① 請幫忙看一下我寫的這段英語有沒有語法錯誤。謝謝！！！
第一行：lived可以考慮改成have been living
第二行：had to describe可以改成have to describe
第三行：可以考回慮把the weather of 去掉，直接答改成 the winter is absolutely cold and the summer is always cool but too short here.
第四行：可以考慮不要I guess，因為句頭已經有maybe了
倒數第二行的that Russian的that後面應該接一個完整的句子，不然也可以直接用the Russian and Japanese..
最後一行：in other cities
希望有用~
② 請幫我看一下這段英文有么有語法錯誤~(英語帝進~)
when you told me you would take me to travel to somewhere in china, I was so excited that I cannot sleep. Going travelling for holiday is always my dream, especially with you and my mum, if we can stay together and enjoy the beautiful view, I will feel real happy.
Because of the winter, the weather in Dalian is cold, I think our winter holiday will start by the end of January. when the students in Singapore are on holiday, ah, anyway if I can see you again, that's the best thing
please take care yourself and have a good mood everyday
供你參考,希望你滿意,別忘加點分啊!
③ 誰能幫我看下這段英語有沒有語法錯誤啊
Emergence of the modern era of proct design, nationalization, personalized, human-based and so on.沒有謂語動詞。 Everyday chairs, in addition to the functions should have, giving us the intuitive feeling mainly in the form.giving應該改為give。 It now appears that both our interior or public buildings, mostly single-seat design, no life, it seems to be home improvement and urban design in the accessories, not been given e attention.此句不通，結構混亂。恩both後面應改該跟。額，我想請問一下，你是不是直接用的在線翻譯？這句話，恩，很大的錯誤。額，通篇看下來，句子的邏輯有很大的問題。
④ 幫忙看一下這兩段英語有沒有語法錯誤，謝謝！
the purpose of the pictureis to emphasize the importance of cooperation in our daily life 這句話就有了 to 前面要有個 is 作為謂語，不然第一句話整個看下回來沒有一個謂語（盡管有兩個動詞）。答
So it is sensible for us to choose cooperationin the face of difficulties . 你的意思應該是說面對困難時XXX吧，但face 用得很生硬。後半段可以修改為 in face of difficulties.
Suppose we are work alone, our shortcomings may preventus from getting success. 前半句的suppose 應該改為supposing,同時去掉are 不然一個句子中三個動詞爭做謂語不恰當。
⑤ 看一下這段英語有沒有語法錯誤
This is a queen who is a preety girl. she has many wonderful things,like the arm chair,the car and so on .one day ,"at "eight'o clock,she goes to the zooby her bike .she see many animals.she's favourite animal is rabbit .the rabbit is very lovely and smart.it like eatting cabbges.At nine'o clock.the queen goes bcke home .it's really a happy day.基本上小改了下，不知道樓主有沒有學過過去式，學過的話，可能還版需要再改。權
⑥ (好的80分)看一下以下這段英語，有什麼語法錯誤，請糾正，謝謝
We can find there are about 38 percent students failed the exam from this table. They need to change their __study habits_____(學習習慣回).
And as we know there are about 30% students can』答t sleep well at night. Some students maybe sleep just for a little time like me. It is harmful to them. If they didn』t sleep enough, they will not study well next day. So it is very important to develop a good study habit. We should keep in mind that your habits determine your future.
⑦ 請幫我看一下這段英文是否有語法錯誤，是否讀的通，英語不好的拜託請不要來
這是對表格中的「就職或就勞」這個詞的定義。
This is the definition about the word 「employment」 in the table.
第一欄中的」就職就勞「指的是從事被認為是職業的工作，它可以是被單位僱傭，個體經營或兼職的形式，或者是做個體經營開始前的准備工作或義務活動，原則上，1天的工作時間要多於4小時
原文：By 「employment」 in section1 we mean any kind of work contract in which workday, in principle, is stipulated to be more than 4 hours. It can be considered as an occupation in such forms as being employed by an employer, being self-employed or being employed on a short-term contract. To prepare for becoming self-employed or to carry out volunteer activities is also regarded as 「employment」 if the workday is more than 4 hours.
