Ⅰ 一個對我影響最大的大學同學英語四級作文範文
I have met so many friends in my college life. They have exerted
enormous influence on my life. However, one of my most impressive
friends is my roommate, Li Ming.
In the class meeting on the first day of school, Li Ming did not impress us at all. We started to notice him because
he was always late for classes. We were thus impressed by his laziness.
I came to know him and his situation because we were roommates and
spent much time together: his mother was seriously ill and sick abed in
long-term, his father left him and his mother mercilessly. Hence, it was
him that shouldered the heavy burden of taking care of his sick mother
supporting the whole family. Finally, under great pressures, he balanced
his life and study perfectly: he was no longer always late, took good
care of his mother and even won the scholarship many years in a row.
The experience of Li Ming can be one of the most convincing cases of
the power of persistence and will. He left a deep impression and imposed
a rable influence on me. Indeed, friend such as him can be regarded
as asset and property in our life. We have rights to choose our own
friends,but we should also be prudent and sensible enough to choose
friends who can bring us 「positive energy」.
在我的大學生活中,遇到了很多朋友。他們對我的人生產生了重大的影響。然而,我印象最深的朋友是我的室友李明。
在開學第一天的入學班會上,他沒有給全班同學留下任何印象。李明讓我們開始認識他,是因為他總是上課遲到,同學們都以為是個懶惰
的人。因為我們是室友,平時的交往比較多,後來我才慢慢了解到他的情況:原來他的母親罹患重病,長期卧床,父親殘忍地離開他們而去,照顧生病的母親和養家
重任只能由他來承擔了。令人驚訝的是,在重壓之下,他將自己的生活和學業平衡地很好:他不再總是遲到,將媽媽照顧的很好並且連續幾年獲得獎學金。
李明的經歷是堅持和意志的作用的最有說服力的例子之一。他給我留下的印象無法磨滅,他對我造成的影響持續深遠。的確,這樣的朋友被視為我們生活中的財富和
資產。我們有權利選擇自己的朋友,然而交友的過程中,我都應該足夠理智和謹慎,選擇那些能夠給我們帶來正能量的真正的朋友。
Ⅱ 英語四級作文預測:工作和家庭哪個更
男人有家還要搏」。男人們認為,事業才是最重要的!沒有事業的人生是空白的,而沒有家庭的人生只是遺憾的!顧家是當然的,但是,應以事業為重!事業就是溫馨家庭的基礎,家庭的保障。沒有事業,就沒有真正幸福的家庭。沒有良好的事業基礎,就沒有家庭的必要的物質基礎。沒有良好的事業心,就沒有高貴的責任心。沒有事業心的男人就不會成為好的人夫,好的人父,也就不會有女人愛了。事業有成,必然物質豐富,如此就能促進生活質量地提高,生活質量提高了,也就促進家庭和睦。
同時我也認為,家庭和事業幾乎是同等重要的,地位相應也應是平等的,是相輔相成的。事業是基礎,家庭是港灣。事業,是人們追求物質的基礎,家庭,是人們疲憊時休憩的港灣。只有事業,不算真正的成功,因為無人與你分享,只有家庭而沒有事業也不算真正的幸福,因為缺乏個人價值!沒有了事業,家也相對來說不會有穩定的經濟基礎,家庭失去了應有的物質基礎,家當然也就沒有了幸福與安全感。
A man has a family to fight". Men think that career is the most important thing! A life without a career is a blank, and a life without a family is a pity! Family oriented, of course, should be based on business! Business is the basis of a warm family and the protection of the family. Without career, there is no real happy family. Without a good career foundation, there is no necessary material basis for the family. Without good enterprise, there is no noble sense of responsibility. Without the dedication of the men will not become a good husband, good father, also won't have a woman love. A successful career is bound to enrich the material, so that it can improve the quality of life, improve the quality of life, and promote family harmony.
At the same time, I also believe that family and career are almost equally important, and the status should be equal and complementary. Career is the foundation, family is the harbor. Career is the basis of human pursuit of material, family is the resting place for people to relax when they are tired. Only business is not really successful, because no one to share with you, only the family and no career is not really happy, because the lack of personal value! Without a career, the family will not have a stable economic foundation. The family has lost its e material base, and of course there is no sense of happiness and security.
