英語四級作文道歉信

『壹』 請問08年6月的英語四級作文技巧

Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
◇第一段思路點評：
表明歉意
◇語言點提示：
① I am writing to apologize (say sorry) for :道歉信的常用開頭句式
② assign: 分配，指定，布置
③ e；到期的，預期的
④ I』m sorry for the inconvenience it would bring to you: 另一句常用句式
◇第二段思路點評：
解釋原因，雖然不是真的給人道歉，但是理由還是要充分的好。
◇語言點提示：
① referential: 用作參考的
◇第三段思路點評：
表明盡快完成論文，並表示以後會按時交論文
◇語言點提示：
① try my best to….. in the future: 道歉信常用結尾
（二）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of
Income Gap. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 有些人認為收入差距的存在是合理的；
2. 有些人認為收入差距的存在是不合理的
3. 收入差距對社會的影響
●審題概述●
議論文，根據題目要求文章可分為三點：收入差距的合理性；收入差距的不合理性；對社會的影響。在敘述第一、二點時，可適當地的展開一兩個小點。注意各點之間的銜接，以及論證的邏輯。
● 範文●
Income Gap
1There has been a heated discussion over the growing income gap now. Some people hold that the gap is natural because it 2reflects different contributions that different people make in their work. 3In their view, those people with high income work hard and long. Besides, these people bring high 4efficiency, and create more wealth. Accordingly, they deserve high pay.
1On the other hand, there are always some people who view this gap negatively. They believe that a lot of crimes happen as a result of this income gap. Some people make so little from their work that they 2risk taking criminal acts to get rich. In fact, experts have long found out that most cases of crime are directly related to low income. There is 3another point to 4back up a negative view against income gap. For most people, income gap may destroy the satisfaction that they obtain from work.
1As anything has two sides, so has the problem of income gap. Personally, I believe that this gap may 2motivate people to compete better in job market. When this gap is growing too
wide, however, our government should make some policies to 3get rid of its negative consequences.
◇第一段思路點評：
收入差距的合理性
◇語言點提示：
1 There has been a heated discussion over the growing income gap: 直接點題
2 reflect 意為「反映」
3 in one』s view 意為「在某人看來」（分析觀點時常用片語）
4 efficiency 意為「效率」
◇第二段思路點評：
收入差距的不合理性
◇語言點提示
1On the other hand：意為「另一點、另一方面」（提出相反觀點，與上文銜接）
2risk doing something 意為「冒險做某事」
3another point: 提出另一小點
4back up 意為「支持」
◇第三段思路點評：
收入差距的影響
◇語言點提示
1As anything has two sides, so…... 議論文常用句式
2motivate：意為「激勵，刺激」
3get rid of：意為「擺脫，除去」
（三）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of
Green Olympics. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 現在社會上有很多環境污染和精神污染的現象，提出你對「綠色奧運」的看法。
2. 為什麼要提倡「綠色奧運」。
3. 提倡綠色奧運，從自己做起。
●審題概述●
本篇為議論文，針對各種污染現象提出對「綠色奧運」的理解。可分為三部分：對「綠色奧運」的態度，當然是支持了；其次，提倡「綠色奧運」的原因，可以從環保的好處說起；最後，從自己做起，怎樣支持「綠色奧運」。
●範文●
Green Olympics
Olympic Games, as we all know, is a historic sports meeting. "Green Olympics", is one of the three 1themes of Beijing 2008 Olympic Games. At present, people"s life is being flooded with exhaust gas from automobile, waste water from factories and so on. Owing to these 2phenomena, we should 3advocate "Green Olympics", and I am positive of this point.
1Two possible reasons are as follows. Firstly, environmental protection benefits people"s health. In terms of increasing number of trashes around us, such as white plastic bags, one-off cups and chopsticks, it is sensible of disposing of them reasonably. So we ought to use clean technology, 2renewable and recyclable materials. Secondly, environmental protection is crucial to our country, and even to the world. In recent years, natural disasters, like tsunami in Indonesia and snowstorms in China, are partly e to the 3disturbance of the environmental balance.
1In conclusion, as college students and the young generation, we should try our best to advocate "Green Olympics". The 2008 Olympic Games will be a green and unique Olympics.