修改：The word 「employment」 in section1 refers to any kinds of work which can be considered as occupation, including being employed by a company, self-employment (or the preparation before self-employment), part-time job, volunteer activities and so on. But in principle, the working hours of a day should be more than four hours.
（如果是由於你加入了僱用保險或經營個體戶事業而拒絕了職業介紹所介紹的工作，這種情況下，即使你的日工作時間未滿4小時，也被認為是」就職或就勞「）。
原文：(If in the case that you failed to accept a referral from The Hello Work e to becoming the insured of unemployment insurance or becoming self-employed, you will be considered to be in the status of 「employment」 even though you work less than 4 hours.)
修改：If you reject the work introced by Hello Work e to that you have unemployment insurance or have self-employment, you are considered as 「being employed」 even if the working hours is less than 4 hours.
還有，如果你成為了公司的董事會成員，也被認為是」就職「。
原文：In addition, to be appointed as one of the company executive is considered as 「employment」 no matter whether the workday is less or more than 4hours.
修改：In addition, if you are appointed to be the members of the Board of a company, you are considered as 「being employed」 no matter whether the working hours is less or more than 4 fours.
另外，即使沒有工資等報酬，也可以是「就職或就勞「。（符合下述第5項條件的無償義務活動不屬於」就職或就勞「。）
原文：If you satisfy the conditions of the 「employment」 defined above, you shall be recognized to be in the state of 「employment」 even though you obtain no remunerations like salary etc. from it. (Volunteer activity satisfying the following condition 5 is not considered as 「employment」)
修改：Besides, if you satisfy the conditions of 「employment」 defined as above, you shall be considered as 「in the state of employment」 even if you receive no remunerations such as salary etc from it. (Volunteer activity which satisfying the fifth condition below is not considered as 「employment」)
⑧ 幫我看一下這段英語短文有語法錯誤么謝謝
Yes,unlike south,where is(非限定性定語從句) so hot in summer,Mudanjiang has a cozy weather.Though so many people think it』s really cold in the winter, when it comes (though和but不能同時用，一句話內只能用一個，去掉哪一個都可以）,the snow is(用一般現在時就可以) very beautiful .What』s more,people can make a snowman with friends(朋友應用復數形式，根據語義可知） and family outside（outside為副詞，表示在外面，前面不用介詞） and will feel very happy, meanwhile,government will build（will後加動詞原形） a snow castle that tourist and resident can come(can情態動詞，後加動詞原形） here and play together（「來這玩」是漢語式的英語，最好改成這樣，用and連接兩個並列短語),which is all made of ice(be made of由...製作) .And at night ,the colorful light which puts on the ice will all be lit up(用被動形式),you will feel living in fairy tales world.At last I want to say,Mudanjiang doesn』t(第三人稱單數） have too much pressure to live in,and when you get here （here是副詞，前面不用介詞）,you will feel relaxful(relax是動詞，此處應為形容詞） and comfortable,you can don』t worry about the natural disasters here either （否定句中的 」也「 用either）.If you want to see some scenic spots,Jingpo Lack and so many beautiful scenes are (都用復數形式）all the good choice.
大概就改這樣了，有一些可能也不太對，參考著來吧
⑨ 求大神幫忙看一下這段英語有沒有語法錯誤！
考研英語作文吧 但從語法上來講 存在小問題 不過感覺還是可以多看幾個模板 多運用幾種句型
As is subtly portrayed in the cartoon, two young people are having a football match. One of the football player is preparing to shoot, but he thinks the goal keeper is so strong that it is impossible to shoot in. Yet the goal keeper is nervous,for he is afraid that he can』t defend the goal successively, feeling that he is too small and lack of ability to defend the goal. It is obvious that both of the football players are not confident enough in themselves.
在考研英語里應該還是很忌諱用逗號直接間隔句子的
不過考完研半年多了 技巧什麼的也扔的差不多了……
⑩ 看一下這段英語有語法錯誤嗎
could makes 應該是make
, to relax or to go to bed這里or後面的to去掉，避免重復