Ⅲ 英語四級作文範文(兩篇)
Credit Cards
Personal credit cards are becoming more common in China. Banks and other financial institutions are encouraging their customers to change the way they buy things. Credit cards, otherwise known as 「 money」, are being offered on very good terms to encourage the change. Consumers will be able to 「buy now, pay later」, and many see this as an advantage.
But people need to be careful. There are dangers associated with credit cards. Some people find it very easy to exceed their budget. They are tempted to purchase goods that they do not really need, and can become quickly overburdened by debt. The credit cards often charge a high rate of interest, which exacerbates the problems for these people.
However, used wisely credit cards can improve the quality of people』s lives. They can give people access to money to meet sudden unplanned expenses. Properly handled, they can let people control their expenditure and the monthly statements provide a record of where their money has gone.
Ⅳ 如何提高英語四級作文水平
一、「功能段落」突破寫作。
「To be or not to be: that is a question.」莎士比亞如是說。沖刺階段,背模板還是不背?我的答案:背,但絕不是盲目的背。
整篇背誦模板不是最有效的方法,因為模板的寫作思路是固定的,然而很多時候試題的命題思路可能與所背模板思路不同。因此,可能導致「所背非所考」,甚至導致文不對題,生搬硬套。
但是,無論英語四六級寫作話題如何變化,一般都對應三個或兩個漢語提綱。只要按提綱要求去寫相應的內容段落,就做到了緊扣主題。歷年寫作提綱可以總結為六種功能段落:現象描述、危害分析(弊)、原因分析、建議措施、觀點闡述(觀點的本質為利弊:支持方觀點等於分析「利」,反方觀點等於分析「弊」)、意義闡述(利)。
下面,本人結合近年真題展示功能段落內容:
2011-06:Online Shopping
1.現在網上購物已成為一種時尚
2.網上購物有很多好處,但也有不少問題
3.我的建議
解析:本次英語四級對應四個段落分別是:現象、觀點(利、弊)和建議。該類作文可以被稱之為:觀點對比型作文,對比的內容重點在利弊分析上。
2010-12:How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?
1.目前不少父母為孩子包辦一切
2.為了讓孩子獨立,父母應該……
解析:該題目只有兩個提綱:現象和建議,可以添加一個功能段落:原因。這樣這篇作文就是「三段論」的形式:提出問題(負面現象描述)、分析問題(原因)、建議措施段。2010年6月CET也屬於該種那類型。
2009-12:Creating a Green Campus
1.建設綠色校園很重要
2.綠色校園不僅指綠色的環境……
3.為了建設綠色校園,我們應該……
解析:該段對應提綱如下:意義闡述(即分析:利或好處)、現象描述(解釋綠色校園環境之外的因素)、建議措施段。
綜合以上分析,六種功能段落已經涵蓋住了以上考試的所有提綱。因此,如果能夠掌握住六種功能段落的寫作實際就掌握了四六級考試寫作考題的最本質特徵。那樣的話,無論題目如何變化,我們准備都是有的放矢的。反觀,死背模板容易導致生搬硬套,甚至文不對題。
二、寫作短期提分方略
在了解了英語四級考試在命題特點的基礎上,考生在沖刺階段最需要准備的是兩個內容:思路和表達。思路解決怎麼寫的問題,表達解決寫什麼的問題。如果拿到一個作文題目,你知道應該按照什麼思路去寫,又知道應該寫什麼表達,這篇作文就已經成功了一半。
思路點撥:在本人所講授的基礎班、強化班、精品班等不同班型上都曾講授到現象、原因、建議、利弊、觀點分析時的邏輯:「一個中心,四個基本點」。具體內容:「以孩子(學生、事件)為中心,以家長(老師、相關人員)、家庭(學校、管理機構)、社會、法規(道德意識)為基本點」
試舉例說明:以2010年12月真題為例,主題為子女教育話題。談到子女,必然涉及到家長,孩子和家長組成家庭,千千萬萬的家庭組成社會,是什麼在維護著社會穩定?法規和道德意識。這樣我們就找到了可以入手去分析的五個方面:孩子、家長、家庭、社會、法規道德意識。如何使用這五個方面?如分析家長溺愛孩子原因時至少可以從家長意識、家庭結構變化、社會背景角度去分析。