◇第一段思路點評：
列舉一些污染現象，提倡「綠色奧運」
◇語言點提示
1theme：意為「主題」
2phenomena: （phenomenon 的復數）「現象」
3advocate：「倡導」
◇第二段思路點評：
提倡「綠色奧運」的原因
◇語言點提示
1possible reasons are as follows：常用句式，列舉理由
2renewable and recyclable: 「可更新，可循環的」
3 disturbance: 「擾亂」
◇第三段思路點評：
「綠色奧運」從自己做起
◇語言點提示
1In conclusion：最後總結
（四）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a Letter. You should write at least
120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
給小何寫信感謝他接待你在雲南旅遊，並且回憶美好的旅行經歷 ，同時邀請小何來你的家鄉做客
●審題概述●
這是一封感謝信，一般要表明感謝的事由。本題可分三部分：感謝小何在雲南的接待；回憶在雲南的經歷；邀請小何來做客。
●範文●
June 17th ,2006
Dear Xiao He,
1Thank you so much for having invited me for the tour of Yunnan, your home province. I had a 2fantastic time with you and your family. Your great 3hospitality will be unforgettable throughout my life.
When I think of those 1gorgeous places of 2scenic beauty you showed me around, 3I couldn』t be more delighted. And the pineapple pie Grandma prepared for me is 4out of this world. I had never had so delicious food! Indeed, I am still missing your 5snug log-cabin, small and 6cozy, which was turned into my dream house in 7fairy land those nights.
Would you come to Harbin, my home town, some time this summer vacation? Harbin, a beautiful place frequently 1referred to as 2Oriental Paris, offers a picture of another kind. I can assure you another pleasant tour. My family and I 3cannot wait to see you here.
Yours,
Li Ming
◇第一段思路點評：
感謝小何在雲南的接待
◇語言點提示
1Thank you so much for doing something: 感謝信常用開頭
其他常用句式： Many thanks for your kind and warm help.
I am greatly indebted to you for your help.
Thank you for your generous hospitality.
Thank you for your kindness to have done me a favor.
2fantastic：意為「極好的」
3hospitality：意為「好客，熱情」
◇第二段思路點評：
回顧在雲南的經歷
◇語言點提示
1gorgeous：「很好的，華麗的」
2scenic：「風景的」
3I couldn』t be more delighted：強調很高興
4out of this world：「出色的」
5snug log-cabin：「干凈的小木屋」
6cozy：「舒適的」
7fairy land：「仙境」
◇第三段思路點評：
邀請小何來做客
◇語言點提示
1refer to：「提到，指的是」
2Oriental Paris：「東方巴黎」
3cannot wait to do something: 「迫不及待」
（五）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic
Advertisement. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 廣告的作用
2. 廣告的形式多樣
3. 廣告的誇張性
●審題概述●
這是一篇說明文，用說明的表達方式來解說事物，闡明事理。寫好說明文，不僅要抓住特徵，注意條理，而且要巧妙運用說明方法，像下定義、舉例子、作比較、分類別、列數字、打比方等。
●範文●
ADVERTISEMENTS
Advertisements are forcing their way into people』s lives. People refer to advertisements in their daily lives because they are consumers. The advertisers are usually 1manufacturers, retailers and salesmen. Their 2merchandise needs to be advertised to bring it to the attention to the customers. Thus nearly every proct is advertised in some way. To a large extent, good advertising leads to success while bad advertising can mean failure.
There are many ways to advertise and 『ads』 come in different forms. Newspapers carry advertisements. Some procts are publicized on TV and radio which bring them into notice of a wide audience. 1Billboards also carry advertising. Advertising is a big instry now and many 2agencies have been set up to 3furnish a variety of forms..
However, advertising is not always truthful. A proct is often 1misrepresented. The advertiser 2exaggerates the benefits of the merchandise he wants to sell. Thus, he misrepresents the truth. The consumer 3falls victim to such advertising. Millions of people have bought advertised procts and have 4been dissatisfied with them.
◇第一段思路點評：
廣告的作用
◇語言點提示
1 manufacturer: 「製造商」； retailer：「零售商」
2 merchandise：「商品」，集體名詞，這里用作單數
◇第二段思路點評：
廣告的形式：報紙，電視等等
◇語言點提示
1Billboard：「廣告牌」
2agency：「代理」。Advertising agency：「廣告代理」
3furnish：「提供」
◇第三段思路點評：
廣告的誇張性，眾人對廣告的懷疑
◇語言點提示
1misrepresent：「誤認，錯誤表現」
2exaggerate：「誇張」
3falls victim to：「成為……的犧牲品」
4be dissatisfied with：「對……不滿意」

