Ⅰ 英語 英語作文 語法錯誤
你好，
首先，第一句沒有什麼問題，只是我不明白你那句「arouse the attention from all walks of life」是什麼意思。「Prevention of the mountain」可改成「impediment of the mountain」，不內過意容思差不太多，我只是覺得prevention聽起來有點怪。「Excellent scenery」可改成「magnificent scenery」。下一句「detect」改成「notice」吧，有點奇怪。「Has conquer」應該改成「has conquered」。最後一句我也沒看能解釋一下嗎。
第二段第一句把「but」改成「yet」比較好吧。「Dazzing」是啥，你是想說「dazing」還是「dazzling」？「MaYun is greatly robust」把is改成「was」。剩下的就沒啥問題了！我給你推薦一個查英語語法的網站，還蠻好的叫 grammarly.com 你有空可以看一下，可能有些我疏漏的點。
如果有幫助到你請採納一下，謝謝！
Ⅱ 這篇英語作文有沒有語法錯誤求指點。
總體來說寫得很好，是一篇很有想法的文章，其背後隱含的思考也很有深度。有一些語法和拼寫錯誤，但是瑕不掩瑜。以下為修改建議：
注意時態一致性。文章開頭即說「It was a long, long, and horrible dream」，後面的內容也是圍繞dream展開，所以描述dream的內容都應與開頭句的一般過去時保持一致。如這一句：At the beginning, if anyone is(was) in touble, it would call that person and give(gave) him or her the precise solution. But if they ask(asked) it, 'who are you?', it would never tell them.
拼寫錯誤。最後一句maters應該為matters，要細心哦！另外最後一句整理一下：But later, it(可改this cunning evil，避免it過多） didn't only(可改just) call them when they are(were) in trouble,(.) It would call them anytime anywhere(anytime anywhere可直接用，不加and，表示隨時隨地）, and commanded(command，省略would，與前面的would call保持一致）them to do the matters which they're sick of.
其它搭配和連接問題。WIth the help of '10,000', people seemed to live in a proctive way. It was like a cult, and massive people became crazy about it.
最後再說一次，我很喜歡你這篇作文。後面應該還有內容吧，要寫下去哦！希望對您有幫助；）
Ⅲ 這篇英語作文有什麼語法錯誤
Thursday April 12th rainy
Today is(改為) really too bad!When I opened an umbrella,Ifound my purse is(改為was) missing.there was (改為were)some money and(去掉and) my photos and so on in the purse.I looked for it everywhere,but still can't found(改為couldn't find). I'm(改為I was) very worried to run home to tell my parents。(改為.)They called the police.I hope (改為hoped)they can (改為could)help us(改為me) to find my purse.Few hours later,a police called us to go to the police station to get purse.I looked and sure(改為was sured) this is (改為was)my purse.Thank goodness!I really thanked the police and picked up my purse person.(最後一句話改為I really thanked the police because they picked up my purse.)
Ⅳ 英語作文 語法錯誤 考研
with the passage of time 應該是沒有這樣的用法的，可能有但是不符合英國人對語言的用法，後面回那句話你用了答兩個謂語： revolves,has aroused,你前面你可以用後置定語或者定語從句表示如revolving,walk of life用way of life會更好，人生各路一般用way,可以把selling去掉，而且用with一般是伴隨狀語，這里用定語從句更好，或者直接插入boasting,realize又成為了這個句子的第二個謂語，你可以用and把句子隔開。
這篇文章主要就是句子中出現多個謂語，以及謀些片語的固定搭配不熟悉，建議多記一些固定的片語，這個作文大概可以打十二分左右吧
Ⅳ 求修改 英語作文語法錯誤
One day, Marie prepared to some food to go to picnic with her friends. When they arrived in the forest, they found that the trees were cut without a bird. So they were very frustrated and went home, but Marie was in the woods. Marie sat on the stump and thought: in the past , here were lots of trees, birds' twitter and fragrance of flowers, but now only the bare stump. Marie had a question why people cut down the trees? No trees, humans would be equivalent to lose the umbrella; no trees, birds would be lost ; without trees, the Earth will lose its colors .Others cut down a tree and I will plant trees. Marie quickly ran back home with a number of trees here, she began to plant trees. She seeded and watered every day.It was a snowy year , when it snowed, Marie had these tree umbrellas. Day in and day out, year after year, the tree finally grew up. But one day, Marie came to see the trees, and she was surprised to find that only a stump……
Ⅵ 急！！這篇英語作文有語法錯誤嗎
有錯誤。Besides, my hometown develop the eco-tourism, make it popular with ...... 權且不說選詞、用詞，句子結構就錯了。在make 前面加：which即可。內還有，the economy in my hometown have benefited..., the economy 不是看作復數吧？？ 怎麼容用 have 了？？
Ⅶ 英語作文，修改語法錯誤
Is money everything ?
