① 求助~~檢查這篇英語文章的語法錯誤
People used to say」 Behind every successful man there『s a woman.」 It means that women often sacrifice their own career to help their husbands or sons. In China, the position of women in the society has been changing since the founding of the People』s Republic of China in 1949. Today, instead of being housewives, more and more women are going to find their own professions. Now, women are playing important roles in various fields. But do we satisfy only because we have a job? No! We also need respect, need social recognition!（need respect and social recognition，要氣勢的話，可以用排比句，^_^）
From my point of view, the most important thing we need to do is to be independent--- both physically and mentally. I have read a book named< Jane Eyre >. This is a story about a special woman who has been struggled（been struggling） for her ideal life fearlessly. The story can be looked（可以用，view，see，或是consider這類要深度考慮的詞） as a symbol of the independent spirit. In the story, Jane Eyre was economic independence---- she got her job to be a tutor after long years of struggle. More importantly, Jane Eyre was sentimental independence. When she came to know her husband had got a wife already, she made up her mind to leave. She is Jane Eyre: An independent woman, a model for every liberated woman.
What』s more, a liberated woman must have confidence in herself and proud of being a woman. We must believe that we can stand beside men not behind them. We have the same chance for success. We have the equal right to refuse to work with men who do the same work for a different pay（who do the same work but get a different pay）.
Now, women have made up a large part of work force almost in every field, and it has shown that we are superior to men in many ways. I do hope one day the sentence will become」 Beside every successful man there『s a woman.」 --- Though it still has a long way to go.
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呵呵，寫得不錯
男女本該平等
② 寫英語作文怎麼檢測自己語法呢
I will very appreciate that you may give some help to me (for my study) in the later days.
Please allow me to introce myself here. 這句我覺得可以刪掉，要麼放在 第一段第一句後面。
likes to read a book -->Something like reading，taking a walk and so on.
although she is a woman, but full of wit,-->although引導的從句不能與but, however連用，但可與yet, still連用. 這個句子可以改成： even though she is a woman , but she is ful of wit..
Though I am quiet, but like to like-minded friends, learn together... 這個句子。。。。。。
I hope that they will be able to study abroad --> they ??
個人意見，僅供參考，不能保證百分百正確哦~
③ 請幫我檢查這段英語文章的語法。
After I had graated from junior high school, I came to America with my mother. She helped me find a high school to continue my ecation, and helped us settle down, Then, we hardly spend any time together and I was always alone at home. She rarely comes home for dinner. I often lean on the window still and search for her, in the hope to see her coming home. However, for many nights, she hadn't come home before I went to sleep.
④ 英語語法檢查
語法上 錯誤很多 不一一說明了 詳細看我下面寫的範文
段落上 只有開頭段 和 主體段 沒有結尾段 就內容而言，也沒有 作文的 起 承 轉 合 應有的結構
句式上 簡單句太多 缺乏長句 復雜句 以及特殊句式 來支撐你的論點
用詞上 簡單詞太多 基本都是初中詞彙 沒有亮點詞彙和加分詞彙
邏輯上 很混亂 第一段你說想寫捕鯨業 第二段卻看不出你要寫的內容
最後一點 我學英語到今天 一看到這種捕鯨類的topic 立馬想到正反兩個方面論證
今天第一次看到Lz把這種題目當記述文來寫，我覺得很有創意，受教了。
不過我覺得這種類型還是寫成議論文比較合適
總之問題很多 建議不管你是初中 高中 還是 大學 還是該多看看範文
ok，問題說完了，下面上正餐
In recent years, it is said that Australians are aware of stopping whaling and protecting whales which living in the Antarctica, while Japaneses keep whaling in the Antarctica so dramatically that even was warned by Australian Administartions.Consequently heated news have been going on about whether whaling should be forbiden.In this passage, I would like to discuss both sides.
In terms of whale fishery,It is evident that the golden age of whale fishery is over,which in particular,the main purpose on whale hunting is to get the valuble oil,meat,and bones of whales,while at the same time, these precious proportions have been instead with the counterparts of high technology inventions.Furthermore,the violence in killing of whales is a challenging to the contemporary sosciety,which the peace,equality,and friendly affections to the nature and what are contained in nature are often announced in media programme.