『貳』 怎樣寫一篇好的四級作文，有必要背別人的作文嗎但是我背了就忘了

英語作文，是分類型的，包括應用文(建議信、詢問信、咨詢信、道歉信、邀請信和通知等)、議論文、說明文、記敘文等等。所以你首先要知道它的每個類型是怎麼來寫的比如說應用文寫作中的建議信。可以寫成三段式的也可以寫成五段式的，一般首段是寫作目的，需要開門見山。中間段落需要闡述三條相關建議，每條建議後要闡述建議原因和好處。最後一段再次總結建議並希望建議有效。
第二點,你需要背一些萬能的句型。比如建議信中我們表達寫作目的有這樣的一些句型。
I'm writing to you to give my advice on...
Delighted to receive your letter in which you mentioned you have trouble in doing sth.,I am more than previleged to share my advice with you.
等等句型。
第三點，要注意自己的英文書寫，可以使用數學練習冊或者筆記本、活頁紙等橫線格來進行練習。先上網搜索相關字體的26個字母的寫法，有斜體、圓體、衡水體等，然後先練習26個字母，覺得不錯了，可以練習寫上面背過的句型，每天不寫多，只寫三到五句，每句寫五遍，力求每個單詞，每句句型都寫得美觀大方。這樣即練習了書寫，也復習了句型。
最後，要每周找一篇四級作文進行作文練筆，自己用背過的句型來寫作文，最好是限時寫作，盡可能把握時間和寫作節奏和思路，注意書寫。
希望對你有用。

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『伍』 今年英語四級考試 作文 讓給朋友寫一封信 表達他對我的好 我緊張沒看到寫信 我就是寫成了