同理,2010年6月話題為學生英語學習,可從學生自身、教師教學、學校教學政策角度去分析。那麼,如果主題不是孩子也不是學生,怎麼分析?2011年6月主題為網路購物,分析時就以該事件為中心,可以想到相關人或物(買方:customers/ clients /shoppers;賣方:online shops/ stores;中間方:支付寶、淘寶等),其管理機構(政府)、社會背景,相關法規是否健全等。
「一個中心,四個基本點」的分析邏輯形成一種立體化網狀結構,考生運用該思維模式,只要能想到其中兩到三點,思路問題即可迎刃而解。建議所有有緣相識與北京新東方課堂、四級寫作模板班、四級翻譯突破班的童鞋們首先將該思路背誦下來,以備將來可以在考場上靈活應用。
表達積累:表達分為四個層次:詞句段篇。
其中篇章層面只要按照提綱要求去組織文章即可,因此篇章方面不足為慮。段落方面按照「功能段落」的六種形式去識別,也小菜一碟。
詞和句是表達的基本元素,也是語言質量的根本體現。在新東方教書的這四年中和三次參加四六級考試閱卷的經歷中,看過無數學生的作文,深感學生詞句方面能力的薄弱。同時結合過往教學中的成功案例,提出沖刺階段表達積累的高效途徑。
1. 背寫:思路+表達。
很多同學考前也在背,背的滾瓜爛熟,脫口而出,覺得自己水平很牛!上了考場也順利將文章寫了出來,卻得了一個很低的分數,為什麼?因為單詞都拼錯了。沖刺階段,請牢記:口頭背誦的再好不等於能夠寫對。背寫是提高寫作和翻譯唯一,也是最有效的方法。
那麼背寫什麼內容哪?答案是思路和表達。思路上文中已有論述,遣詞和造句的表達方面應該緊密結合功能段落來背誦有效句式和用詞。考生不必刻意追求適用難詞,但可以將常見詞彙稍作替換:如,
exceedingly, extremely, intensely替換very;an army of/a great many/a host of替換a lot of;advancement替換development; positive, favorable, promising(有希望的), perfect, pleasurable, excellent, outstanding, superior替換good; give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger替換cause; harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that,替think; beneficial, rewarding替換helpful; bear in mind that替換remember; enjoy, possess替換have; shopper, client, consumer, purchaser,替換customer
表達精彩體現在三個方面:遣詞、造句、連貫。大家可以結合以下例文感受這三個方面:(聲明:試題命制、範文均為筆者原創,謝絕轉載!)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minute to write a short essay on the topic of To Help or Not to Help?. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow:
1. 幫助別人是一種美德
2. 但是幫助陌生人容易使自己陷入麻煩
3. 我的看法
首段闡述意義:In contemporary society, it should be a virtue for indivials to offer help to those who are in need. Without this morality, it is impossible for the society to be named 「Harmony」. Apparently enough, it is of great importance/ significance/ value/ benefits for people to help each other, especially in difficulties.
二段描述負面現象:However, a host of people find it hard or troublesome to offer helps to strangers. We have been frequently informed that(A typical example is that)a warmhearted man --who lends a hand to an old lady—gets himself in trouble. Since helping others may trigger trouble, a few people refuse to offer help timely. And if we let/allow this situation to continue as it is now, we would not know where civilized society will be in the forthcoming future.
