be steadily improved.

只有及時發現問題並迅速地解決問題才配做一個合格的學習者。我相信，在我堅持不懈地努力下，我的英語成績定會穩步提升。

⑼ 英語作文評析，重點找一下語法錯誤和拼寫上的錯誤(小作文) 詳細說一下錯的地方，謝謝

一，第一句去掉for.像next month，this weekend此類時間短語在句子里作狀語前面一般不加介詞。二，專第三行屬We should 後面having應為動詞原形have，wearing應為wear，因為should是情態動詞，後接動詞原形三，We all welcome to everybody算是chinglish中式英語，建議改為Everybody is welcome.例如平常我們說的不客氣You are welcome.四，建議句語句之間適當加些連接詞，如and之類的就行，是文章顯得像個整體，而不只是幾個句子的羅列。個人淺見，相互學習哈。