大學英語四級考試作文（附範文）1．書信例1：感謝信（1） 給小何寫信感謝他接待你在雲南旅遊（2） 回憶美好的旅行經歷（3） 邀請小何來你的家鄉做客June 17th , 2006Dear Xiao He,Thank you ever so much for having invited me for the tour of Yunnan, your home province. I had a fantastic time with you and your family. Your great hospitality will be unforgettable throughout my life. When I think of those gorgeous places of scenic beauty you showed me around, I couldn』t be more delighted. And the pineapple pie Grandma prepared for me is out of this world. I had never had so delicious food! Indeed, I am still missing your snug log-cabin, small and cozy, which was turned into my dream house in fairy land those nights.Would you come to Harbin, my home town, some time this summer vacation Harbin, a beautiful place frequently referred to as Oriental Paris, offers a picture of another kind. I can assure you another pleasant tour. My family and I cannot wait to see you here. Yours, Li Ming例2：投訴信（1）陳述你對學校圖書館的不滿（2）列舉圖書館存在的問題（3）希望能夠得到改進September, 11Dear President,I am a sophomore with the Department of Law. My name is Wang Ming. I am writing to you today to intimate you with something undesirable that I have found in the University Library. You may or may not realize how much our library, the landmark of our university or even of our town, weighs in our minds. It is a place we are most proud of and where we like to spend most of our time. In such an honorable place we have noticed recently some phenomena which hurt our eye. Some seats in the reading rooms are 『permanently reserved vacant seats』, that is, some students 「occupy」 some seats they never come to use. What a terrible waste of valuable resource! Some other students are too noisy, talking among themselves, leaving mobile phone beeping anytime. And some library staff is ill-mannered and rude and not helpful most of time. These and other undesirable things have already done damage to the fame of our university and caused a lot of inconvenience to the users.Dear President, we hope that something can be done to change and reverse the current situation. Let our cozy, comfortable, quiet, effective library come back.Best wishes Yours sincerely,2．記敘文 例：A Welcome Back Celebration1.楊玲生病，情緒低落.2.班上同學准備cheer her up.3.舉辦一場歡迎party.Yang Ling is my fellow classmate and friend. Recently she had a terrible condition and has been hospitalized for over a month. She was depressed, sad and downhearted. She told us so many things are working against her, and she didn』t know how to change and redirect herself.The day before she was released from hospital, we, some of her friends decided to give a surprise to cheer her up the next day. That night, she came back, shoulders bent and head fallen. She was so deep in her bad mood that she didn』t realize that her dorm is the only one in the building that is dark. She turned the key in the lock and opened the door when the room was suddenly lit like a bright day. Her eyes sparkled with delight and surprise. She saw all her classmates crowded in this tiny room. Everyone was holding something in his hand, flowers, fruits, cards, cheering, 「Welcome back!」 She was so moved that she burst into tears. And smile returned to her pretty face. She said 「Thank you all.」 heartedly.Ever since that day, happiness and delight have stayed with her. Life is so wonderful. 3．論說文例：Buying or Borrowing Books（1） 有些人認為書應該借來看（2） 有些人認為書應該買來看（3） 你的選擇？Buying or Borrowing BooksBooks can arm us with knowledge and information we need to make success of life. There are generally two ways in which we can have access to books: borrowing or buying. While millions are borrowing books, I still think buying them best suits me and gives me the greatest pleasure. Many people choose to borrow books. For one thing, borrowing books can save us huge amounts of money. For another, if we borrow books from the library or friends, we normally have deadline to finish them. And consequently we can read more books in a limited time, just as a famous Chinese saying goes, 「books can not be read unless borrowed.」I believe that advantages for buying books are more obvious and compelling. Firstly, we can keep the books as long as we wish. Secondly, we can take whatever notes on the margin of the pages of the books. Finally, the process of selecting and keeping books can be a great fun.4．口語作文例：工作總結演講1. 簡述上周五系學生會搞的一次以環保為主題的到某一湖區拾trash的活動。2. 上述活動的效果及存在的問題。3. 你的建議。