By contrast，I admit that definitely the government budgets is benefit from the instry chains in some area of the world such as Japan. Howerver,I have to say it is not an efficent way to solve national finance and economic by killing whales in long terms. As a eyewitness,we apparently see how Japanese neighbourhood,China, develop the national power and enhanced the level of living conditions as a staggering rate without whaling.
In summary, on the basis of the above factors,I am convinced that whaling should be banned and whales should be protected, and in addition, I wish that people are more aware of knowing whales.
這篇範文是我剛寫的
時間： 也就花了半個小時
標准： IELTS（雅思）的句式模板和論證形式 + 大學四六級的詞彙
說明： 開頭段 和結尾段 都是 標準的IELTS模板 第二段主體段我只寫了兩個論點 第三段讓步段我只寫了一個論點
當然我可以寫的更詳細一點，用詞也可以更復雜一點，但是太累，另外我覺得LZ的水平如果拿更深奧的文章來忽悠你有悖實際 這個文章已經夠用了
僅供參考
⑤ 英語文章求檢查語法和潤色什麼的。。
第一段寫的
we
all
know
some
criminals
are
dangerous,
裡面
去掉some，因為既然是犯人就應該是dangerous的.
their
(space)
teacherS.
第二內段
being
accused加空格。容So
that
gives
a
chance
to
the
criminals
to
rece....
3段
there
are
many
such
places,
去掉such.i
think
it
is
away,
a
和
way家空格。
注意你寫的東西
好多單詞中間都沒有空格空開，
然後你的第一句開頭寫的和結尾不搭
如果你說
penalty和reform要一起的話
開頭應該大概這樣寫
我給你個比方
Above
all,
I
can
not
completely
agree
with
either
of
the
two
ways(or
practices),
i
think
they
should
be
combined.
這樣寫才收尾呼應。
⑥ 請幫助檢查以下英語文章的語法錯誤
第一篇似乎存在不少非語法錯誤～讀不通了～
第二篇：「版one kind of the cake」中的the多餘；
「權difference of it and 」改為「differences between Brownie and 」更好； 「lies in」改為「are that」； 「and must be」改為「and it must be of"； 「will also」前缺主語； 「the almond or peanut」改為「almonds or peanuts」； 「flavouringly」這個單詞似乎不存在～～汗～後面的那個above用得也讓人不明所以～～； 「Bring」改為「Take」； 「eaten」去掉。
累死了～追加點分吧～
⑦ 急急急急，英語專業本科論文語法錯誤檢查，四千詞左右，可以談價錢。
畢業論文可以找師哥師姐
⑧ 英語作文，語法檢查
很多錯誤。。。。。把你要表達意思寫出來，我給你寫。
⑨ 幫我檢查一下英語作文，語法錯誤什麼的 十萬感激
xin hua senior school,has a history more than 100 years, with 48 classrooms and about 300 wonderful teachers, where near the mountain and with a river across it.
第一句復很別扭的，你制沒必要為了弄長難句而寫這種句子。可以這樣：Xinhua Senior School- an excellent school with history of more than 100 years- is armed with 48 classrooms and 300 wonderful teachers. It is near a mountain with a river across it.
spend more time in doing sth with more practice so that they are able to know
⑩ 翻譯的英語文章語法檢查
改為如來下：第一句自你要表達的意思如果是「我對交朋友沒什麼感覺」的話，你的這一句語法非常混亂。told用得不對，impression的表達也不對。可以直接說I
am
not
interested
in
making
friends.
其他表達也比較拖沓。修改如下：Anyone
can
be
my
enemies
or
friends.Although
I
know
that
"People
gather
sitcks"這一句，是想表達「眾人拾柴火焰高」吧？這里英語是有固定用法的，你既可以照字面說：The
fire
burns
high
when
everybody
adds
wood
to
it;
也可以直接用英語表達同樣的含義，說：great
things
may
be
done
by
mass
effort。所以最後這一句應該改成：Although
I
know
the
speaking
"The
fire
burns
high
when
everybody
adds
wood
to
it".
But
I
also
have
my
own
idea
"The
flying
eagle
is
by
itself."