A. 英語語法修改！（50分！）
好難哪。你那個好像是翻譯器翻得吧。 把語法改了改。結構上潤潤色。專業單詞要你自己把關。多加點分吧。
Wave function collapse, also known as orbital collapse, refers to a phenomenon of the decrease of atomic energy level and the rapid decrease of electron orbit radius with extranuclear electron being affected by effective potential changes. The wave function collapse affects the nature or character of atoms or ions to a large extent.
Using HFR self-consistent field method, the article introces systematically study on 3d electron radial wave function of the Ca Ⅲ isonuclear and isoelectronic sequence ions and neutral Ar to Sc Ar isoelectronic sequence ions and analysis the rules of the 3d wave function collapse ; examination of 4f electron radial wave function of the Xe isonuclear and isoelectronic sequence ions and analysis the rules of the 4f electron radial wave functions collapse; researches of 5f electron radial wave functions of the the Rn isoelectronic sequence ions and analysis the rules of the 5f electron radial wave functions collapse.
B. 幫我修改下語法，英語好的來！要正確的，謝謝～
It always rains when I was on a vacation,I feel very depressed.
I played very happy and enjoy myself to the full,because I want to relax myself.
I had't played a long time,it makes no sense to me.I feel very tired.
These days I miss you very much.Do you miss me too?
Day after day I love you more than ever,my darling.
C. 求英語高手修改英語語法
第一句話不太明白你要說什麼。。。 是要說：」文學小說中，主角的命運是由多種方面決定的，比如作者的意向和讀者的需求。「 嗎？
第二句話：
Nancy had complex character which caused her death destiny have three reasons in this novel.
應該是：
In this novel, the background setting of Nancy's complex character which caused her death have three reasons. 在這部小說中，把南希設定為性格負責的角色，有3個理由。 而正是這種設定導致了南希的死亡。
D. 英語語法修改
World Bank是專有名詞應在前面加the,此外我認為閣下表達的意思不完整，應該說"根據世界銀行的規定或者劃分情況」，後面的belong 是動詞，不可以直接加在is 後面，應該說Pakistan belongs to或者is belonging to 。把這三點改好，就沒問題了。
E. 求助英語高手，英語語法修改！在線等！（50分！）
Constructing a harmonious socialist society isstrategic objective of the Sixteenth Congress of the Chinese Communist Party and the fourth plenary session . Currently there are many disharmonious phenomenon in the development of the economy and society between the human and the nature, man and man, man and society and so on.
不介意我一點點的傳吧！太多了 ，眼睛受不了！
不過，這機器翻譯的太不行啦！ In so many of the disharmonious phenomenons,the disharmony between the development of the urban and the rural areas is an important aspects.One of the main representation is the question of the rural migrant workers .
In the process of the constructing the harmonious society,the rural migrant workers』 employment rights,the ecation of the children and the social security all have been enchoached to different degree.
And helping to solve the problems of the rural migrant workers has became a necessary request of constructing the harmonious society.
The country and the government should bulid and improve the system of publical maintain, strengthen the social security system ,and complete the related legial institutions to solve the problems of rural migrant workers and promote the harmoniously development of the society.
因為不太滿意機器翻譯，我就重新幫你翻了，純當是做做練習吧！當然你能吧分給我是最好了！
F. 求助英語高手，英語語法修改!在線等!(50分!)
Constructing
a
harmonious
socialist
society
isstrategic
objective
of
the
Sixteenth
Congress
of
the
Chinese
Communist
Party
and
the
fourth
plenary
session
.
Currently
there
are
many
disharmonious
phenomenon
in
the
development
of
the
economy
and
society
between
the
human
and
the
nature,
man
and
man,
man
and
society
and
so
on.
不介意我一點點的傳吧!太多了
，眼睛受不了!
不過，這機器翻譯的太不行啦!
In
so
many
of
the
disharmonious
phenomenons,the
disharmony
between
the
development
of
the
urban
and
the
rural
areas
is
an
important
aspects.One
of
the
main
representation
is
the
question
of
the
rural
migrant
workers
.
In
the
process
of
the
constructing
the
harmonious
society,the
rural
migrant
workers』
employment
rights,the
ecation
of
the
children
and
the
social
security
all
have
been
enchoached
to
different
degree.
And
helping
to
solve
the
problems
of
the
rural
migrant
workers
has
became
a
necessary
request
of
constructing
the
harmonious
society.
The
country
and
the
government
should
bulid
and
improve
the
system
of
publical
maintain,
strengthen
the
social
security
system
,and
complete
the
related
legial
institutions
to
solve
the
problems
of
rural
migrant
workers
and
promote
the
harmoniously
development
of
the
society.
因為不太滿意機器翻譯，我就重新幫你翻了，純當是做做練習吧!當然你能吧分給我是最好了!
G. 英語 修改 語法
family：
i have a happy family which including my parent tow brothers and my little sister and i .both of my parent are doctor.they keep very strict when we do something wrong. My father believes that knowledge can change one's fate.So, my father offers many opportunities for me to study .My brother graated from university last year , and now he is working at a Shunde hospital. he is responsible for the younger siblings's tuition expenses.
in my family, we get along with each other very well and I feel so lucky for I have a good family.My parents are the one who I love the most and appreciate the most in the world.
hometown：
I come from Jieyangwhich is a beautiful city of Guangdong province ,it is located in the eastern of Guangdong not far from Shantou.It is a middle-sized developing city, it has a population of 6 million .Our city is famous in food.
People in my hometown are very hardworking and open-minded. They can accept new things quickly, furthermore they like to do their work in a efficient way. They enjoy their colorful life.
I love my hometown. and so do it with its people. They are working hard so as to make my hometown more richer and more beautiful.
H. 修改英文語法... 有中英對照，幫我修改語法...
this passage have many programmer problems.in fact,中文語復法和英文語法差不多制都是，在我看來，對於第一句話，thirty minutes 是名詞性的短語，必須改成「in thirty minutes或者是within thirty minutes」。第二句必須改成「feathe, the most surprising thing,is hair bangs that must cover oneeye」.這句話違背了一句話（無論是簡單句也好還是復合句也好）都必須保證一個主謂賓，其他的成分都是對整個句子的修飾，那句是定狀補成分，在這里the most surprising 就是相當於同位語的成分來修飾主語」feature「.無論你是要到是答案還是能力，主要在於你你自己去挖掘這個英語語法的力量，能力是最重要的，我的回答就是這樣，希望對你有所幫助。
I. 修改錯語法(英語)謝
A) I get up so early beacuse I will travel with my parents
B) 語法上沒什麼 就是比較口語化
C）At eight o'clock everyone begin to sing
D) 語法上也沒什麼錯誤專 不過要是這么說更好點屬
At that movement, all the people have the same dream
E) What a exciting movement
J. 英語語法修改，急，在線等！
When people become angry ,they hve(have) many different reactions .
First ,much(many(people其實是可數的)) people cry loudly and heartily toward their anger .Some crys his(their) eyes out ,others explain tearfully,and shy people weep usually on hiding in a dak(dark) place where nobody find(usually weep their tears in hidden place where nobody can find) .crying can let them to(let sb. do sth去掉to) think back all happens who make them angry, it can also help to forget their angers .
In addition ,when irascible people become angry ,their attitude become out of control and they (will behave with)some abnormal actions .Fo(for) example ,they smash the window(去掉the變成windows) ,shout loudly ,throw clothes or even fight with the othes .Those actions are negative for their living condition and the relation ship with the others ,but that can also help angry people to relax