My fellow students,Last Friday, the Students』 Union of our Department organized a clean-up project to Zhongshan Lake. The purpose of this project is to enhance(加強)the environment awareness of general public. Late in the afternoon around 4, a group of 35 volunteers went to the park where we pick up the trash(垃圾)left by some tourists. As head of the group, I would like to report to you on the event.Actually, we did a wonderful job. When we were collecting the trash near the lake, many people paused to watch and then came to our help, showing considerable appreciation and support. But our work still left some to be desired. For one thing, since our project started late in the afternoon, hours were not long enough to attract enough people as we had predicted. For the other, lots of people passed by apparently not knowing what we were doing. But for these two drawbacks, our project could have been much better and more effective.So, following are two of my suggestions: next time we have similar activities, try to start earlier, say in the morning. In this case we can put in more hours. And also, as we are getting along, we can put up some posters to tell people what we are doing and call their attention to environment protection. Thank you.5．圖表作文A： staying at homeB: travelingC: doing social investigationD: other waysFrom the two charts, we can see that in the past ten years the students who go traveling and do social investigations ring vacations have increased greatly while those who stay at home have decreased a lot.There are several reasons for the changes. Firstly, with the development of economy, many people have become better off. Students can get financial support from their parents for traveling. Secondly, tourism has greatly developed over the past ten years. Many new scenic spots have been built and exploited. In addition, the students today are expected and encouraged to participate in facing the real world. In this way they can obtain the necessary experiences required when they go job-hunting upon graation.From the changes in the charts, we can predict that more and more college students will make their vacations interesting and worthwhile by going to the outside world instead of staying at home. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Studying Abroad. You should write at least120 words following the outline given bellow:1. 近幾年來越來越多的學生選擇留學2. 出現這種現象的原因3. 這種現象可能帶來的影響四級模考參考範文：Recent years have witnessed a phenomenon that more and more students swarm into foreign countries to finish their ecation.They have not considered our homeland as the unique place to enrich their knowledge any more. Instead, some excellent boys and girls whose financial condition is fine simultaneously began to pay their attention on some oversea prestigious colleges and institutions and dream to get degrees there.There are several reasons to cause this change. First of all, with the globalization and much more frequent communications with developed countries, most of the people in China get to realize the wide gaps in many fields, especially in science and technology,between China and western countries. They thirst for studying aboard to get ready better for the fierce competition in the job-hunting market. Moreover, the life in foreign countries is usually attractive to young people and studying aboard may satisfy their curiosity.Besides, the rapid development of our mother country and the remarkable growth in our income make going abroad to study available, which is almost impossible to average Chinese students in the past.The move-out of our students changes our society a lot.On one hand, being students in foreign universities will widen their view and offer them more possibility to get favorite jobs. And consequently their success will draw more latecomers to do the same thing.On the other hand, if the majority of them will not go back to China to work in the future, our fatherland will probably suffer a significant loss which may be difficult to be estimated by money.畢業的問題 1、Studying Abroad or Home (1) 現在有越來越多的人想出國留學。 (2) 出國留學與在國內學習的對比。 (3) 你的觀點。 Nowadays, with the development of science and technology, moreandmorepeople want to study abroad. There are students from colleges and universities, from the middle schools, from the primary schools, and people from all walks of life. What difference does it makebetween studying abroad and studying home Though many students are crazy about going abroad to pursue their higher ecation, I think studying home is preferable. For one thing, you don』t have to take foreign language tests such as TOEFL and GRE . This can save you a tremendous amount of time, money and effort, allowing much of your energy to be devoted to your academic foals. In addition, if you study home ,you can stay with your family and old friends. Meanwhile , while studying home ,you can enjoy the kind of intimate friendship and comfortable family atmosphere which you can only dream of in a foreign university , where you will be accompanied by your own shadow most of the time. For these reasons, pursuing one』s higher ecation at home is a more realistic and sensible choice. In a word, I prefer to study home. The Intensified Postgraate Entrance ExaminationIt can be seen from the graph that there are more and more students attending the postgraate entrance examination year by year. Compared with before, the rate of the student taking part in the postgraate entrance examination becomes higher and higher. In the meanwhile, the admittance rate is also rising. What are the reasons for this and the possible consequences On the one hand, there are three reasons for this. First, the job market becomes more and more competitive. As a result, most people want to find or exchange for a better job by obtaining a high degree. Second, most college students want to pursue their study after their graation from the undergraate. Third, with the development the science and technology, what has been learned at college is not enough to meet the need of the society. On the other hand, there are some possible consequences of this. For one thing, most people will be force to pay more attention to the examination than to the improvement of their true ability. For another, it will have a negative effect not only on the indivial but also on the society in the long run.