尾段我的看法(或建議):As college students, we should bear in mind this virtue. However, it is essential that regulations should be worked out to support this virtue. In addition, it is suggested that we should offer aid to strangers in a safe way, such as dialing 12o or110 for help. If we try our utmost to do so, the future of our society/ civilization will be promising, hopeful and rosy.(以上範文字數為202詞,請自己酌情刪減即可)
三、沖刺復習安排建議。
總體原則:先背再寫、階段總結、適當模擬。
先背再寫:基礎較差同學一定要先背一些東西,然後模仿該作文的思路和表達去寫。可以背誦的內容有:本人上課時講義上要求大家背誦的功能句式和教材相關範文。背寫的目的是積累語言表達實力,同時練習書寫的公正和優美。建議書寫較差的考生買本英語字帖練一下書寫,也許你會有意外的驚喜。
階段總結:每過一周就要問自己幾個問題:所背誦的表達可以用來寫什麼類型的文章?該類文章的相關詞彙或表達有什麼?關鍵詞如何避免重復?如果解決不了,請參照講義上給大家總結的各類功能段落的功能句式和表達。請記住:沒有復習,沒有鞏固。
適當模擬:在熟練掌握背寫了六種功能段落的思路和表達之後,可以結合適當題目在寫作中運用所講所背所總結提分詞彙、句式。建議大家能夠靈活運用,做到一例多用。如我在多個班上講過的關於英語學習的話題作文,可以寫13次四級考試的作文。
題目:On English Learning
提綱:1.英語學習很重要;2.英語者所面臨的困難;3.如何學好英語
In contemporary world, English learning has gained great popularity and it is of great significance. (主題句) Firstly, based on a survey, a majority of tourists acknowledge that they prefer to speak English when traveling around the world. (調查法表述)Secondly, compared with the poor English speakers, good English-speakers are superior in many ways. (比較模板句式)
However, English learners may have a variety of difficulties or troubles in their learning.(主題句) For example, it can be noticed that a large number of students have difficulty memorizing words. Sometimes, it is difficult for them to understand the rules of grammar. In addition, though some are good at reading or writing, they can not express themselves freely in English.
Then, how to get a good command of (學好) this language? I am convinced that practice makes perfect. Only practice can enable one to speak and write fluently. And it is also through practice that one can master the rules of grammar and remember words, and there is no other way. (強調句式)
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Ⅵ 英語四級考試作文模擬試題:誠信
Write an essay based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should:
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and then
3) give your comments.
You should write on ANSWER SHEET 2.
範文:
This cartoon displays a very soothing scene. An old lady bought some stuff from a convenience store, and just at the moment when she was about to leave, the store keeper ran out to her because she had paid an extra two yuan. Though that is not a big amount of money, I believe the old lady must be greatly impressed by the keeper’s honesty.
It is without doubt that the cartoon aims at addressing a serious problem prevailing in today’s society, that is, the lack honesty in the field of business. For instance, many businessmen are so obsessed with making profit that they simply forget that they are supposed to serve the people with best procts and services. Therefore, there emerge fake procts, cheating services and unfulfilled promises. In contrast, the kind-hearted keeper of this drawing practices honesty in every detail of her work. Her attitude gives customer the sense that her proct and service are of first-class quality, which would guarantee her more customersand credit.
The store keeper’s practice is exactly what we should advocate among all businesses. That is because, honesty not only renders clients temporary satisfaction, but can also build long-term customer trust. The latter is one of the key factors for market expansion and business success.
譯文:
這幅漫畫展現了一個非常令人欣慰的情景。一個老婦人剛剛從一家便利店中買了一些東西,在她正要離開的時候,店主跑出來還給她多付的兩塊錢。盡管這點錢數目不多,但是我相信這個老婦人一定對店主的誠實留下了深刻的印象。
毫無疑問這幅漫畫意在指出當今社會一個普遍且嚴重的社會問題,即商界缺乏誠信原則。具體而言,許多商人一心想著謀取更多的利潤,而忘記了他們應該為顧客提供最好的產品和服務。因此就出現了諸如假冒產品、欺詐服務、無法兌現的諾言等。相反,這幅圖中好心的店主卻在工作的每一個細節中實踐誠信的原則。她的態度讓顧客感覺到她的服務和產品是一流的,這就保證了她擁有越來越多的顧客、更好的名聲和信譽。
這個店主的行為正是我們應該在商界中努力實踐的。這是因為,誠信不僅僅給了顧客暫時的滿意感,而更能夠建立長期的顧客信任。而後者是市場擴張和事業成功的關鍵因素之一。
閃光詞彙及片語:
soothing: adj. 撫慰的, 使人寬心的
convenience store: 便利店
be about to: 將要,正打算
unfulfilled: adj. 無法行使的,無法履行的
first-class: adj. 一流的
render: v. 給予,給予或使可獲得,提供
temporary: adj. 暫時的,臨時的
expansion: n. 擴張,擴充
萬能句型:
This cartoon displays a very soothing scene.
It is without doubt that the cartoon aims at addressing a serious problem prevailing in today’s society, that is…
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Ⅶ 英語四級作文
有論點就會有分的,只是拓展比較多而已,只要是圍繞交通方式的改變寫就不算跑題,過過過!