As is firmly believed ,money is very essential to us. With money we can live in luxurious houses, eat nice food, travel to wherever you like. However, since money can bring us so many things, does this mean that money is everything? The answer is obviously no.
Firstly, money can't help us have true friends, though you may find that the richer you are, the more people would like to be your friends. Friendships of this kind are always not genuine; once you lose your fortune you lose your "friends". Only with sincerity can we make true friends. Money plays an unimportant role in making true friends.
Secondly, money can't buy life. Whether rich or poor, God is equal with everyone, he didn't allow money to turn the wheel of time backward, however rich a person is, he is bound to leave the world. Only these who have a positive attitude to life won't feel regret when he says goodbye to the world.
Apart from what have been mentioned above, there are still many things that money is unable to do. Money can't give us a dependable lover, money can't offer you happiness, neither can money provide you with a healthy body...
Taking all the factors into account, we can finally reach the conclusion that money isn't everything.
寫的不錯，只是語法錯誤不少
Ⅷ 看英語作文有沒語法錯誤
樓主你好，您的短文很精彩，
您的這篇英語作文沒有語法錯誤，但是有一處單詞專錯誤：There
are
a
lot
of
problem
on
the
earth
such
as
water
pollution
and
air
pollution.（您文章的第屬一行）應該變成=可數名詞變復數時應該加s。
Ⅸ 請問這篇英語作文有什麼語法錯誤
When I was in Grade 2 at senior school, I was a positive and hardworking student who had lofty ideals. However, nothing was satisfactory. I tried my best to get good grades in every test, but none of the tests was satisfactory. (At that time—時間不明確) I began to be lazy and negative and began to be addicted to computer games.
One afternoon when the class was over, I stayed on my seat waiting every to leave the classroom. Five minutes later, no one was in the classroom except me. I stood up and stepped up to the platform. I excitedly turned on the computer that was used to play the PPT to play computer games. In the following thirty minutes, my fingers constantly tapped the keyboard like playing the piano. And I totally abandoned myself to computer games enjoying the pleasant sensation the computer game gave me. I was so intoxicated that I didn』 feel the passage of time. Suddenly I was disturbed by a cough. I subconsciously raised my head and looked around. To my surprise, my head teacher stood still by the door staring at me. 」Yang why don』t you go to the canteen?」 he asked.
I falteringly answered, 」I was just studying.」 and left the classroom in a hurry.
In the evening when I was studying I received a message from my head teacher. It read,」Yang, you don』t have to study all day. You can alternate work with rest. I believe you will get good grades. If you have any questions, you can consult me and I will be happy to help you. Let』s make efforts together!」 Sense of guilt rose in my mind. See what I have done. I lied to my teacher! I realized that if I didn』t study hard, I would let not only my head teacher but also myself down. At that moment, I decided to work hard and finish my ideal university to thank my teacher for his care. I would never say Never!(最後一句話，讀不懂)
Ⅹ 英語作文找語法錯誤
基本上無語法錯誤。
if not cost them any money在前面加it does。
最後一句，you'd better後是動詞原形，專否定時not加在had better的後面屬，仍然用動詞原形，to去掉。
這里的buddha是梵文字，意思是菩薩。
希望我能幫助你解疑釋惑。