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a Letter of Apology. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese: 1. 表達自己對晚交論文一事的歉意。2. 說明未能按時交論文的原因。3. 表示自己將盡快把論文補交上並表示以後將按時交作業。這是一封道歉信，寫的時候要遵循道歉信的一般模式：開篇直奔主題，然後說明原因，最後提出可能的補救措施。第一段，對晚交論文及對此造成的後果表示歉意；第二段，說明理由（可信的理由，而不是隨便應付老師的借口）；第三段，表示盡快完成論文。【範文】A Letter of ApologyDear Mr. Wang,①I am writing to apologize for my late homework. The paper which you have ②assigned to us last Monday was ③e this Friday, but to my regret, I haven』t even started it yet. I feel really sorry for not handing in the paper on time and ④for the inconvenience it would bring to you. I have caught a serious cold last week and the doctor asked me to stay in bed for a week since I was very weak and the weather was very cold these days. Therefore, I couldn』t go to the library to get the necessary ①referential information which was needed for my paper. As a result of this, I have not started writing the paper yet and could not hand it in on time.Fortunately I have finally fully recovered. I will finish the paper as soon as I can and ①try my best to hand in homework on time in the future. Sincerely yours, Li Ming◇第一段思路點評：表明歉意◇語言點提示：① I am writing to apologize (say sorry) for :道歉信的常用開頭句式② assign: 分配，指定，布置③ e；到期的，預期的④ I』m sorry for the inconvenience it would bring to you: 另一句常用句式◇第二段思路點評：解釋原因，雖然不是真的給人道歉，但是理由還是要充分的好。◇語言點提示：① referential: 用作參考的◇第三段思路點評：表明盡快完成論文，並表示以後會按時交論文◇語言點提示：① try my best to….. in the future: 道歉信常用結尾Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Income Gap. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese: 1. 有些人認為收入差距的存在是合理的；2. 有些人認為收入差距的存在是不合理的3. 收入差距對社會的影響議論文，根據題目要求文章可分為三點：收入差距的合理性；收入差距的不合理性；對社會的影響。在敘述第一、二點時，可適當地的展開一兩個小點。注意各點之間的銜接，以及論證的邏輯。● 範文●Income Gap 1There has been a heated discussion over the growing income gap now. Some people hold that the gap is natural because it 2reflects different contributions that different people make in their work. 3In their view, those people with high income work hard and long. Besides, these people bring high 4efficiency, and create more wealth. Accordingly, they deserve high pay. 1On the other hand, there are always some people who view this gap negatively. They believe that a lot of crimes happen as a result of this income gap. Some people make so little from their work that they 2risk taking criminal acts to get rich. In fact, experts have long found out that most cases of crime are directly related to low income. There is 3another point to 4back up a negative view against income gap. For most people, income gap may destroy the satisfaction that they obtain from work. 1As anything has two sides, so has the problem of income gap. Personally, I believe that this gap may 2motivate people to compete better in job market. When this gap is growing too wide, however, our government should make some policies to 3get rid of its negative consequences.◇第一段思路點評：收入差距的合理性◇語言點提示：1 There has been a heated discussion over the growing income gap: 直接點題2 reflect 意為「反映」3 in one』s view 意為「在某人看來」（分析觀點時常用片語）4 efficiency 意為「效率」◇第二段思路點評：收入差距的不合理性◇語言點提示1On the other hand：意為「另一點、另一方面」（提出相反觀點，與上文銜接）2risk doing something 意為「冒險做某事」3another point: 提出另一小點4back up 意為「支持」◇第三段思路點評：收入差距的影響◇語言點提示1As anything has two sides, so…... 議論文常用句式2motivate：意為「激勵，刺激」3get rid of：意為「擺脫，除去」

『陸』 雅思G類 作文道歉信 請大家看看這份作文答案能拿多少分

評分我不會，但是一下些許需要提出：

1. 格式我沒看出來 （比如齊頭式的話每一段都頂格版寫，然權後每一段空一行，稱呼和正文之間也應該空一行，最後的sincerely和正文以及和Dave之間也要空一行，Sincerely 後面家逗號）

2. 中間句式較為單一，還有一些詞性（如importance）或者單詞(realize)的誤用，以及固定搭配的誤用 But now……that……

   以上意見僅供參考。

3. 用詞及造句均低於大學英語四級水平。
   

『柒』 英文道歉信

To JA (agencies)
The absence from activities of workshop for successful skills on January 16

I am XX from Grade 4, XXX middle school. I am really regret for not attending activities of workshop for successful skills on January 16 after signing up, which might waste the human resources of your institution, and miss a good chance to enrich myself. I am so regret that I am writing to apologize to your institution. I sincerely hope that I can still participate other activities held by your institution in the future, and that my slip won't have any bad impact on other students's participation. Sorry for the inconvenience caused.
All the best,
XXX from XX middle school,

January 16, 2010